Reviewer: canuck_lily
Date: 01/27/07 15:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow!! I can see the characters writing this. You captured the felling of despair just enough to make the poem so hopeful.

Amazing...2 thumbs up!!!

Reviewer: JusticeForMedea
Date: 12/25/06 19:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like this a lot. There have certainly been enough times in my life when I have wished I could just fall asleep until all I was dealing with had passed. Your narrator is very human, good job. Keep writing! -Ananya

Reviewer: to_the_stage93
Date: 12/17/06 8:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was a great great story! Good job! I really liked it. I don't mean for this to be so short, but there's really no suggestions to make- it was perfect! I just wanted to give you this as kudos and props for such a good story!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/16/06 23:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is the best poem I've read in a long time; I'm really impressed. You conveyed so much emotion in this short piece of writing. I especially loved how you flipped back and wrote a little bit about each year.

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 12/16/06 11:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

Loved it!

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Unexploded Bombs by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
Dudley Dursley has just experienced the death of his elderly father Vernon from...
Ginny's Big Decision by dg04 1st-2nd Years
After Dumbledore's Funeral, Harry tells Ginny that they can't be together anymore...
Little Lions by SexY_LydZ 6th-7th Years
On a stormy October evening, a letter, a late night trip to the library and...
FEATURED
Going Against Salazar's Grain by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
"Sometimes," said Dumbledore, "we sort too soon." Originally writtten for...
Whispers in the Night by lucca4 6th-7th Years
"Swear to me, Cissy. Swear you won't tell." It's a secret, and it haunts...
Fear and Loathing in Florida (Mostly Loathing) by minnabird 3rd-5th Years
Scabior and Greyback had to escape the Aurors somehow - they just hadn't expected...
Just Before Healing by WeasleyMom 3rd-5th Years
With Hannah, things always go to yellow.
In Bloom by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 3rd-5th Years
It figures that he ignores the other side of roses. Thorns fit to draw blood...
Magical by Nagini Riddle 1st-2nd Years
Ginny and her brothers sneak down the stairs to look at presents, but instead...
CATEGORIES