Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 04/07/08 1:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

thats a great poem, youve really got potential. i really loved it^^
great job and please continue writing

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad that you liked it!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 02/23/08 21:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

Really Funny Parts:

Harry, Harry, Harry, Harry!

Like his soul and a bundle of Malfoy’s best bling.

Where he lives with Wormtail, that weird little man.

No insane old King Herods out to kill everything

hahahahahahahahahahaha!!!! too funny!!

Author's Response: LOL those were some of my favorite lines to write, too!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 02/23/08 21:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

I could not sing it, I was laughing so hard!! This is wicked insane!!! 10/10

Author's Response: LOL I'm glad that you liked it!!!! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 01/01/08 3:00
Chapter: Chapter 1

Allie!!!!

I am currently LMAO thanks to you. xqnmiwnciamxinbfwnwivbrng8ebcbc7wbcusbc8bc7 (result of haedesking the keyboard)

My favourite lines:

His doom haunted him throughout the week.
So he kills a few people and wraps up a few things

Like his soul and a bundle of Malfoy’s best bling.

A crazy Dark Lord who kills everyone dead

So he plotted and planned and blasted stuff apart

And so he did trample old Voldy’s black heart.

Allie dear, you are amazing.=Sammy



Author's Response: Gracias, Sammy! I'm glad that you liked it!

Reviewer: kumydabookworm
Date: 04/24/07 22:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was...to put it simply, crack!tastic. :D Absolutely insane. *giggles* Alright - since this is a review for Review Crew, I'm going to attempt to be SOMEWHAT objective.

*turns head sideways to squint at madness* Hmm. I think some of your rhyming didn't quite work, though your rhythm was on-point from what I could see. (I have never heard that song in my life, and could not sing along to check for rhythm *lol*)

For example: things and bling; land and man; was and all! *eek*; Kings and everything.

So...I would work on the endings more, but I do like the overall lovely funniness of the parody. Nice job, dearie!

Kumy

Author's Response: Haha! Thank you, Kumy! The song doesn't rhyme either, so I thought the heck with it!

Reviewer: Doctor Phoenix
Date: 04/02/07 17:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

*pauses before reviewing in order to catch breath from hysterical laughter*
"his soul and a bundle of Malfoy's best bling..." *dissolves into laughter again*
Sorry. I'm having a really hard time stopping myself from laughing long enough to type coherently. This was so funny...
I don't really have anything to criticize...I really enjoyed reading it. (And I'm sure you don't sing that badly.) Keep up the good work!
*stops review before she starts laughing again*
Doctor Phoenix, Knight of the Turnip Table

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! lol I love writing humor, but I also like writing dark/angsty stories. (: But making people laugh is WAY better!

Reviewer: DreamingOfRon
Date: 01/27/07 15:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was pretty funny

Author's Response: Hmmm.... this review sounds oddly familiar.... =)

Reviewer: DreamingOfRon
Date: 01/27/07 15:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was pretty funny

Author's Response: Sorry mods!

Reviewer: DreamingOfRon
Date: 01/27/07 15:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was pretty funny

Author's Response: Haha thanks!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 01/05/07 20:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

*busts gut again* 10/10 *falls off chair*

Author's Response: lmao thanks!

Reviewer: Purplemage
Date: 01/02/07 9:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

What a fun and enjoyable little piece of writing. It was cute and humoristic.I don't know the song "the first Noel" but I think this is well written and even if you don't know the melody to the song you can sort of sing it. Maybe it wouldn't be the same, but it's still singable. (just made up a word)

There are enjoyable lines all through the piece, but this one is my favorite. "The first Savior, Trelawney did say,
Was to certain poor Voldy that he’d die one day"
Cogratulations on this nice work and the best of luck for the contest.

Harald/Purplemage

Author's Response: Thank you! The FIrst Noel is actually a very very very boring church song. I like to think that mine's better ;)

Reviewer: crazy_purple_hp_freak
Date: 01/01/07 8:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

A nice funny parody! I loved it! It’s kind of true too, that in a way Harry IS the Saviour of the wizarding world…

And goes far away, to a vampire’s land
Where he lives with Wormtail, that weird little man.


My favourite lines! I think it was the description of Wormtail that made me giggle… *laugh*

I just have a tiny Britpick: Savior should really be “Saviour” if being Britishly correct..lol

I loved the tone of this parody…it’s great! Good luck!

Author's Response: Thanks! I didn't know about the whole spelling thingie! And thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 12/28/06 0:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very funny.nearly died of lafter.

Author's Response: Haha, I have to sing that stupid song every year with some other people (don't ask why) and we absolutely hate the song and always come up with different versions and words...

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 12/26/06 9:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, that's fantastic! I'm actually singing it aloud as we speak.... er, type. I love "The First Noel," especially the Josh Groban version. The only thing that bothers me is where it goes, "So no Mary or Joseph, nor Three Wise Men Kings
No insane old King Herods out to kill everything
And no shepherds and mangers but instead
A crazy Dark Lord who’s kills everything."

IWhy don't you say: "A crazy Dark Lord who kills everyone dead?" Like, how hillbillies say, "That man killed my husband dead!"

I especially love the second verse. Malfoy's best bling... Keep writing! This is funny.

Author's Response: lol thanks! I like the new version of that... *scurries back to change it* thanks for the review!

Author's Response: Dang it, forgot the queue was closed...

Reviewer: makinmagic323
Date: 12/20/06 13:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

i liked it, but you should put what song it should be sung to in the beginning =)

Author's Response: Oops! Is that a requirement?

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 12/15/06 20:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was so cute! I loved Harry trampling Voldy's heart!! That was my favorite line. :) Cyns

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! It's nice to know that some people are reading this!

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 12/15/06 16:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was really cute. Sorry I have nothing more productive to say, I just couldn't not tell you that I really enjoyed this. :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I love all kinds of reviews and cute is my thing!!! Well, unless Victoria's around. (It makes sense if you've read Lady Blood ;)}

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 12/15/06 16:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

i like tha part about malfoy's bling!

Author's Response: lol I had to find something that rhymed with things!!!

Reviewer: Mind_Over_Matter
Date: 12/15/06 2:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, my goodness. I love this rendition so much! It's just brilliant, and I love how you use those hilarious throw-away phrases, like calling Wormtail a weird little man.

AND I'm really glad you kept most of the rhyme scheme, and the rhythm was just perfect. I actually sung it to hear what it sounded like, and it was great (except for when I had to stop from laughing).

Well done, and really really really good luck with the challenge!


... and I realised I technically really shouldn't be saying that, being a 'Claw and all...



Author's Response: Haha thanks!!! I'm not a very good poet so it's nice to know that I'm not a complete failure at this!

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