Reviewer: yukikiyokiralacus
Date: 12/21/08 16:50
Chapter: Chapter I - Chicago P.D. Blue

I really do like this story. Man, I disappointed from the looks of it, that it has been abandoned for almost a year. Oh well, I hope you had an idea of a good ending. I glad Harry and Ginny still have feeling for each other.

Reviewer: raveralways
Date: 08/25/08 2:07
Chapter: Chapter 24 - Amanda

I really love this story. It's been sitting in my favorites foerver. Is it abandoned? Is there a conclusion somewhere else? Someone please! please! please! tell me there is.

Reviewer: bubble
Date: 02/01/08 13:04
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Dinner at Hogwarts

ha accidentally hit the submit button....sry

um what was i going to say??

oh ok idk if you read the last book but some stuff is out of date- not that u should change anything that would b a pain- its just fred---sad...............

uh well lupin to i guess............
but yea well fred..........

nevermnd this review is kindof pointless....

Reviewer: bubble
Date: 02/01/08 12:58
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Dinner at Hogwarts

oh yeah, see i forgot you killed hagrid too.......

Reviewer: bubble
Date: 02/01/08 12:55
Chapter: Chapter 11 - Zabini

um i dont have a lot to say, its wonderful, of course! I really like harrys personality, he like mellowed out or something, humbled maybe? idk but hes very dumbledore, i love it, he grew out of the hot headed stage that he was in during the books, and i like it, i absoultly love this story, its been in my favs for ages and i just havent gotten to read lately, im rereading these next few chapters before i go on and i think ive forgoten a lot of stuff, like totally forgot about ginny and the potions ingredients thing..... i really like amanda too.....

anyway love the story-simply YUM!!!!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 12/02/07 13:20
Chapter: Chapter 24 - Amanda

Well, I guess I'll have to wait for the next bit since there are no more chapters left. I'm afraid I still find Harry infuriating. Maybe I can only think of him as a teenager so his personality doesn't suit. I'm so glad Ginny's been brought into this, I like her, she adds a sense of fun and mischief. Hope to be reading Ch25 soon. Thanks.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 12/02/07 12:22
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Trust

Now Harry sounds like Dumbledore. It was almost as if he were channeling Dumbledore's spirit when he made that last statement.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 12/02/07 12:08
Chapter: Chapter 20 - Matters of Life and Death

God! How could they be so daft as to leave his body just lying there and not even checking he was truly dead?! And if Harry cares so much for Amanda, why would he leave her alone in a house thats defenses had been compromised? He could have given her a dreamless sleep potion and apparated her to Hermione's or something. Sorry, I used to do this when theings went wrong in the books, but hind sight is pointless really.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 12/02/07 11:51
Chapter: Chapter 19 - No Substitute for Cold Steel

Although Harry is annoying in this story, there is no denying that this fic is fantastic! It's nothing like a Harry Potter book, it's a whole world away and yet it still has the capacity to make me laugh, cower and sigh with relief, sometimes simultaniously. Those new dementors are terrifying! Originally only the patronus charm worked, nothing else, so it's good that these modified ones can be killed with muggle weapons. Having said that it's worse in a way because you have to get close to them, endangering yourself even more. !!!!!!!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 12/01/07 19:25
Chapter: Chapter 8 - Reunion

What a stroke of genious sticking Umbridge in, and the toad reference, hilarious! I wonder who the other figures in the fountain of honour are? I don't think I like this postwar ministry, it's a bit too much like they're still at war, do they even know how to have fun? Can't Hermione palm some of her paperwork off on the lower ranks since there are so many? I think the best thing Ron and Hermione can do is elope to the states and leave Harry to it, he seems to be coping fine alone.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 12/01/07 19:05
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Potter Manor

Amanda, now theres a puzzle. I thought perhaps she was Snapes daughter, then I thought of Malfoy because of the grey eyes. Then I thought of Voldemort and perhaps the evil she is attempting to help Harry defeat is herself, maybe not. Harry's home, although grand, sounds far too pretentious. I like the sound of the Flora Borealis though, they would be so soothing to watch.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 12/01/07 18:36
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Comparing Notes

Harry is so infuriating! Right now all i wish i could do is punch him, and I abhore violence. I appear to have been right, Ron is losing his sense of self an reverting back to Harry's friend, shame that.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 12/01/07 18:17
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Midnight at the Ministry

I thought Harry's eyes were green, not hazel. Oh and Peeves having a cousin, very amusing, I wlways thought it odd that he was the only one.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 12/01/07 18:06
Chapter: Chapter 3 - Autopsy

I found this very surreal. Harry doesn't seem like Dumbledore to me, he still gives me the feeling of Sherlock Holmes, Ron being the bumbling companion Dr Watson. I would've thought Ron would be cleverer since he was a top auror and has been acting as a muggle detective. All I can assume is that being in Harry's presence again he's reverting to the position he held at school.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 12/01/07 16:04
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Crime Scene

I don't know why, but i'm getting a Sherlock Holmes and Dr Watson feel from this fic. I knew from the beginning that Richard Wesley was Ron, Why he ended up on his own I'll never know though. And why are he and Harry acting as strangers? Maybe they've not seen one another for years, but you'd think Ron'd be a bit more surprised when his supposed dead best friend turned up alive and well. Sorry, I really love the fic, would just appreciate a bit more back story.

Reviewer: Marauder4Life
Date: 11/30/07 20:57
Chapter: Chapter 24 - Amanda


Reviewer: Marauder4Life
Date: 11/30/07 19:13
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Midnight at the Ministry

Yay! That's Ginny! I know it is!

Reviewer: Marauder4Life
Date: 11/30/07 19:09
Chapter: Chapter 3 - Autopsy

This is really good!! I wonder if Ginny comes into play...

Reviewer: childofpotter13
Date: 11/22/07 0:15
Chapter: Chapter 24 - Amanda

God! I've read your story so far like a million times. I love it, but not so much you. You NEED to get the chapter updated right away. 'Cus if you don't the Harry Potter gods will banish you for letting such a great story like this go to waste. In fact, your other story is superb too, but you've only got TWO chapters up on that one. Well, I'm off to go and read this for the millionth time 'cus it's so good. Keep on writing.

Reviewer: Meralie
Date: 11/01/07 17:10
Chapter: Chapter 24 - Amanda

that is amazing. PLEASE update soon! And put some more hr/r and h/g action, honey!!

Author's Response: I'll update, yeah, but define "action."

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