Reviewer: DontCallMeNymphadora
Date: 12/16/07 20:34
Chapter: In Love With a Potter

This is cute. I like the end a lot!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I had a lot of fun writing it. =)

Reviewer: Winged Artemis
Date: 02/11/07 7:27
Chapter: In Love With a Potter

Sweet!

She’s fallen in love with the boy she can’t stand.
How romantic! I love that! It's an excellent description of the way Lily feels - falling in love with someone that she despises!

Down she does tumble, but James breaks her fall
Metaphorically and in this story, this is a very good show of there-for-me-when-I'm-down, which is the kind of person that James is!

Great piece!

Hannah
Knight of the Turnip Table

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing! :]

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 01/01/07 17:33
Chapter: In Love With a Potter

That was so awesome.
-Susan

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! :]

Reviewer: crazy_purple_hp_freak
Date: 12/30/06 12:56
Chapter: In Love With a Potter

Wow! I really enjoyed this. The rhythm and word choice is really well thought out and I could hear the song playing in my head. :)

My favourite part was the ending:
Down she does tumble, but James breaks her fall,
“Well, maybe,” she thinks, “he’s okay after all.”

I love the thoughts in italics...they're so sweet! Good job and good luck in the challenge. ~Suzie



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I had to read it out loud like twenty times or something before I could get it to sound right. Thanks for reviewing! :]

Reviewer: wicked angel
Date: 12/23/06 23:00
Chapter: In Love With a Potter

adorable! i love that she's in love with his messy hair. that's one of my favorite parts about the Potter men too! well done and good luck!

Author's Response: I love their hair too! Thanks for reviewing! :]

Reviewer: makinmagic323
Date: 12/20/06 13:18
Chapter: In Love With a Potter

HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! hahaha the last lines are perrfect =)

Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you like it! :]

Reviewer: Ron x Hermione
Date: 12/15/06 16:02
Chapter: In Love With a Potter

Oh! That was cute! Great work!

Author's Response: Thanks! :]

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 12/13/06 15:44
Chapter: In Love With a Potter

LOL That was very cute and funny! Thanks for the giggles and well done! :)

Cyns

Author's Response: I'm glad it made you laugh! Thanks for reviewing. :]

Reviewer: Transcendence
Date: 12/13/06 8:02
Chapter: In Love With a Potter

Aw that was so cute! I liked the way it rhymes, it was nice.

Author's Response: Thanks! :]

Reviewer: MagEd
Date: 12/12/06 16:55
Chapter: In Love With a Potter

Very sweet. I can't write poetry to save my life, but you most certainly can! Excellent job.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I never write poetry, but I had a lot of fun with this. :]

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 12/12/06 14:37
Chapter: In Love With a Potter

That is so cute! I could totally "hear" this in my head as I read it. Good work with the rhyme and rhythm, and it told a story as well! Great job, and good luck in the challenge! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I was so happy to see I had a review for this. Thanks for taking the time to leave one. :]

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