Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/17/08 12:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

I liked this, and although Hermione ends up with Harry, there is a stroke of realism to this fic, more so than to the ending of HP. I really love the snowflake Hermione's parents gave her, a beautiful sentiment behind it.

Reviewer: Sdogg
Date: 02/14/07 12:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very cute story. The part about Ron was a random depressant in the middle of it, though. Sarah makes me smile. :)

Reviewer: Otter Magicke
Date: 01/28/07 13:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, that's sad that Ron died! But it's a great story, nonetheless!

Reviewer: crazy_purple_hp_freak
Date: 12/31/06 7:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww! *squees* This was really touching. Youve really captured the essence of Christmas here, incorporating all the happiness of children with the sadness felt by adults, that children often do not notice or understand. Well done!

I hold my little baby boy in my lap while Sarah twitters around the room like a little bird. I love this chirpy little description, it really emphasises the childish actions of Sarah, and makes her look even more cute!

Until he was eleven, he hadnt had a real Christmas. He had never received presents, never decorated a tree. I have a feeling hes making up for lost time in these simple acts. This is a really touching statement, and made me really glad that Harry is living happily now, which is what he really deserves after suffering so much and losing so much in the war.

I wonder what Ron would think, if he knew Harry and I had conceived our first child on the evening after his death. *gasp* Oooh scandalous!

I smile as wide as she does. A lovely, warm ending! As if Hermione finally finds simple, pure happiness. A great story, good luck! ~Suzie

Reviewer: makinmagic323
Date: 12/20/06 13:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

iiiii like it =)

Reviewer: DobbyElf
Date: 12/14/06 14:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

i dont like this in the first person

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 12/14/06 0:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

Cute, really cute. Great plot, well done, 10/10. Good Luck!

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 12/13/06 17:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aw...

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 12/13/06 16:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was a very touch story! It was fun to see the happiness in Sarah, and the joy the rest of the family portrayed also! Thanks for a great story! Cyns

Reviewer: arwenevensatr
Date: 12/13/06 12:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

A+ for a sweet christmas story. I hope sincerely that Jk gives Harry a happy ending.

Reviewer: qwerty83
Date: 12/13/06 10:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ohhhh how sad but sweet. I hope Harry and Hermione are happy together!

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