Reviewer: canuck_lily
Date: 01/27/07 15:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow!! I can see the characters writing this. You captured the felling of despair just enough to make the poem so hopeful.

Amazing...2 thumbs up!!!

Reviewer: JusticeForMedea
Date: 12/25/06 19:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like this a lot. There have certainly been enough times in my life when I have wished I could just fall asleep until all I was dealing with had passed. Your narrator is very human, good job. Keep writing! -Ananya

Reviewer: to_the_stage93
Date: 12/17/06 8:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was a great great story! Good job! I really liked it. I don't mean for this to be so short, but there's really no suggestions to make- it was perfect! I just wanted to give you this as kudos and props for such a good story!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/16/06 23:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is the best poem I've read in a long time; I'm really impressed. You conveyed so much emotion in this short piece of writing. I especially loved how you flipped back and wrote a little bit about each year.

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 12/16/06 11:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

Loved it!

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