Reviews For Cruciatus Cursed
Reviewer: Shadow2007
Date: 05/18/07 14:30
Chapter: Cursed

OOPS. Sorry about the other review I was rereading :D I hadn't realized that I had already submited a review :P Ummm.... Yep. That's it I think :D Chao

Author's Response: Haha that's just fine with me^^ I haven't seen any rereaders that have left another review yet, I don't tink, so it is very flattering^^ Thanks much!!! Ta^^ ~Miss Muh-hoony

Reviewer: Shadow2007
Date: 05/18/07 14:25
Chapter: The Dark Arts

URG!!!!!!!!! EVIL EVIL EVIL CLIFFIE!!!! Please Please Please Update ASAP!!!! THis is one of my fav stories :c ! By the way... I really like it how you gave us a few little peaks into Severus' mind... Very interesting :D I hope that we'll see more of him.

Author's Response: YES! EVIL EVIL EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!!! Haha sorry, I just had to do that^^ I am trying right now, but my next chapter is coming a bit slower thanks to those darn exams. They are now OVER!!! so I will be back to working ASAP, you can be sure^_^ And you totally will see more Snapey! He's too cool not to go into depth with^_^ Thanks bunches Shadow!! ~Miss Moony^^

Reviewer: Eloisa Beccafichi
Date: 05/13/07 9:26
Chapter: The Dark Arts

another amazing chapter but would you please hurry up with the next one and good luck with the exams i have just finished mine!

Author's Response: Semidouble! ANd thanks for the vote of luck! I am quite sure that I will need it for my AP Chemistry exam >.< Why I took that, I may never know... Yay! I hope you did well!!! Thanks again! ~Miss Moony

Reviewer: Eloisa Beccafichi
Date: 05/13/07 9:23
Chapter: The Dark Arts

another amazing chapter but would you please hurry up and post the next chapter please i cant wait any longer

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I am actually about halfway through the next chapter and have been really trying to get it done. The only thing is that I will be dead from exams Tuesday and Wednesday, then add in a six page paper for my history class that is DUE Wednesday, and you have a figuratively deceased Moony. That bugs me, as I really want to write <_< Oh well. Thanks and I will try my best to get it up right after exams!!! ~Miss Moony

Reviewer: Shadow2007
Date: 05/10/07 22:06
Chapter: The Dark Arts

URG!!!!!!!!!!!!! BAD BAD BAD CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Author's Response: Wow there are a lot of exclamation points there XD No worries, already halfway done with chapter 13 and I hope to get it up soon! You'll have to be patient with me though, as I am really busy for the end of term. Exms are coming up and are already frying my brain from reviewing for them. So, when I can, I will finish the chapter and post it. That should be within the next week or two, so yeah. Thanks a bunch and I am so glad you like it so far, Shadow2007!! ~Miss Moony

Reviewer: Ms_Wolfsbane
Date: 05/03/07 18:57
Chapter: The Dark Arts

HUH! Is Harry ever gonna be Harry again? Dumbledore, the stupid fool!

Ginny and Snape should do something. Who cares if Snape's spying position is put at risk? He's the only one who can kill Voldemort! Snape should teach Harry Occlumency (properly, this time,) and then show him memories.



Author's Response: Gee I dunno dear^^ You'll see. And yeah, Dumby is rather dumb (haha) isn't he? Though you know that isn't much coming from me, but hey... ; ) I am trying to finish 13 soon so no worries there will be an update! Thanks again and see you next time! ~Miss Moony

Reviewer: Ms_Wolfsbane
Date: 05/03/07 18:07
Chapter: Cursed

Oh my G-d! What's gonna happen to Harry?

Fantastic writing! Okay, I know I'm a bit delayed on reading it, but I'm a picky reader.

Great job!

Author's Response: Haha! Thanks so much, Wolfie! And yeah, so am I so no worries there. I wish I could tell you but....... can't. Sorry^_^ You'll see soon though. I hope. XD Thanks a bunch hun! ~Miss Moony

Reviewer: Elvenlaughter
Date: 04/29/07 21:34
Chapter: The Dark Arts

Ouch. I don't know what I'm hoping for right now... It's getting really intense. Still, Harry is reluctant, and that bodes well for him. I hate Bellatrix and company. Grr. Please update again soon, I love this story.

Author's Response: It bodes well indeed^^ And yeah, I will just say now that I am not a very big fan of her or the rest of them either. But, they are crucial to the story, so I guess I can tolerate them for now ; ) Thanks so much and I hope to have the next chapter up as soon as possible! ~Miss Moony

Reviewer: LoOnY_for_Harry
Date: 04/29/07 18:19
Chapter: The Dark Arts! Moony, sometimes you are so evil about these cliffies... grrr... Anyhow, great chapter! I was on edge the whole time... I can't believe Harry actually performed the Unforgiveable Curses! He didn't really kill Wormtail.. did he? I just can't imagine him doing that (well, I can, with pleasure, but not under Voldemort's orders!)! As many times as I gasped in this chapter, I must admit I smiled wryly when Harry used hatred of old Voldy (as opposed to the good people) to perform the Killing Curse... could he be regaining his memory, perhaps? Can't wait for chapter thirteen! Absolutely awesome job, as always!

Author's Response: You know, I have a lot of people saying that he is getting his memory back. Well, the question is will it just pop into his head one day or will he get it back memory by memory? Aye there's the rub ; ) Yeah I had a hard time writing him doing all of that under Voldykins' orders, so I know how bad it must have been to read. I am glad you liked it though and am working on thirteen as I type!!! Thanks a bunch for another great review and see you later, LoOnY!!! ~Miss Moony^^

Reviewer: AprilPotter
Date: 04/24/07 22:01
Chapter: Initiation

*mouth drops open* You made Harry a Death Eater!?! Well that was unexpected.

Author's Response: Yeah I did. Sorry about that, but you will see what happens very soon. Thanks so much hun! ~Miss Moony

Reviewer: parselmouth
Date: 04/24/07 18:06
Chapter: The Dark Arts


Author's Response: I'm sorry about that, but it was the best place to end this time. I am working on the next one, though, so no worries. Yet. ; ) Thanks! ~Miss Moony

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 04/21/07 13:05
Chapter: The Dark Arts

holy beep
I don't really like what's happening but it's well written and I am dying to find out what's next.

Author's Response: Awww, well thanks for keeping up even if it is kinda dark right now. I know that it isn't really doing okay for Harry and company right now, but I am pretty darn sure that you are going to enjoy what's to come. There isn't much more than maybe four chapters left now, so you will find out soon. Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you like what comes next!!! ~Miss Moony : )

Reviewer: patelnotpatil
Date: 04/19/07 11:02
Chapter: Cursed

Lol, you are more than welcome to use Riddle dust...if you mention my name in the author's note! hehe. Also, do me a favor and go read and review my story Cutting Dow His Shadow! *shameless promotion* hehe

Author's Response: Haha! I will definitely do that for you, no worries^_^ And hey, there is nothing wrong with some promotion, shameless or not! ; ) I'll go read and review right now! ~Miss Moony

Reviewer: quidditchlover
Date: 04/17/07 16:12
Chapter: The Dark Arts

noooooooooooo another cliffhanger!!!!!

Author's Response: Yeeeeeeeeeeeees another cliffhanger!!!!!! Hee, so sorry about it dear. 13 is coming up soon, though, so no worries! Thanks for reviewing! ~Miss Moony

Reviewer: bite
Date: 04/17/07 14:19
Chapter: The Dark Arts

Good chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you.^_^ ~Miss Moony

Reviewer: emmaholloway
Date: 04/17/07 11:45
Chapter: The Dark Arts

if Harry killed Wormtail i'll kill you!! Its just... wrong.
Although, if he managed to kill Wormtail because he focused all his anger on his hate for Voldemort, surely that means he will be able to kill Voldemort also?? asuming he can be killed of course.
On another point. Harry is supposed to realise that he hates Voldemort and that Dumbledore and Ron and Hermione and Ginny are on his side. It's just crazyness. So i hate you for that.
But i dont. Update soon and i will love you forever Emma x x x

Author's Response: What is wrong with me? Hmm... do you have time, dear? ; ) And you won't kill me. Then you would never see the end of the story! : p Awww don't hate me. I'd be sad! : ( Though I totally understand if you did! Hee I hope to have it up very soon so I hope it is to your liking, hun. Thanks so much Emma!!! ~Miss Moony, evil-author extraordinaire! *evil laugh*

Reviewer: patelnotpatil
Date: 04/17/07 10:29
Chapter: The Dark Arts

CREEEEEPY!!!!!!! Harry is doing the Dark Arts!!!!! Uh, holy shit? Pardon my french. Lol. But OMG yikes, I kind of feel bad that Wormtail just died (I think)...wait, what am I talking about, no I don't! It's fitting that Harry should kill the man who betrayed his parents. Stupid rat. Anyways, I bet you Voldemort's not so happy that Harry's so powerful!!! Competition...oooo...I mean, he has to realize that Harry is going to get his memory back at some point and then all that raw power is going to be channeled into rage towards HIM. What's going to be left? A pile of Riddle dust. Let's hope that Harry doesn't kill anyone else before that happens though...

Author's Response: Hee why thank you for the change in languages, hun. Very entertaining! XD Now don't count your chicks before they hatch! We dunno if he killed him or not. Though it does look that way doesn't it? : ) Riddle dust? Oooh is that patented or can I use that in future?? ; ) Thanks a bunch and I hope you enjoy the next chapter! ~Miss Moony

Reviewer: Ravenclaw Writer
Date: 04/17/07 10:26
Chapter: The Dark Arts

Great chapter I loved it...evil cliffie though I hope that you get it updated soon so I won't be wondering any longer...I'm wondering how much longer harry will side with Voldy given this chapter...Well I eagerly await the next chapter...and great job on this one!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am working on 13 now so I hope to have it up in the next few days if I can. *warface* ; ) As for how much longer *coughSPOILERcough*, the story is only a few chapters short of finished now, so you will know very soon. Thanks a bunch again! ~Miss Moony

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 04/17/07 6:49
Chapter: The Dark Arts

Cliffie! Always a sign of a good story. Did Harry kill Wormtail? Update soon, I can't wait!

Author's Response: Yay! That's great to hear! Did he kill him? Hee, well if I told you that, what kind of suspense-inducing author would I be? ; ) You'll see in chapter thirteen, which is under construction right now! Thanks so much!! ~Miss Moony

Reviewer: nuw255
Date: 04/16/07 23:31
Chapter: The Dark Arts

Aaaaaaaaargh! *sigh* Okay, before I start to rant, let me say that this was a very well-written chapter, and I enjoyed it very much. I can't complain too badly about what Harry is doing, since I'm planning some things that are at least this hard on the readers for one of my own stories.

Okay, now I'll rant. You're being STUPID, Harry! STOP IT! *deep breath* All right, now what's it going to take to make him realize that he was with his real friends at the beginning and Voldemort's the one who has been lying to him? I mean, seriously.... It's good to see that he's questioning things, but he really needs to ENTERTAIN those thoughts instead of pushing them aside. STUPID HARRY! GRRRR!!!

Okay, that last paragraph was directed more at your main character than at you, since I know that you already know all that stuff. Oh, I did want to comment on how much I like your Snape, though. He's very in-character, but he's also a good guy, which is quite difficult to pull off (although you have a bit more leeway since this is pre-HBP). Take care, and I hope to see chapter 13 soon. Oh, and thanks for the dedication! :-)

Author's Response: Yay! Nuw! Thanks a lot, it took a while to get this one finished because of how many references I had to use, so I am really glad you liked it. And don't worry; we will forgive you for what you do in that story. Well, I make no promises with Abby, but... ; ) Rant time! Hahaha, breathe Nuw^^ What's it going to take... Hehe you REALLY don't want to know. Those are good signs, yeah, but when has canon!Harry ever been one of the greatest thinkers? XD I figured that it wasn't pointed at me, though it was entertaining all the same! And you DO like Snape? Ok, that is good. I didn't want him to seem OOC because of actually showing the Greasy Git's feelings. That makes me feel loads better! Hehe that leeway. Don't loopholes rock? Thanks a bunch, chapter thirteen will be along as soon as I can, and you are very welcome!!! ~Miss Moony

Author's Response: GASP! You are my 100th review!!! *tosses confetti* Yay!!!!!! That is one more than the story had before the fun fiasco! *dances* Thanks double!

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