Very cute story. The part about Ron was a random depressant in the middle of it, though. Sarah makes me smile. :)

Aww! *squees* This was really touching. You’ve really captured the essence of Christmas here, incorporating all the happiness of children with the sadness felt by adults, that children often do not notice or understand. Well done!

I hold my little baby boy in my lap while Sarah twitters around the room like a little bird. I love this chirpy little description, it really emphasises the childish actions of Sarah, and makes her look even more cute!

Until he was eleven, he hadn’t had a real Christmas. He had never received presents, never decorated a tree. I have a feeling he’s making up for lost time in these simple acts. This is a really touching statement, and made me really glad that Harry is living happily now, which is what he really deserves after suffering so much and losing so much in the war.

I wonder what Ron would think, if he knew Harry and I had conceived our first child on the evening after his death. *gasp* Oooh scandalous!

I smile as wide as she does. A lovely, warm ending! As if Hermione finally finds simple, pure happiness. A great story, good luck! ~Suzie

i dont like this in the first person

Aw...

A+ for a sweet christmas story. I hope sincerely that Jk gives Harry a happy ending.