Reviewer: Harry_Potters_Twin
Date: 06/02/09 1:10
Chapter: Tom Riddle

Amazing cant wait till da nxt chptr

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: CBRoad
Date: 04/24/09 17:16
Chapter: Tom Riddle

So this is my very first review of any story, though I have read quite a few on this site so far. I must say that I have been more entertained by your story than any of the multitude of Harry Potter fanfics that I have come across, and for that my hat goes off to you. Your story has been funny, sexy, exciting, scary and a plethora of other emotions. I believe your story is excellent and i have no real complaints. A grammar or spelling error here and there, but thats to be expected, those are even in the published novels much later on. I hope you plan to continue this story, I look foward to the remaining horcuxes and the continuation of Harry and Ginny;s relationship, especially the wedding. I look foward to more, and feel free to write me back here or my email as I am always full of ideas and also always love to hear another's ideas. So definitely should you want to just contact me either way.
Thank you and keep up the great work,
Chris aka CBRoad

Author's Response: Chris, thank you so much for your review. I am currently taking a break from this story as finding the time to write and think about it has become very difficult in my life. I do however plan to finish it and hope that the next chapter will be posted within the next few months. tear_away

Reviewer: azngurlwidhighlights
Date: 04/12/09 21:40
Chapter: Ginny's Tears

I truly love your story and I really hope that you'll update it soon because I'm not sure if I can wait!!!

Author's Response: The next chapter is giving me lots of issues and my free time is not very much at the moment so unfortunatly its is taking a very long time. sorry

Reviewer: lauren2294
Date: 04/12/09 17:15
Chapter: Tom Riddle

love the beggining and the rest of the story but i really love the changes you gave harry. I wish you had more of the beyond the veil since that's what the story's called but still a wonderful story

Author's Response: There will be more of the beyond the veil scences but i tend to use them in pivital moments - however one is coming up in the next few chapters.

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley 25
Date: 04/10/09 11:45
Chapter: Tom Riddle

that was amazing that story, i was dumbfounded easily...

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: ginnylover5
Date: 03/22/09 0:16
Chapter: Tom Riddle

is this story going to be updated soon because i have read all the way to this part like 7 times. please update soon.

Author's Response: sorry I am having problems writing the next chapter and my free time to do so has gone down dramatically recently. It will get done just not sure when.

Reviewer: Green 1973
Date: 02/16/09 5:48
Chapter: Tom Riddle

Please keep going I like reading this story.
When well the Chapter be out

Author's Response: sorry the next chapter has been really difficult to write. I'm not sure when it will be out.

Reviewer: Baela
Date: 02/13/09 22:51
Chapter: Ginny's Tears

Light bulb finally seems to be turned on in Ginny's head, lol. Cute beginning! Moving on to Chapter 2

Author's Response: Cool.

Reviewer: Frank Bryce
Date: 02/11/09 19:37
Chapter: Ginny's Tears

This story is awsome!
I've read it at least 3 times over and it's still great.
I like how Harry mans up and starts working out. This fic actualy got me of the couch and get fit my self so I thank you for that as well.
Keep it up.

Author's Response: Glad I could you a bit. Working on the next chapter has been difficult as I'm finding it hard to get time to do so and the chapter is not being very nice to me for writing. It's coming along though.

Reviewer: ashley_dance94
Date: 01/26/09 18:46
Chapter: A Weasley Returned

excellent chapter ! :)

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: alyssa_S
Date: 01/03/09 20:04
Chapter: Tom Riddle

will there be an update anytime soon?
please say yes! it has been to long since the last update

Author's Response: Hopefully within the next month. I'm slowly working away on the next chapter but real life gets frequently in the way. Sorry.

Reviewer: sofybofy
Date: 12/22/08 8:13
Chapter: Tom Riddle

hi again :)
any idea how many chapters before the wedding yet?

Author's Response: Ill guess at 2 or 3.

Reviewer: TheNinthHorcrux
Date: 12/21/08 11:46
Chapter: Tom Riddle

Hahaha that'll teach Voldy! Again, I loved this chapter and can't wait to see what's next :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: ginnylover5
Date: 12/14/08 18:21
Chapter: Tom Riddle

this story is very, very, very, very good. update as soon as humanly possible please.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm currently working nights and as such have not had time to keep up with my writing. I plan to update sometime in january. Thank you

Reviewer: george capplin
Date: 12/04/08 21:02
Chapter: Tom Riddle

This story is really well done! Though I'm surprised at how angry Harry was over the death of the dursleys. I was kind of expecting Harry's thoughts to be something like "good riddens" but I guess that's what makes Harry Harry. It still makes for a very exciting sequence and is very well written. I look forward to reading the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm still working on the next chapter

Reviewer: teelcj
Date: 12/02/08 21:03
Chapter: Tom Riddle

Thus far, I really think that your story line is fantastic. I can't wait to read the next installment! The cliffies are well placed, the story is well paced, and your new ideas in characters, spells, abilities, prophecies, etc are all very creative, and fit well into the structure that Rowling has fashioned. The only thing that I would love to see is a bit better grammar and syntax, but thats not a big deal. :) I guess I'm just a stickler for little details like that. Otherwise, great job. I really love that story. Let me know when the new chapter comes out, or if you need some help.

Author's Response: Hi there. I may well take you up on that offer as I truely want to improve what is the weak point in my stories. The next chapter is not finished yet, however when it has been I may be in touch.

Reviewer: alyssa_S
Date: 11/29/08 15:46
Chapter: Tom Riddle

really great as per usual!!
i wonder what ron will do with that bone fragment? u know the one he took from the hospital wing? any way just stoped to say it was an awsome chappie and can't wait for more!!!!

Author's Response: something both sick and amusing that saves him spending money.

Reviewer: ccrawford92
Date: 11/23/08 13:16
Chapter: Goodbye My Blood

This is a really good story, but you have alot of grammatical mistakes.

Author's Response: Thanks. Yea it certainly seems some have slipped through the sight of my beta, myself and the mods. oh well you cant win them all.

Reviewer: GinnyW81
Date: 11/23/08 4:46
Chapter: Tom Riddle

i love that stoy!!
please update soon. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you are enjoying my story. Im in the middle of writing the next chapter.

Reviewer: Slimshady2
Date: 11/14/08 20:41
Chapter: Ginny's Tears

I'm Still Waiting!haha. I think the reason why it's agrevating for the readers especially is because you left us with a huge cliffhanger.Hopefully the chapter gets posted soon and we will be able to continue at a normal pace

Author's Response: I know and I'm so sorry. The next chapter has been posted for validation.

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