This is one of my fav. poems that I've ever read. And that encludes the ones I've written. It is just beautiful. One question tho...what happens to Ginny after she kills Voldemort? Does she kill her self? (okay that was two questions)
Author's Response: Hm.... I never thought about that. I might write a sequel to this one day.
woha... i... wow
Author's Response: Thanks? Lol, I hope you liked it.
no offense(yes i know that kind of gets rid of the point of saying it), but that was depressing.
Author's Response: well, it WAS about the final battle, and harry DID die, so yeah, I think it WOULD be depressing ;]
OMG. Harry CANNOT die. But if he did, this is what'd happen. You captured it perfectly.
Author's Response: I know he cant. lol. Thanks you!
That made me tear up! Its so wonderfully written! This is my favorite poem by you! You should write a Final Battle one...!
Author's Response: Awwww thanks. Maybe I will write a final battle one!
Love it! does Ginny kill herself after she kills Voldie?
Voldemort: Don't call me Voldie!!
Author's Response: hmm.... never thought of that....yes, i guess she does! thank you!
OMG that was soooooooo uber sad!!!!!!! U R trying to depress me aren't you?
Author's Response: no, i'm not trying to depress you. why, is it working ;]. Thanks. I was aiming for sad depressyness
Oh, that was so sad! Gosh, you're a great poet! It's good to see that Ginny killed Voldy- that's something that I've never seen before, really. You had the wording down, and I loved the way that you ended each stanza (thing), with The Tear I Never Cried.
That was really sad. if that had been a fic, i would have cried!
Author's Response: awwwwwwwww thanks
Really sad, really good! *starts to cry, poem was so sad* 10/10! Excellent job!~H_o_I_
Author's Response: thank you!
Wow. The ending was sad and the repitition with The Tear Never Cried is really good.
Author's Response: OMG thank you!!!!
What? I haven't reviewed this yet? Truly horrible...i thought better of you...
HAHA! Wow i bet you could just kill me now :) Excellente! 2 words...well actually 3. MAKE MORE...SOON! Hehe, well, i sincerely hope more of your stories get in.
Author's Response: hahaha thanks!!!!! no, i couldnt kill you know, (but i DO know where you live, i have taken you your homework on multiple occasions) but that isnt the point of this review(cuz thats spam and we all hate that) I have made more, but im waiting till after the queue reopens to send it in. i got a few poems and a james/lily fic. the j/l got deleted... darn....like, from my comp, but i know whats on it. good luck to you too! keep trying! get a beta if you need to.
YES!!! *claps wildly* AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it!
I LOVE IT!!!!
U COULD SELL IT FOR SOME SERIOUS DOUGH!!!
I think u shud rite some for r/hr
I luB ur wrk
and i luB u 2
make it feliz
cuz i cried
u've got some serious pwr
great skillz boi
Author's Response: I lub ya too grl! just dont got PMS-y on me (insider) I will rite r/hr... and mabye throw in GY next time.... hahahahaha lol
what? you don't have any more poems? you bettah start writin'!!! haha jk but i would DEFINITELY enjoy reading some more of your poems!
Author's Response: thanks !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm sorry, i have other stories that i am writing, but i will think about more poems too! thanks!
omg this poem is so great but so sad! it almost made me cry! okay, okay, so it did make me cry...but only cuz i'm a sap! anyways i've seen that person 'the critic' leaving mean and totally untrue reviews on other peoples' poems or stories, and he's just mean. anyways im completely IN LOVE with this poem!!!!
Author's Response: thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooo much! I really do appreciate this review soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much! The_Critic was mean... he made me sad... jkjk... I see why they call him "The_Critic". He(or she) is mean.... THANK YOU :-)
YAY!!! YAY SETH!! YAY SLUG!! amazing..its so sad.
Author's Response: thanks! I luv you two!
Author's Response: Oh, and my name isn't Seth. It's Roger. I know, I know, the identidy crisis joke made u confused, "Jenny". It's okay. I still love you
Whew. Well, that just wasted seventy precious seconds of my life that I will never get back. Boring, unemotional, bad rhyme scheme.
Author's Response: If these 70 seconds are so precious to you, then don't spend them on here writing reviews that waste even more time. It wasn't even supposed to rhyme, so the rhyme scheme was quite fine, actually. Think about this- You read something you think is bad, and I can understand, not everyone is gonna like everything I write. Then, you comment on how you wasted time reading this story, when you, in reality, are wasting even more time writing a review. If you didn't like it and think it wasted time, then don't waste more time TELLING me you didn't like it. If you think I am wrong, feel free to tell me.
Author's Response: Although what I said in the above review totally contradicts what I am about to say, I greatly appreciate the review. I just thought I should point out that if you hadn't commented, you would have saved time. Also, if you are reading this, aren't you just wasting more time?
Author's Response: Also, before you go insulting other people's stories, let's see you get one up. It takes alot of hard work. I greatly appreciate the review, and as I said above, not everyone is gonna like everything I write. But, it takes alot of hard work. You try getting one up! I've been trying one since mid-September. It still isn't up. Plus, if it is THAT bad, how come I have been favorited twice? The fact that one of the people who added me to favorites is my best friend and the other is my cousin is TOTALLY beside the point. I just wanted to let you know this. Well, good luck
that was so good i love your use of,
'the rears never left my eyes, the tear never cried' at the end of each para.
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate this so much!
Wow, this poem is so beautiful and just how Ginny would react. I love it so much!
Author's Response: Thanks!