Reviews For Undefined love
Reviewer: brokinheartzndreamz
Date: 01/11/05 20:28
Chapter: The ring

This story just gets better and better!!!Post the next chapter soon!!!

Reviewer: Venus_Rising
Date: 01/11/05 17:35
Chapter: The ring

Ohher, this last chapter kept us guessing and more than a little confused. I hope Ron finds out about Harry and Hermione soon. I can't stand all this secercy. Although, sneaking around has its merits too, ;)

Author's Response: Sorry for that but I really adore secret love. I had made it a point even before starting the fic that I will make H/Hr share a secret love. And it don't think it is that confusing. Try reading it again.

Reviewer: Taty
Date: 01/11/05 14:24
Chapter: The ring

THANK YOU so much!!! I don't know why but this time it worked!! I think I've had a dozen new passwords sent to me and this time it clicked. I'm not computer savvy as you can tell. I loved the new chapter. I am curious why Ron showed such a reaction to the ring( in a somewhat negative way) and Dumbledore and Sirius didn't seem to have a problem with it. Maybe Ron doesn't want to admit what I think he knows in his heart. Anyway great ,wonderful and all good things. Until chapter 11. Thanks for the e-mail back and the help.

Author's Response: WOW! Glad that I could help. As for your questions... well, you know I cannot answer that. ;)

Reviewer: Swimangel57
Date: 01/11/05 13:26
Chapter: The ring

It just keeps getting better! I can't wait to read the rest of it! PLEASE update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I will try to comply with your request.

Reviewer: elf_girl_11
Date: 01/10/05 19:03
Chapter: The pleasures of solitude

Awesome. 100% awesome

Author's Response: Same here.

Reviewer: 0nly 0ne true l0ve
Date: 01/10/05 17:19
Chapter: The pleasures of solitude

this is an awesome story ! i love it it is consistent and you know how to write ! keep up the good work !! i x3 it !

Author's Response: Thanks! The review is also awesome. i

Reviewer: Swimangel57
Date: 01/10/05 13:45
Chapter: The pleasures of solitude

I love this story! It is awesome! You have 10 reviews! PLEASE update soon!!!

Author's Response: The next chapter is up. Thanks for the enthusiastic review!

Reviewer: youngwriter16
Date: 01/10/05 12:40
Chapter: The pleasures of solitude

i love this chapter its so cute.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Janax
Date: 01/10/05 12:28
Chapter: The pleasures of solitude

Very nicely written thus far. I sometimes seems like I give the same review out for different writers, but what I look for is meter and smoothness in the story (grammar, etc.), in addition to just keeping the characters "believable". If I had more time I'd expand on the one chapter I've written myself, inspired by some of the stories like yours, but so far I'm stuck reading and reviewing :P. I've enjoyed your efforts very much so far and would like to see you continue!

Author's Response: WOW! Thanks for the big long review. And I am surely going to continue...

Reviewer: Stuart
Date: 01/10/05 11:41
Chapter: The beginning

Don't give up so fast mate! You are doing a good job so far as far as I am concerned. Just because people don't review doesn't mean they don't read it! Have faith in yourself dear son! ;-)

Author's Response: That is what upsets me... people read but do not review. It hardly takes a minute. And I am not giving up. I just feel so sad when my chapters have 6-7 reviews each when other author's stories have more than 50 reviews per chapter. But it is OK. I am trying to make my story good enough to earn that many reviews. Thanks for the encoragement! Make sure you see me till the end. ;D

Reviewer: carbaughtc
Date: 01/10/05 11:08
Chapter: The pleasures of solitude

I love this story, I am well addicted. Please update, it's bad enough July 16 is so far away, I have to have some way to deal!!!

Author's Response: Oh! So you had already read after the fourth chapter! The seventh chapter is also up. And please don't compare my update with JKR's even in the slightest! Even my best update can never ever provide you the satisfaction and happiness that 16th of July is bound to provide you. She is just tooo great to be compared with us. :D

Reviewer: carbaughtc
Date: 01/10/05 11:07
Chapter: The ring

That chapter was amazingly sweet. This is a very well written story. Please keep the chapters flowing!

Author's Response: You are behind my friend. Three more chapters are published after that one. Read 'em. Thanks!

Reviewer: patronum
Date: 01/10/05 11:00
Chapter: The pleasures of solitude

S-U-B-M-I-T T-H-E- N-E-X-T C-H-A-P-T-E-R!!! please!!!! I really want to know what happes!!! Correction, I NEED to know what happens so please, from one Harry Potter mega-fan to another, for the love of all that is cool (HARRY POTTER INCLUDED), find it in your heart to stop toying with us an SUBMIT THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! -Thanks! YOU RULE

Author's Response: I H-A-V-E S-U-B-M-T-T-E-D T-H-E N-E-X-T C-H-A-P-T-E-R. And I have stopped toying with you all (not that I ever was) and the next chapter is up. Hope you find it enjoyable! Thanks!

Reviewer: Potterfan524
Date: 01/10/05 10:17
Chapter: The pleasures of solitude

This is a wonderful story...Please don't abandon it!! I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: You don't have to. It is already up. And I won't abandon it, don't worry. Thanks!

Reviewer: The Alchemist
Date: 01/10/05 9:56
Chapter: The pleasures of solitude

Let me just say you have intrigued me with the friendship ring. Plus, I can were might had to have rewritten this chapter 4 times to keep it PG-13. Very Steamy! Oh! This is number ten so put up the next chapter and make it a long one, please.

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is already up. It is exactly 2,056 words (is that long enough for you?). Keep reviewing!

Reviewer: moony2005
Date: 01/10/05 0:03
Chapter: The beginning

I'm hooked to the story. Please write on. I want to know how it continues on. It's a wonderful story. I really like it.

Author's Response: Thanks! I have submitted the seventh chapter. Make sure you review it after reading it.

Reviewer: 100_percent_hp_fan
Date: 01/09/05 21:23
Chapter: The pleasures of solitude

Please continue this story! I think i'd die with curiosity about the ring if you stopped it now!

Author's Response: I should never have the need to stop if I keep getting reviews. But that is one thing that you really have to sqeeze out of people. :( And thanks for your eagerness!!!

Reviewer: Magdalene Rose
Date: 01/09/05 19:35
Chapter: The pleasures of solitude

me again. I really would review this again and again, but that would make me look stupid. You call this three reviews.

Author's Response: I uploaded the next chapter even though I got only nine reviews for the sixth one just because of your enthusiasm. Maybe someday I will really be a successful author if I keep getting readers and reviewers like you. Thank you very much!!! :)

Reviewer: Magdalene Rose
Date: 01/09/05 19:09
Chapter: The pleasures of solitude

This is really good!! Please continue with it!!

Author's Response: Thanks! The seventh chapter is submitted.

Reviewer: Venus_Rising
Date: 01/08/05 1:01
Chapter: The pleasures of solitude

Nice, i wish you had gone beyond r though. But it is very endearing the way it is now.

Author's Response: Thanks! You don't know just how much I wish to make it 'R' rated. But there are reasons behind not making this an 'R' rated fic, the most prominent one being that many people don't like to read 'R' rated fics and I really don't want such readers who are looking just for smut. Smut within a good storyline is perfect. Anyways, the sequel may be 'R', just watch out for it! ;)

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