Reviewer: laceymoibella
Date: 12/16/07 20:42
Chapter: A Phoenix's Song

Your peom was quite moving. Beautifully written.

~Lacey

Author's Response: I'm very glad you enjoyed this. I had a lot of fun writing it! Cyns

Reviewer: crazy_purple_hp_freak
Date: 12/24/06 7:06
Chapter: A Phoenix's Song

Wow Cyns! I really liked this. :) Though I don’t know “I heard the bells on Christmas Day” (well, if I do I don’t remember…) I thought that the parody worked well on its own as well, and the rhythm was really effective and consistent throughout, which gave the whole piece a sombre sort of mood.

I loved the repetition of So good can conquer bad at last. which kind of emphasised, for me, the importance of Dumbledore’s death in helping the good side win the war.

And while he’s there love will prevail,
So good can conquer bad at last.


Aww that was just a really lovely ending. This emphasis on hope and love was quite touching. Love this! Well done and good luck in the challenge.*Slyth Power* :D ~Suzie


Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked this. I had a lot of fun writing it. The line you pointed out is probably one of my favorite lines also. :) Merry Christmas! Cyns

Reviewer: wicked angel
Date: 12/23/06 23:03
Chapter: A Phoenix's Song

wow! really neat! i sang along and it worked really well! i like the way you repeated the last line of each verse, and how you retained the theme of the original carol: "with peace on earth, goodwill to men" and added a twinge of sadness. just lovely!!

Author's Response: I always try to sing the songs and tunes with the parodies. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this, I really had fun writing it. Cyns

Reviewer: Cwiddy
Date: 12/16/06 11:32
Chapter: A Phoenix's Song

Great song Sis!! 8) Did a great job with this!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!! :) Cyns

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 12/12/06 14:35
Chapter: A Phoenix's Song

Very nice! What a great carol to pair with this subject, it works really well. Your rhymes are great, as usual. I really like it, it's sweet. Good luck in the challenge! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thanks Gina! I wasn't sure if I'd get something writen for this challenge, but I'm very happy with the one I ended up with! :) I'm really glad that you enjoyed it! Cyns

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