Reviewer: cleggy
Date: 09/05/07 19:33
Chapter: Chapter Four - Coming Of Age

great cliff hanger

Author's Response: Thank you, and I appreciate all of your reviews! I'm thrilled to have you as a reader and look forward to hearing more of your thoughts! *Sunny*

Reviewer: cleggy
Date: 09/05/07 19:25
Chapter: Chapter Three - The Wedding

Iam so glad that you didn't over gloss the wedding like so many others fics do. and I really believe that youachieved harry's character by not making him pay much attention to it

Author's Response: Oh, good, I'm so glad you think so! I did worry about that, but I figured he probably wouldn't care too much for that mushy stuff!

Reviewer: cleggy
Date: 09/05/07 19:12
Chapter: Chapter Two Uninvited Guests

again great chapter. malfoy's character didn't appear to be what I pressumed, i would have thought he would've been a bit more subdued and at least have said something to harry but hey its your fic.

Author's Response: Yes, it depends on the reader, but some say I got it wrong with Draco. I've simply given him a bit more attention than Jo did, hehe.

Reviewer: cleggy
Date: 09/05/07 18:58
Chapter: Chapter One - The Magic Carpet

probably one of the best first chapters i've read on mn. I like the way you have split the chapter in two just as rowling has done before. looking forward to how harry and co learn of malfoy getting order protection

Author's Response: Wow, thank you - what a huge compliment! Cheers! *Sunny*

Reviewer: AlteredEcho07
Date: 07/24/07 16:24
Chapter: Epilogue

Now that I've finished Deathly Hallows, I must say I really do hope you continue to write. I found your story entertaining on a grand level, one not often reached with most fics, and I believe that you wont abandon your stories half through them, like so many others do. I just can't believe that it's over, that's why you must keep wiriting, lol, so I can get my HP fix from your wonderful storys!

By the way, excellent job and I await your next masterpiece.

Author's Response: Wow, this review was so sweet that it brought tears to my eyes! Thank you SO much for such kind words! And I will definitely keep writing, and hope that you'll keep reading! It's an honor to have readers like you. Love, Sunny

Reviewer: Irith
Date: 07/22/07 17:09
Chapter: Epilogue

awesome ending! this was a superb story, and I can't wait to see more from you!
Anything else I said would pretty much be repeating what I already said, so there you go...

Author's Response: More coming as soon as I return from Prophecy, hehe. Have LOVED having you as a reader, and hope you're enjoying DH. Love, Sunny

Reviewer: harrypotterfangirl21
Date: 07/20/07 14:34
Chapter: Epilogue

I loved this story! It was a good take on what Book 7 could have been. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you, my dear! So glad you enjoyed it, and hope you're off enjoying the real thing now too! *Sunny*

Reviewer: Merope Gaunt
Date: 07/20/07 2:51
Chapter: Epilogue

B-E-A-utiful ending! And a great story, in general. I'm sorry to see it come to an end. Never stop writing - you really do have talent!
P.S. I notcied that your story still says: "Completed: No", so you may wish to fix that! ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm sad to end the story too, but I'm so glad that so many people have enjoyed reading it as much as I've enjoyed writing it! Your "never stop writing" comment really touched my heart, so thank you. As for the "complete" thing, I need to update a few chapters first, just for some little errors, and then I'll click the button! Thanks SO much for reading! Love, Sunny

Reviewer: petters_debt
Date: 07/19/07 8:37
Chapter: Chapter ThirtyThree - Visible Memories

Sorry it's taken me so long to R&R. I've been mourning for the DH. I can't believe it's almost here! Anyways, this is a wonderful story and you are a brilliant writer. You should write some more stories. Only it be a HG ship hehe. I'm a HG person but I really like Luci and Harry too. You did a really good job at showing Harry's emotions at the grave. I think that is how he might talk to his parents in the DH. And Luci making him get over his fear of the tower was a brilliant idea too! Well, can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm mourning DH too. Cry. So no worries on not reading promptly, haha! Tomorrow night, we'll know everything... Anyowl, yes, I do plan to write more stories, and there may very well be an H/G in there somewhere. But I am glad that you like him with Luci, as well. Thank you SO much for such a wonderful review, and the final chapter is posted! Love, Sunny

Reviewer: Mhulan
Date: 07/16/07 20:38
Chapter: Chapter ThirtyThree - Visible Memories

Is this the ending of the story? If it is, it's an amazing and wonderful story. I felt like I'm actually reading the seventh book. Maybe your story might be similar to J.K. Rowling's. Who knows? Well, I hope you make more stories in the future! =)

Author's Response: This was the last chapter, yes, but there is now a final Epilogue. Cry. And tomorrow night, we'll figure out if I'm right about anything! Thank you SO much for such a lovely compliment - that my story feels like Book 7. And, yes, there will be more stories in the future! Love, Sunny

Reviewer: Lost_Wizard
Date: 07/15/07 13:14
Chapter: Chapter ThirtyThree - Visible Memories

Your version of book seven was Fantastic a perfect 10 out of 10. I think you would have been a better pick to have written the movie script for The Order Of the Phoenix than David Yutz (misspelling intended). I only hope that DH will be as positive as your version was. I always seen these seven books a little like the seven stages of grieving. I am a little sad not to have found it till it was already finished if you ever write more stories please let me know I would be more the eager to give you my email and Good luck to you in the future.

Author's Response: WOW! Thank you SO much! I am totally with you about David Yutz. I cannot believe how badly he ruined our story. It saddens me, really. But, yes, it IS like the seven stages of grieving! Tomorrow night, we'll know everything, and nothing will ever be the same. Kind of scary. But I will write many more stories in the future, and I do hope to read your reviews of them! Thanks very much indeed for such a flattering review! Love, Sunny

Reviewer: Lost_Wizard
Date: 07/15/07 13:11
Chapter: Chapter ThirtyThree - Visible Memories

Your version of book seven was Fantastic a perfect 10 out of 10. I think you would have been a better pick to have written the movie script for The Order Of the Phoenix than David Yutz (misspelling intended). I only hope that DH will be as positive as your version was. I always seen these seven books a little like the seven stages of grieving. I am a little sad not to have found it till it was already finished if you ever write more stories please let me know I would be more the eager to give you my email and Good luck to you in the future.

Reviewer: Irith
Date: 07/14/07 17:46
Chapter: Chapter ThirtyThree - Visible Memories

so....this is the end, right? That was sad, and yet cool at the same time... marvelous story!

Author's Response: Thank you, darling! This was the last chapter, but there is a final Epilogue that you can now read, as well. Please enjoy! *Sunny*

Reviewer: Dii
Date: 07/12/07 23:02
Chapter: Chapter ThirtyThree - Visible Memories

This was a really sweet chapter! I loved how you conveyed the devotion and love Harry and Luci have for each other. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for such a fabulous review! Cheers! *Sunny*

Reviewer: GreenMan1966
Date: 07/12/07 19:10
Chapter: Chapter One - The Magic Carpet

So, I've read your story from the beginning, and frankly haven't liked much of it - but I now MUST TELL YOU that your theory & explanation about Harry's scar is BY FAR THE BEST I HAVE EVER HEARD and I feel STRONGLY that this may actually be what JKR has in mind for us to learn. The explanation of why Albus gets an excited look on his face when Harry tells the resurrection story during GOF... the way a horcrux looks when it's been destroyed (the Gaunt ring, cracked) all fits SO WELL I have to commend you! WELL DONE!

Author's Response: Well, first of all, thank you for the compliments! If I may ask, what about the story didn't you like? I'd love to hear it, so that I can improve as a write in the future. Best wishes, Sunny

Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 07/12/07 17:47
Chapter: Chapter ThirtyThree - Visible Memories

Awwww,sooo cute!!!! I love all of the closure,it really was great how harry went to his parents graves and was talking to them ,and how he felt better afterward.Great job on keeping the emotions real and lifelike,Great story, *~*Sarah*~*

Author's Response: Thank you, Sarah! (That's my sister's name, hehe.) SO glad you enjoyed the story and I really appreciate the lovely review! Love, Sunny

Reviewer: Silvygreen
Date: 07/12/07 17:42
Chapter: Chapter ThirtyThree - Visible Memories

Beautiful. Just bloody beautiful. Congratulations on such a wonderful fanfic and for finishing before the seventh. I've simply loved this fanfic of yours. I only hope that the real HP7 will turn out as happy. Thanks for your hard work and quick updates--you've helped me spend the time until the actual 7th comes out. Amazing fic--And don't stop writing! Let me know if you write anymore!

Author's Response: Oh, wow, what a spectacular review! Thank you SO much! I'm thrilled that I could help you whittle away the days until Book Seven. Just one left, sadly. But I will be posting a new story very shortly, and I hope to continue to have you as a reader! Love, Sunny

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick
Date: 07/09/07 0:10
Chapter: Chapter ThirtyTwo - The Headmaster's Sacrifice

Great chapter. I love how you explained the elusive "look of triumph" in Dumbledores eyes. Looking forward to your next chapter, and book 7 in...12 days!!!

Author's Response: 12 days? Wow, sorry it took me so long to respond! It's now ONE DAY! Ahhh! But so glad you liked my explanation, and we'll know the truth tomorrow night... *Sunny*

Reviewer: lunascope24
Date: 07/08/07 20:59
Chapter: Chapter ThirtyTwo - The Headmaster's Sacrifice

finally!!!!! a decent and believable explanation for that gleam of triumph in Dumbledore's eyes... :)

Author's Response: Whoo hoo! SO glad you think so! It was a bold leap and people seem to be fond of it, so I'm thrilled! Thanks so much! *Sunny*

Reviewer: lunascope24
Date: 07/08/07 20:58
Chapter: Chapter ThirtyTwo - The Headmaster's Sacrifice

finally!!!!! a decent and believable explanation for that gleam of triumph in Dumbledore's eyes... :)

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