This was really good. I'm surprised no one else thought of it first, too, but I'm sure many will follow your example.lol Good job, and keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your encouragement. I don't really care if people use my idea or not.
Way to go, sister and sister. lol. I can't wait for the most but I get to read them before anyone else since your my sister! lol. Hahahaha
Author's Response: I just realized they this is called 'Chapter 1' like there's more chapters. Geesh. Thanks for the review, and I know you're biased!
That. Was. Absolutely. Utterly. Brilliant!!!!!!!!!
An amzing combination of humour, romance, embarrassment, everything! I absolutely loved it. One of my favourite J/L stories in a LONG time . . . congratulations on an incredible story idea, and an absolutly excellent representation of it. I could rave about this for days . . .
Author's Response: :O Really? You liked it that much? Ooh! Thank you! Thank you! *bows then hugs you*
Aww that was so cute! *happy sigh* I wanted to read this earlier today but I didn't have time to.
Your sister is amazingly cool, just like this story. The part where we found out Lily thought he was a werewolf made me choke on my tea. Then when James told her he wasn't a werewolf, that was laugh out loud funny.
Author's Response: Aha, young missy! You laugh now, but what if YOU accused the man you loved of being a werewolf and he actually turned out to be an Animagus who only ran around with a werewolf who happened to be a guy you knew too? See. I'm sure you can relate to how humilliating that would be. Heehee. Just playing. Thanks for the review.
hahahahaha!! I love how she teases him!! That seriously made my day!
Author's Response: ^_^ And you just made mine.
Nice job, very cute, very creative.
Author's Response: I give all credit to my sister. Except the words, sentences, formatting, and... okay, so basically, she just gets credit for the idea. =D
Really good! Now all u need to do is write a sequal!! ~Ginny~
PS: writeing in the dark is harder then you think. Sry for mispells!!
Author's Response: A what? A sequel? Are you kidding? What sequel can you do to that? "And then they lived happily ever after. Until Voldemort killed them. The end." Is that better?
I like it. I especially like the end. It was good.
Author's Response: Heehee. Thanks. My brothers actually got pretty irritated at the ending. I'm glad you didn't.
:D So cute! Poor Lily! But it is a good way to have her find out, very original, too! I like the ending... it shows that they did have a relationship instead of rushing everything! And Lily's thought were very realistic and did make a lot of sense, even if they were wrong! Great story!
Author's Response: They were logically, but the facts were misleading. Don't you think that would have been such a horrible mistake? Good thing he loved her back!
Loved it! I never thought of it from this angle before but you and your sister are more than correct I would guess in thinking that Lily might have thought James a werewolf. Hope to read more of your stories!
Author's Response: You'll read more? Then I'll write more! They kind of just rejected one, but I'll get it up as soon as it's reformed. I hope you'll read it!
Nice job! This was a very original and interesting way for James and Lily to have their first kiss. I never thought about how Lily found about Remus, or about James being an Animagi. I really liked the part where he showed her his Animagus form. Good luck with your future writing! ~Gina :)
Author's Response: See? My sister's brilliant, because no one ever thinks about it... but they should, shouldn't they? I keep hugging her when I think about it. =D
Very Cute, I love their quips, they seem to be so totally in their character.
Author's Response: Shucks! Thanks. I'm alway worried that I'll rub off on them, and they'll just end up sappy. I'm so glad that you thought they were in character.