yay...another chapter. It was definately an interesting chapter. Not much action, but you already mentioned that. It was a good building chapter. (Were you playing quidditch last night?) hahaha..... :) great chapter...as always.

Author's Response: Action is coming in a couple of chapters, the next one can be a bit emotional with some fun in it. It is the final building piece before a series of action packed chapters.

Well done. Still so romantic and pure. I know things will escalate, but now it is just perfect. I am surprised that Ginny went along, but like the idea that she is strong enough.

Author's Response: She is strong in the ways that Harry is not and he iss trong in the ways she is not so they compliment one another. They are two halfs of a whole.

Excellent, excellent. That was well worth the wait. I loved Harry teasing Ron and Hermione about "Quidditch." I can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed, it shouldn't take as long for the next chapter to be up.

Good chapter ;)
I liike that you're bringing Percy into the mix again some people leave him out in stories.
My only problem is the way that Harry talks. He speaks so proper and like he is a robot sometimes ye know? He doesn't shorten his words like don't, couldn't, wouldn't (or he doesn't do it often and it sounds weird...) maybe its just me :P
I"m wondering if the situations you're bringing up with bullying and homosexuality are relevant to the main plot of the story. They seem a little bit like you don't have any new situations to present so your putting in random stuff (though well written) ...still it was a good chapter and I'm looking forward to the action. ;)

Author's Response:

All situations have relevance to the story, trust me its not a mish-mash of smaller plots its all intrical to the bigger plot line. And technically its Bi-sexuality.

Harry's speaking - I'll look into it and see what I can do.

Percy will hold some weight in this story, although he will not have a main role to play - in my view.

Cheers for the review.

it is great

Author's Response: Cheers Tommy, glad your enjoying.

love your story. i like how Fawkes gets transferred to harry.

update soon...

Author's Response: I plan on updating very soon. The next chapter is going through its final checks.

get the next chapter written lol. im dyin here. i keep checkin everyday lol

Author's Response: It's written, and on its way fairly soon.

ok. and i dont know whether i have said this before, (i know, terrible memory) but the storyline is as good as, if not better than mrs rowling herself! im intrigued! all the best with your writing if i dont hear from you ~ michael

Author's Response: Thanks very much for your praise. It means a lot when i get such high praise and it helps when I am stuck with the wirting or shaping of the story.

great story, but i cant help noticing that you mentioned that you had beta problems. id be perfectly willing to help beta some chapters if you like? if you like that idea, please contact me by email. its michaelwright505@hotmail.co.uk

Author's Response: I might take you up on that should I not hear from my beta in the next few days. Do you have experience?

I may be impatient when it comes to this story but I was wondering if you had an idea of when the next chapter would be up, I know your only human although sometimes I wish different so the story would come faster but It is worth the wait

Author's Response: I would hope very soon. But right now I am having troubles getting in touch with my Beta. She has the next chapter and has had it since before christmas, so I would hope when I do hear back from her she will have it ready for me to go over one last time. It is simportant that readers realise that for most writers are stories go through a Betaing process, I believe I have one of the shorter processes but have been unlucky with stopages in between chapters due to unforseen problems coming up.