Reviewer: dutzar
Date: 03/02/07 10:40
Chapter: Chapter One: Unexpected Comfort

Reading the first chapter, it felt like I was reading canon except for the fact that I knew it was a harmony fanon. Wonderfully written but the pace in the beginning was a wee bit quick especially with Ron's realisation of Hermione's love for Harry. Otherwise it was a lovely read for I evidently sighed after reading AND was very much taken aback when there was no 'next' button in sight! Looking forward to your next chapters!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I will hopefully be updating again very soon. There's been a bit of a lag due to the fact that I no longer have the Word program I use to write in, but I should be getting it reinstalled again soon... Oops! Once again, thank you for your kind words!

Reviewer: Periculum71
Date: 02/06/07 18:02
Chapter: Chapter One: Unexpected Comfort

Beautifully written. Waiting for more!

Reviewer: Sage_1986
Date: 01/30/07 2:00
Chapter: Chapter One: Unexpected Comfort

your a very good right keep it up

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Chapter 2 will be up soon!

Reviewer: Shibby14
Date: 01/29/07 16:26
Chapter: Chapter One: Unexpected Comfort

Well, the story is good. Although I think it is to straight forward, I mean Hermione realizing she is in love with Harry after all that drama in HBP.
And I would like to see Ron all pissed off and duel Harry and may be joining LoVo (Lord Voldemort).
But anyway, I hope you update soon, I cant wait to see the rest of the story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I love it when readers give me things to consider rather than just saying it is good. You're right, the first chapter was straightforward. I wanted a simple beginning. I am sorry to say, at this point, I do not forsee a dark side to Ron in this fic. I wanted to have a mature Ron, just for kicks. Again, thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: sorea01t
Date: 01/25/07 10:02
Chapter: Chapter One: Unexpected Comfort

i really like this story but why is it rated Professor when nothing bad happens in it

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! This story will develop slowly--very slowly. It is rated 'Professor' for things that will occur down the road. It's going to be a slower build, but will be worth it in the end. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sexylover
Date: 01/14/07 16:24
Chapter: Chapter One: Unexpected Comfort

wow its very good im so into it please contiue!!

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream
Date: 01/06/07 13:03
Chapter: Chapter One: Unexpected Comfort

Beautifully written, please continue!

Reviewer: Shibby14
Date: 12/27/06 10:44
Chapter: Chapter One: Unexpected Comfort

great story, i cant wait to read the rest of it.

Reviewer: megmo85
Date: 12/26/06 14:37
Chapter: Chapter One: Unexpected Comfort

Well, that was interesting. Why did they go the Grimmauld Place? I guess we will find that out. Good start. Ron handled it well. Glad for that:) Looking foward to your next chapter.

Reviewer: ryan_chang
Date: 12/26/06 1:33
Chapter: Chapter One: Unexpected Comfort

good for now but i want more

Reviewer: HermioneJPotter
Date: 12/22/06 23:57
Chapter: Chapter One: Unexpected Comfort

Wow...Awesome fisrt chapter...loved it!!! really great begninng...I just can't wait to read more... this story is going on my favorites list...

Reviewer: Amelie_13
Date: 12/21/06 14:19
Chapter: Chapter One: Unexpected Comfort

Great!Update soon!

Reviewer: master_of_dark_arts
Date: 12/20/06 19:08
Chapter: Chapter One: Unexpected Comfort

Interesting I hope you continue. Thanks for Ron acting like an adult for once.

Reviewer: Dobby12006
Date: 12/20/06 9:16
Chapter: Chapter One: Unexpected Comfort

To Fast on Harry and Hermoine

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