i just read this story all in one sitting but before i mention some slight critisisms, i have to tell you, i love your story!!! it has the perfect amount of fluff and is really adorable. but....the fact that harry is so open with his love for ginny is something i don't think that he would do as a character. ron and hermione are really well developed but harry and ginny seem a little two dimmensional. and, one more thing, please PLEASE have harry and ginny stop calling each other pet names all the time, kinda annopying, to be honest. anways, keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Ah well first of you should have noticed a decrease in the pet names over that last three or four posted chapters. I do try to make sure they are all removed from my original writings of each chapter but it is easy to miss them. My Harry is different from JK's Harry in many ways, his openness with Ginny is a sense of longing for what he could have with her, what he wants with her. Thanks for the review.
Great job! it was really good! i love this whole story!
Author's Response: Cheers, next chapter should hopefully be up real soon.
Things Great about this story
1)Character twists and minupulations
2)Everythings correct, You did your research on the potter universe
3)Its everything a Harry/Ginny shipper wanted from deathly hallows and more
4)All genres and well written
5)Many more......
My favorite and first fanfic I ever read and the reason I continued to look for other stories, Also Update soon I want to see the family reaction haha I hope harry ginny get caught by molly haha
Author's Response: I have been quite ill recently and have been suffering from headaches which has affected my time online. However my Beta does have the next chapter and has for some time so I am in the middle of chasing her up to find out what is going on.
Uh Oh! Harry is getting tempted by dark magic. Can anything good come out of it?
Author's Response: Read on to find out
I was a litte away from fics those few weeks(?).. couldnt read the new chapter. Now im sceptical about reading it. Might just read the whole thing again!
Author's Response: If you want, but the chapter is pretty striahgt forward as a follow on.
Hello, again.
I hope that you had a good holiday.
I agree with you that book 7 was a letdown. Everything was a bit too rushed, I think. I can easily say that this story that you are writing is better. It is more interesting. There is more action, romance, humor (sometimes romance and humor together...lol). It has everything that DH was missing. You don't get the sense that Harry is powerful in DH, but with yours, you know that he is powerful, and rightfully so.
You are a gifted writer and i hope that the rest of the story can keep up with what you have already posted.
Thx,
christian
Author's Response: Christian, Thanks for your high compliments,
these r wicked u shud rite loads more. they get better every time
Author's Response: Thank you. Please keep reviewing.
I can not wait to read the rest
I really enjoy the story
Author's Response: Thank you, there is plenty more to come.
Totally love this story. You have the characters just the way I believe they should be. Ginny and Harry couldn't be any better. Great dialogue, great romance and sexual tension. You have a way with words.
Author's Response: Thank you very very much. Its great to know that people are enjoying my twists with the characters.
I dont want to seem impatient but the story is that good,Have you submited the next chapter for validation,I love the story and chapter,I was wondering if any of your other stories you are working on are Harry/Ginny stories
Author's Response: Sorry the next chapter has not been submitted yet, I have currently starting writing six stories and each is a Harry/Ginny story although this is the only one which is posted.
this is my favorite so far! great job!
Author's Response: Excellent glad your enjoying.
That was so good. I just love this story. Play quidditch and catch the quaffle, ah, I thought I was going to die of laughter! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Good, am glad you found that funny I almost considered remvoming it before posting but just went with it anyway. Merry Christmas.
In response to your response to my review =p I didn't feel the last book was a letdown overall, i Love the book it is awesome. But just the fact that Harry's powers didn't seem to grow in the 7th book from the 6th just was what i thought was missing. I thought that he was going to sort of train hard and become very powerful or find out how to use his power but he didnt and his victory, however amazing seemed kind of lucky. But yeh i may have read to much fan fiction before reading the 7th too lol =p But Fan fiction is so good I think it was worth it, speacialy this Fan Fic =]
Love the story,
Your Fan,
Daniel Pinkney
Author's Response: Thank you, it means a lot when people come out say things like that about my fan fic. Its these sort of reviews that keep my writing away.
This is a great chapter that last bit was funny!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you thought so and I enjoyed writing it.
wow that was interesting
Author's Response: Thanks, I think.
i love it! its awsomee!!
Author's Response: Thank you, am glad your enjoying.
OMG! it is soo good! im hooked! i love it! :D
Author's Response: Glad your hooked and thanks for your review.
this story rocks i love it... finish it off will you? thanks and i enjoyed reading it and hope to read the rest
Author's Response: I will finish it, it will continue on until the story finishes. Glad your enjoying it and thanks for your review, please keep doing so with each new chapter.
aah. sorry i meant to say new** not bew.
♥mona
Author's Response: lol, cheers mona.
ahh, I keep posting but its being stupid! :[[
well ne ways..
haha i absoulutely love your story-but u already know that- and this chapterr is niceyy :]]
im glad ginny finally got what she wanted...
but harry is always suceeding at every bew thing he tries he shouldnt always succed on the first day/try on what is being taught. but what do i know? ur the author!
other than that its grrrreat!
good job craig you have succeeded at making a new chapter brilliant!
update soon...
♥mona
ps. tha last part left me giggling my head off :]]
Author's Response: THanks Mona, always good to here from you. He doesnt always succeed, and he is not perfect, I think that will be shown in up and coming chapters, he is not super Harry, he is just powerful.
