Reviewer: LoOnY_for_Harry
Date: 02/02/07 16:54
Chapter: The Letter

I liked it a lot! Very good description of Lily's discovery of her status of a witch.
The only thing was wondering is: Why didn't she ask her parents if she could go to Hogwarts?
Great job!

Author's Response: Umm. well, I had Lily silently ask her mom. I thought it kinda showed how great the relationship between the two were.

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 02/02/07 15:10
Chapter: Meeting the Git

I love it so far!

Reviewer: izzyblue24
Date: 01/21/07 15:51
Chapter: The Letter

Oh.... I get it! I like it, keep on writing it. I don't think it's chliche at all.

Reviewer: cAughtonFire
Date: 12/27/06 22:03
Chapter: The Letter

good job! can't wait to find out what happens next......too bad the queue is closed...

Keep writting! =]

Reviewer: hgfanatic
Date: 12/22/06 16:31
Chapter: The Letter

Where is the rest????
i wanna read bout jamesy!

Author's Response: Don't worry. James is coming, I promise!

Reviewer: draco_lover147
Date: 12/20/06 17:58
Chapter: The Letter

*gasp* that was so good and very funny. i love it.

Author's Response: Thank you soooooooooooo much! =D

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 12/19/06 20:06
Chapter: The Letter

I like it! It diffently don't think that it is to clich and I'm really happy that you had a person come to Lilys house and explain all that stuff to her parents, because alothough J.K. Rowling said that is what happened, maney authers do not write about this. I think It is really intersting. But with the thing with Lily telling the story, you might want to like tranport the reader into her memorys, like we are going in her pensilve so that we can get all the deatile and stuff.

Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks for the tips and I'll think about it. I thought that I might have James write a few chapters now and then.

Reviewer: Magical_Lily
Date: 12/19/06 16:04
Chapter: The Letter

good start
cant wait for me

Author's Response: Thanks! =D

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 12/19/06 10:37
Chapter: The Letter

ooh, i'll be waiting 4 more

Author's Response: Thanks, but it might take a while.

Reviewer: Margalot
Date: 12/19/06 9:53
Chapter: The Letter

Very good start. I look forward to the next and hopefully slightly more humorous chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks, and of course it'll be funnier. I have many jokes about James and Lily.

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
The Green Knight Rises by Kerichi 6th-7th Years
In Creevey Wizard Comics, the Green Knight aids those in need under the cloak...
Somebody Like You by Kerichi 6th-7th Years
After tea leaves predict romance for Snape, he makes a sardonic wish on...
Tom Riddle and the Cave of Living Waters by alittletiefling 6th-7th Years
What would happen if Tom Marvolo Riddle had been adopted by well-meaning squibs?...
FEATURED
Wild Card by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 6th-7th Years
It was going to happen eventually: Oliver Wood had to retire. But when the decision...
Half-life by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
Neville has the rest of his life ahead of him, but all he can do is look back...
Skinny Love by xxbabewithbrainsxx 6th-7th Years
“I’ve always been chubby. Admit it.” “You’ve never been skinny...
Tigerlily by Maple_and_PheonixFeather 3rd-5th Years
You promised yourself you'd never hurt her, but there are times when you wonder...
Astriferous by Padfoot11333 6th-7th Years
Merope Gaunt has never been celestial.Nominated for a 2014 QSQ - Best Dark/Angst.
CATEGORIES