yay...another chapter. It was definately an interesting chapter. Not much action, but you already mentioned that. It was a good building chapter. (Were you playing quidditch last night?) hahaha..... :) great chapter...as always.
Author's Response: Action is coming in a couple of chapters, the next one can be a bit emotional with some fun in it. It is the final building piece before a series of action packed chapters.
Perfect. Can't wait to see where their mission takes them next.
Author's Response: A place that is in the books will be their destination but then again it wont be. you'll see over the next two chapters.
Well done. Still so romantic and pure. I know things will escalate, but now it is just perfect. I am surprised that Ginny went along, but like the idea that she is strong enough.
Author's Response: She is strong in the ways that Harry is not and he iss trong in the ways she is not so they compliment one another. They are two halfs of a whole.
Can't wait to know what happens to Percy! Good Chapter. hope you can updates soon.
Thanks. I will look to update soon but there have been some problems with this chapter over at SIYE so my Beta is taking another look at it before looking at the next one. - Maybe I need another Beta, I don't know.
Thanks for your review.
Excellent, excellent. That was well worth the wait. I loved Harry teasing Ron and Hermione about "Quidditch." I can't wait for more!
Glad you enjoyed, it shouldn't take as long for the next chapter to be up.
Loved the chapter, Hopefully an update soon!!!
Author's Response: Hopefully. Cheers.
Good chapter ;)
I liike that you're bringing Percy into the mix again some people leave him out in stories.
My only problem is the way that Harry talks. He speaks so proper and like he is a robot sometimes ye know? He doesn't shorten his words like don't, couldn't, wouldn't (or he doesn't do it often and it sounds weird...) maybe its just me :P
I"m wondering if the situations you're bringing up with bullying and homosexuality are relevant to the main plot of the story. They seem a little bit like you don't have any new situations to present so your putting in random stuff (though well written) ...still it was a good chapter and I'm looking forward to the action. ;)
All situations have relevance to the story, trust me its not a mish-mash of smaller plots its all intrical to the bigger plot line. And technically its Bi-sexuality.
Harry's speaking - I'll look into it and see what I can do.
Percy will hold some weight in this story, although he will not have a main role to play - in my view.
Cheers for the review.
500th REVIEW, Congrats haha
Love the story cant wait for the next chapter, I am so excited for the action but eagearly waiting the romance and fluff, Keep up the good work
Author's Response: you should enjoy the next chapter, it has fluff and some humour.
it is great
Author's Response: Cheers Tommy, glad your enjoying.
You are an amazing writer and I hope you continue writing. I was also wondering when you will put the next few chapters out. I saw one of your comments and it said that you were working on chapter 24. I can only see up to chapter 19, so I was wondering when you will put up the other ones. I dont mean to rush you but I would really like to read your fan fiction further.
Author's Response: Thank you for your praise and for taking the time to review. The next chapter is coming within the next few days, its in the final stages of my Beta process. I hope you'll like and I hope to follow it up with 21 not long after.
love your story. i like how Fawkes gets transferred to harry.
Author's Response: I plan on updating very soon. The next chapter is going through its final checks.
im happy that you've got in contact with your beta
Author's Response: Cheers, I hope to have the chapter up soon, next few days soon.
get the next chapter written lol. im dyin here. i keep checkin everyday lol
Author's Response: It's written, and on its way fairly soon.
Hy, your storie is soo great!!! I guessed that mabye i could be your beta reader??!!
Author's Response: Its ok, I have managed to get in contact with my Beta, the next chapter should be posted within the next few days.
ok. and i dont know whether i have said this before, (i know, terrible memory) but the storyline is as good as, if not better than mrs rowling herself! im intrigued! all the best with your writing if i dont hear from you ~ michael
Author's Response: Thanks very much for your praise. It means a lot when i get such high praise and it helps when I am stuck with the wirting or shaping of the story.
unfortunately, i dont hsve great experience, but i like you style of writing, and feel that we will make a great team and improve your story. (but honestly, i cant see how, as its very good already.) if you dont hear from your beta in a few days or you would like me to help beta, please contact me on the email address i gave before, as it will be better than talking over you comments page! thanks- michael
Author's Response: I got your e-mail and I'll get back to you within the next few days should I not hear back from my Beta. However I am hopeful of hearing back from her as we ahve been wokring well together and I feel she has improved my style as well.
great story, but i cant help noticing that you mentioned that you had beta problems. id be perfectly willing to help beta some chapters if you like? if you like that idea, please contact me by email. its email@example.com
Author's Response: I might take you up on that should I not hear from my beta in the next few days. Do you have experience?
This is my favorite story!!! i just love the plot line and how its written!!! please update it soon!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I am working hard to update asap.
I may be impatient when it comes to this story but I was wondering if you had an idea of when the next chapter would be up, I know your only human although sometimes I wish different so the story would come faster but It is worth the wait
Author's Response: I would hope very soon. But right now I am having troubles getting in touch with my Beta. She has the next chapter and has had it since before christmas, so I would hope when I do hear back from her she will have it ready for me to go over one last time. It is simportant that readers realise that for most writers are stories go through a Betaing process, I believe I have one of the shorter processes but have been unlucky with stopages in between chapters due to unforseen problems coming up.
you have got to continue this story! I love it. i didn't want it to end that way. What about the WEDDING?
Author's Response: Relax its not nearly over, we're not even half way yet. I am looking to get the next chapter up soon but I am having communication problems with my beta. There is plenty more to come. More action, thrils, spils, romance, death, that I promise will keep you hooked.