Reviewer: popcornie
Date: 09/13/07 22:31
Chapter: Going Home

Aye, a feel more things to say now :P

So, getting it straight. Fawkes. Hes like a friend? Anyways, It would be nice to have him 'hangin around' with harry.

As for Ginny, I said that based on her state on early chapters. When they were apart. They way I see her(not necessarily as you do, mind me sayin) it would not happen. I mean the whole tore apart thing. She would be upset obviously, but not crying all over and such. I just felt really weird.

And as for harry, I can totally understand this, yet I thought you might have done it unintentionally

Ps. I reviewed the first chapter by mistake. And cant Delete it. :P

Author's Response: Doesnt matter.

Reviewer: popcornie
Date: 09/13/07 22:29
Chapter: Ginny's Tears

Aye, a feel more things to say now :P

So, getting it straight. Fawkes. Hes like a friend? Anyways, It would be nice to have him 'hangin around' with harry.

As for Ginny, I said that based on her state on early chapters. When they were apart. They way I see her(not necessarily as you do, mind me sayin) it would not happen. I mean the whole tore apart thing. She would be upset obviously, but not crying all over and such. I just felt really weird.

And as for harry, I can totally understand this, yet I thought you might have done it unintentionally

Author's Response:

You are fast becoming my favourite reviewer around here. Fawkes has his role to play as we dig deeper into the story, although I admit am not one hundred percent sure excatly how this will happen - I just know it will.

I guess I was trying to show how much they really care for each other and how much what had happened was tearing at the both of them, and remember sometimes brothers over empahsis when it comes to their "baby" sisters.

Craig

Reviewer: PotterHead202
Date: 09/13/07 21:51
Chapter: Going Home

Great Chapter, As always! Can't wait for the next one!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, hopefully next chapter will be posted soon.

Reviewer: Slimshady2
Date: 09/13/07 16:13
Chapter: Going Home

Love it whens the next chapter goingto be up im looking foward to it

Author's Response: Should be this week, i was amenat to have it yesterday but its not in my inbox yet.

Reviewer: potterfanana
Date: 09/13/07 12:42
Chapter: Going Home

I absoletuly love this fic!
hope you post the next chapter soon

Author's Response: ill post as soon as i get it back from my beta. promise.

Reviewer: coke_lover
Date: 09/12/07 18:48
Chapter: Going Home

good chapter, please add the next one soon!! plz!

Author's Response: I will asap.

Reviewer: esila
Date: 09/12/07 8:13
Chapter: Going Home

this is avety good book!!
i like that u changed the charecters, even Harry. but watch out to not make him to poverful or it will be hard to gibe him a chalanging battles in future.
i will wait for the next chapter!!!!!

Author's Response: Thins will never be simple or easy for Harry!

Reviewer: popcornie
Date: 09/11/07 12:19
Chapter: Going Home

Hello again :P

Ive been re-reading the whole 'book' again, and i've come with some conclusions i'd like to point out.. Not sure why, just feel I should..

First of all, As I said before, yet you did not coment: Fawkes feels like a tool rather a pet. Is this supposed to be that way? I mean, Dumbledore for instance, had fawkes with him almost all the time, in his offce.

Second: Your ginny, is pretty much dependent on harry. I know that in the JK books, there wasnt any insight glance at her, so you could pratically write her as you wish, but it still feels weird..

And Tird: Harry feels rather arrogant sometimes. I know you intended to make him a leader, after the death of dumbledore. And I think its interesting, and him being powerful is actually very cool..
Its just the way he says things sometimes.. Like he was the best thing ever happened on the order.. Idk.

Author's Response:

First thanks for the long review, I love them.

Fawkes is not a pet or a tool to be used by Harry. He was sent to Harry at the request of Dumbledore to help Harry. Thats what is happening, but he will become more prominant as time goes by, Harry will learn what the phoienx really has to offer.

Ginny is not dependent on Harry and there have been a few istances of that so far, but her will will spread as the story goes on, she is key not just a romantic side-story.

If he comes across as arrogant its because he knkow now what he is striving for, a better life for those he loves. He will achieve that at whatever price and he wants to try it on his terms if he can.

Thanks - Craig

Reviewer: KnightWay
Date: 09/09/07 7:24
Chapter: Going Home

I love this story so far. I cannot wait till you post more chapters up. This is awesome.

Author's Response: Thank you - more chapters soon.

Reviewer: Hestia Jones
Date: 09/08/07 15:16
Chapter: Going Home

:) back at hogwarts, well done!!

Author's Response: cheers

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 09/08/07 13:08
Chapter: Going Home

Wow aweome chapter well worth the wait! well not really just dont take forever to update again...amazing chpater by the way! Thanks for cheering me up after i had such a bad frist wekk of school!

Author's Response:

Well school can be a bummer, I have to go back to uni in a few weeks. :(

Update soon I promise.

Reviewer: Poppy
Date: 09/08/07 13:03
Chapter: Going Home

What a FUN chapter. It reminded me how much I am enjoying your version. :-) More Soon, PLEASE!!!

Author's Response: thank you.

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 09/08/07 12:18
Chapter: Going Home

very good
i wonder when they will um...see each other blushing all over, so to speak?

Author's Response: not telling - haha. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/07/07 20:15
Chapter: Going Home

hhahahah im sooo glad that you finally updated i thought you might have given up! Im grateful you didnt! This is just really amazing! Keep up the great work! i seriously admire you!

sophia

Author's Response: thanks, I promise I am not giving up. ever.

Reviewer: Love_Hope_Freedom
Date: 09/07/07 19:02
Chapter: Going Home

Great Chapter!!
I really Liked it!
Cant wait for the next one!
~*Mona*~

Author's Response: THanks mona, next one coming soon, I think.

Reviewer: Evil 4 Life
Date: 09/07/07 16:35
Chapter: Going Home

nice man, its gud 2 c that harry cares about all of his friends and not jsut the weasleys and hermionie, awesome man cant wait till the nxt chapter plz post it asap :)

Author's Response: asap I promise.

Reviewer: Slimshady2
Date: 09/07/07 14:02
Chapter: Going Home

great stuff keep up the good work cant wait haha update soon

Author's Response: Promise - I will update soon.

Reviewer: phoenix_93
Date: 09/07/07 13:14
Chapter: Going Home

Once again another brilliant chapter.
Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Gracis. Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: poshini
Date: 09/07/07 5:03
Chapter: Going Home

OH MY GOD. YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!! Mind Blowing as all ways. Well if you do get any more Beta trouble send me a n e-mail and I'll help you out. Hope you can upday soon again!!!!!

Author's Response: I know it took me long enough, Sorry (Everyone). I hope to get the next chapter out very soon, start of next week soon.

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 09/06/07 23:43
Chapter: Going Home

"and Accioed Deanís wand" actually the word is "summoned".

Did Harry dye his hair? Because last time I checked it was jet black, and when McGonagall made the presentations girls were talking about his "sexy red hair".
Other than that, and a few typos here and there, great chapter! I just love the story and the way you're developing it.

Hope the update doesn't take too long.

Author's Response:

The nextupdate should come quite soon. I am heading off to France for the Scotland v France game next Tues, Wed and Thu but I hope to update before then.

"Accioed" - Me and my Beta had an interesting discussion about using that word or "summoned." I wont go through all the details but we decided on Accioed because I had seen it someplace else in another story and like the sound.

It may have been a drunken conversation thinking back on it.

Harry dyed his hair in chapter 4

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