Reviewer: Dorky Dorcas
Date: 02/03/07 16:59
Chapter: Chapter 1-Several Conversations

COOL!! This is really good luv the way u added Dorcas Meadowes into it 2 (I LUV DORCAS!!!!!! EVEN THROUGH WE ONLY KNOW 1 SENTENCE ABOUT HER...but that point aside) plez carry on with this & i'm gonna + it 2 my faves if u dont mind

Reviewer: Obsessive
Date: 01/07/07 16:18
Chapter: Chapter 2- The Attack

Looking good so far. Keep up the good writing!

Reviewer: spike312
Date: 12/09/06 9:28
Chapter: Chapter 1-Several Conversations

Very well written! If Harry can escape an Imperius Curse than Dumbledore can too. Here is a mistake I caught on.
"They didnít know how to take of him and work as full-time Aurors." There should be "care" after the word "take".

Author's Response: Thanks for catching that typo!

Reviewer: Gwen_Ravenclaw
Date: 12/09/06 2:48
Chapter: Chapter 1-Several Conversations

It's very promising - keep it up. Not sure I think Dumbledore could be easily imperiused either, but I'm sure the Longbottoms will find out all. One thing I found confusing - who's Billy?

Author's Response: Oh ha. That was stupid of me. I changed Billy to Gawain Robards halfway through writing it. Thanks for catching it.

Reviewer: EmmilineVance
Date: 12/08/06 23:11
Chapter: Chapter 1-Several Conversations

hey i really like this keep it goin

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