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Name: pike007 (Signed) · Date: 01/15/08 1:51 · For: The Locket
unfortunately, i dont hsve great experience, but i like you style of writing, and feel that we will make a great team and improve your story. (but honestly, i cant see how, as its very good already.) if you dont hear from your beta in a few days or you would like me to help beta, please contact me on the email address i gave before, as it will be better than talking over you comments page! thanks- michael

Author's Response: I got your e-mail and I'll get back to you within the next few days should I not hear back from my Beta. However I am hopeful of hearing back from her as we ahve been wokring well together and I feel she has improved my style as well.

Name: pike007 (Signed) · Date: 01/14/08 15:13 · For: The Locket
great story, but i cant help noticing that you mentioned that you had beta problems. id be perfectly willing to help beta some chapters if you like? if you like that idea, please contact me by email. its michaelwright505@hotmail.co.uk

Author's Response: I might take you up on that should I not hear from my beta in the next few days. Do you have experience?

Name: ananglsovrme26 (Signed) · Date: 01/14/08 1:14 · For: The Locket
This is my favorite story!!! i just love the plot line and how its written!!! please update it soon!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I am working hard to update asap.

Name: Slimshady2 (Signed) · Date: 01/13/08 3:13 · For: Ginny's Tears
I may be impatient when it comes to this story but I was wondering if you had an idea of when the next chapter would be up, I know your only human although sometimes I wish different so the story would come faster but It is worth the wait

Author's Response: I would hope very soon. But right now I am having troubles getting in touch with my Beta. She has the next chapter and has had it since before christmas, so I would hope when I do hear back from her she will have it ready for me to go over one last time. It is simportant that readers realise that for most writers are stories go through a Betaing process, I believe I have one of the shorter processes but have been unlucky with stopages in between chapters due to unforseen problems coming up.

Name: joshys_lovepuppet07 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 8:30 · For: The Locket
you have got to continue this story! I love it. i didn't want it to end that way. What about the WEDDING?

Author's Response: Relax its not nearly over, we're not even half way yet. I am looking to get the next chapter up soon but I am having communication problems with my beta. There is plenty more to come. More action, thrils, spils, romance, death, that I promise will keep you hooked.

Name: allinyourhead (Signed) · Date: 01/08/08 15:46 · For: The Locket
i just read this story all in one sitting but before i mention some slight critisisms, i have to tell you, i love your story!!! it has the perfect amount of fluff and is really adorable. but....the fact that harry is so open with his love for ginny is something i don't think that he would do as a character. ron and hermione are really well developed but harry and ginny seem a little two dimmensional. and, one more thing, please PLEASE have harry and ginny stop calling each other pet names all the time, kinda annopying, to be honest. anways, keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: Ah well first of you should have noticed a decrease in the pet names over that last three or four posted chapters. I do try to make sure they are all removed from my original writings of each chapter but it is easy to miss them. My Harry is different from JK's Harry in many ways, his openness with Ginny is a sense of longing for what he could have with her, what he wants with her. Thanks for the review.

Name: dancer_27 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 19:46 · For: The Locket
Great job! it was really good! i love this whole story!

Author's Response: Cheers, next chapter should hopefully be up real soon.

Name: Slimshady2 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 15:51 · For: Ginny's Tears
Things Great about this story
1)Character twists and minupulations
2)Everythings correct, You did your research on the potter universe
3)Its everything a Harry/Ginny shipper wanted from deathly hallows and more
4)All genres and well written
5)Many more......

My favorite and first fanfic I ever read and the reason I continued to look for other stories, Also Update soon I want to see the family reaction haha I hope harry ginny get caught by molly haha

Author's Response: I have been quite ill recently and have been suffering from headaches which has affected my time online. However my Beta does have the next chapter and has for some time so I am in the middle of chasing her up to find out what is going on.

Name: JPYRO94 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 14:40 · For: Talks at the Burrow
Uh Oh! Harry is getting tempted by dark magic. Can anything good come out of it?

Author's Response: Read on to find out

Name: popcornie (Signed) · Date: 01/02/08 19:28 · For: The Locket
I was a litte away from fics those few weeks(?).. couldnt read the new chapter. Now im sceptical about reading it. Might just read the whole thing again!

Author's Response: If you want, but the chapter is pretty striahgt forward as a follow on.

Name: CLL042 (Signed) · Date: 01/02/08 16:08 · For: Ginny's Tears
Hello, again.

I hope that you had a good holiday.
I agree with you that book 7 was a letdown. Everything was a bit too rushed, I think. I can easily say that this story that you are writing is better. It is more interesting. There is more action, romance, humor (sometimes romance and humor together...lol). It has everything that DH was missing. You don't get the sense that Harry is powerful in DH, but with yours, you know that he is powerful, and rightfully so.

You are a gifted writer and i hope that the rest of the story can keep up with what you have already posted.


Author's Response: Christian, Thanks for your high compliments,

Name: duffster (Signed) · Date: 12/29/07 11:35 · For: The Locket
these r wicked u shud rite loads more. they get better every time

Author's Response: Thank you. Please keep reviewing.

Name: argentum_cervus (Signed) · Date: 12/27/07 20:56 · For: The Locket
I can not wait to read the rest
I really enjoy the story

Author's Response: Thank you, there is plenty more to come.

Name: Loyd1957 (Signed) · Date: 12/27/07 18:12 · For: The Locket
Totally love this story. You have the characters just the way I believe they should be. Ginny and Harry couldn't be any better. Great dialogue, great romance and sexual tension. You have a way with words.

Author's Response: Thank you very very much. Its great to know that people are enjoying my twists with the characters.

Name: Slimshady2 (Signed) · Date: 12/19/07 18:56 · For: The Locket
I dont want to seem impatient but the story is that good,Have you submited the next chapter for validation,I love the story and chapter,I was wondering if any of your other stories you are working on are Harry/Ginny stories

Author's Response: Sorry the next chapter has not been submitted yet, I have currently starting writing six stories and each is a Harry/Ginny story although this is the only one which is posted.

Name: joshys_lovepuppet07 (Signed) · Date: 12/19/07 9:41 · For: 'Yes or No'
this is my favorite so far! great job!

Author's Response: Excellent glad your enjoying.

Name: teenyjewel (Signed) · Date: 12/18/07 19:03 · For: The Locket
That was so good. I just love this story. Play quidditch and catch the quaffle, ah, I thought I was going to die of laughter! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Good, am glad you found that funny I almost considered remvoming it before posting but just went with it anyway. Merry Christmas.

Name: Daniel Pinkney (Signed) · Date: 12/18/07 12:25 · For: The Locket
In response to your response to my review =p I didn't feel the last book was a letdown overall, i Love the book it is awesome. But just the fact that Harry's powers didn't seem to grow in the 7th book from the 6th just was what i thought was missing. I thought that he was going to sort of train hard and become very powerful or find out how to use his power but he didnt and his victory, however amazing seemed kind of lucky. But yeh i may have read to much fan fiction before reading the 7th too lol =p But Fan fiction is so good I think it was worth it, speacialy this Fan Fic =]
Love the story,
Your Fan,
Daniel Pinkney

Author's Response: Thank you, it means a lot when people come out say things like that about my fan fic. Its these sort of reviews that keep my writing away.

Name: ThisMustBeLove (Signed) · Date: 12/17/07 20:40 · For: The Locket
This is a great chapter that last bit was funny!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you thought so and I enjoyed writing it.

Name: bamalam (Signed) · Date: 12/16/07 17:33 · For: The Locket
wow that was interesting

Author's Response: Thanks, I think.

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