Good, keep it up. I liked it. Hope for an other update soon.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Hopefully have the next chapter up for validation by the end of this week.
I love the part "beyond the veil" it's weird but I really like it!!
You're writing (in parts) also reminded me of CJ Lewis's writing. amazing.
Author's Response: wow thats quite the compliment so thank you very much indeed.
great chapter. love it. when you going to update?
Author's Response: Thanks, this week I should think.
he went to voldemort didnt he? well he better come out of this alive or else......
Author's Response: Maybe or maybe not.
That was a REALLY good chapter! I loved it! I wonder what is going to happen next. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you loved it. I hope you like the next chapter it starts off pretty quick and as a lot of emotion laced throughout it.
Reading straight through your story to this point I must say I am very pleased. I enjoyed your sense of chemistry between the chosen 4, and I cannot wait for your story to resume and conclude. Excellent Work tear_away.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Am glad you're enjoying and i have been trying hard to get a sense of a good strong blend between H/G & R/H and all four of them aswell as others.
where is the next chapter?!??! lol
one of my top 3 stories here, do you need help gettin it up or is just the backed up queue?
Author's Response: Up soon I promise. I lost my Beta so I had to get another one.
Hmm, interesting... Five stars, and can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Next chapter will be up asap. It is currently with my Beta.
Hey, love it so far, but in this chapter, 90th paragraph down, 4th line down, third word in, 'Ginny's' is misspelled as 'Gunny's'. (sorry about the critique, but my puppy's name is Gunny, so... Love the story, btw!)
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out, i'll go see if I can find and fix that. Sometimes as chapters sit and sit somewhere out there is cyperspace things change and spellings become lost. If you look at a lot of the older stories on here you can find bad spelling and coding errors that I am sure were never there iin the original as they wouldn't pass validation.
this is great story update as soon as possible please
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll try to get updated asap
GReat chapter, like ussual. hope you have time to updat soon. i can't wait to know what happens next because even thought your cliffy is not quiite evil, it is quite a curious ending. Now get writing!!!LOL!
Author's Response: My Beta (or ex-Beta now) has told me to stop doing so many evil clifhangers. So I wont have one in the next chapter - promise. So as you can tell I am having to find a new Beta and I may have found one so I am hopeful of getting the next chapter up within the next ten days. Cheers for the review and I hope you keep enjoying.
excelletn story and i can nto wait until the next update
Author's Response: cheers
Wow I have just sat here and read your story
The whole story it is absolutely amazing !
I have an iPod touch so I read your story
at home, at the mall, the pool, the store
literally non-stop ! Oh my never stop ! I love
the harry/ginny stuff & the tatoos but what about
what's happening behind the veil ? I really liked
thoose parts too.
But please, please, please update soon(:
deffinately one of the best stories on mugglenet
hopefully when I get my story up & running it
will be almost as good as yours !
Author's Response: Glad you have enjoyed it and thats so cool that youyr reading it on the go. I am trying to get more Veil parts in but I like to keep them for significant moments although I may through one in just for kicks quite soon. Give me a shout when you get your story up, if its Harry/Ginny ill def stop by and read it. Cheers for the review - Craig
n love it keep going for the loe of od dontstop it would ruin my day
Author's Response: I wont stop
Thanks, Update soon. I like it, I just would like to see more. Thanks
Author's Response: I'll keep trying to update as soon as i can.
k plz dont have any more breaks even tho its summer!! i miss this story i've already re-read it=P. ur doing a great job on this but i can't wait until u get somemore of those viel scences up. hope ur having a great summer
Author's Response: Cheers. I am thinking of a few more veil scenes quite soon. And I'll try my best to update quicker.
Thrilling! Great ideas.
'Minister De C rees"
Author's Response: Thanks glad you liked it and ill try my best to push the next chapter forward asap.
great story!!!!......... can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it and ill get it up (the chapter) asap.
the next chapter (23) was so great! I read it on siye.co.uk
you're a great writer. I love that story.
hoping for a soon update.
Author's Response: lol you cheated. oh well. Thanks for your review.
very good chapter..i liked finding out the truth about Colin
Author's Response: thanks. glad you liked it.