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Reviews For The Last Marauder

Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 06/12/08 18:30 · For: Chapter 1
This made me gry, let alone Sirius.

Name: cAughtonFire (Signed) · Date: 12/28/06 21:27 · For: Chapter 1
AMAZING! i swear the whole time i read this fanfic i was either crying or screaming "SIRIUS DIDN'T DO IT!". I think my family thinks im mentally challenged now from all the screaming lol jk. Great job describing Remus's emotions when he still believed sirius was resposible for the potters death. Usually writters can't keep Remus angry or disappionted at Sirius through out the whole fic. =]

Name: will_review_4_food (Signed) · Date: 12/22/06 19:56 · For: Chapter 1
i wonder y sirius didnt kill himself after he read this letter. or any other time, for that matter. sry, just curiosity. excellent, very dark, i must say, for remus. good god, wat a cruel marauder. still, he did believe sirius killd all those ppls. whcich was actually that ******************** peters doing. oh now im ramblng. good story!!!
ps. sirius could have killed himself by ramming his head on the bars or sometin. in case u were doubting his ability to kill himself. ok dats it. BYE and keep riting!

Name: Halfbloodprincess21 (Anonymous) · Date: 12/21/06 4:39 · For: Chapter 1
It was a beautiful letter, i just wish we got to read Sirius' reaction.

Name: Sly Severus (Signed) · Date: 12/19/06 20:45 · For: Chapter 1
Awww, poor Sirius. I can't imagine what he must have felt when he read that.

This was really good, but I think it would have been nice if you had included the after-effects of the letter. What Remus felt after he sent it. What Sirius felt after he read it.

Otherwise, this was very well done. :D

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