Way to go, sister and sister. lol. I can't wait for the most but I get to read them before anyone else since your my sister! lol. Hahahaha
Author's Response: I just realized they this is called 'Chapter 1' like there's more chapters. Geesh. Thanks for the review, and I know you're biased!
That. Was. Absolutely. Utterly. Brilliant!!!!!!!!!
An amzing combination of humour, romance, embarrassment, everything! I absolutely loved it. One of my favourite J/L stories in a LONG time . . . congratulations on an incredible story idea, and an absolutly excellent representation of it. I could rave about this for days . . .
Author's Response: :O Really? You liked it that much? Ooh! Thank you! Thank you! *bows then hugs you*
Aww that was so cute! *happy sigh* I wanted to read this earlier today but I didn't have time to.
Your sister is amazingly cool, just like this story. The part where we found out Lily thought he was a werewolf made me choke on my tea. Then when James told her he wasn't a werewolf, that was laugh out loud funny.
Author's Response: Aha, young missy! You laugh now, but what if YOU accused the man you loved of being a werewolf and he actually turned out to be an Animagus who only ran around with a werewolf who happened to be a guy you knew too? See. I'm sure you can relate to how humilliating that would be. Heehee. Just playing. Thanks for the review.
hahahahaha!! I love how she teases him!! That seriously made my day!
Author's Response: ^_^ And you just made mine.
Nice job, very cute, very creative.
Author's Response: I give all credit to my sister. Except the words, sentences, formatting, and... okay, so basically, she just gets credit for the idea. =D
Really good! Now all u need to do is write a sequal!! ~Ginny~
PS: writeing in the dark is harder then you think. Sry for mispells!!
Author's Response: A what? A sequel? Are you kidding? What sequel can you do to that? "And then they lived happily ever after. Until Voldemort killed them. The end." Is that better?
I like it. I especially like the end. It was good.
Author's Response: Heehee. Thanks. My brothers actually got pretty irritated at the ending. I'm glad you didn't.
:D So cute! Poor Lily! But it is a good way to have her find out, very original, too! I like the ending... it shows that they did have a relationship instead of rushing everything! And Lily's thought were very realistic and did make a lot of sense, even if they were wrong! Great story!
Author's Response: They were logically, but the facts were misleading. Don't you think that would have been such a horrible mistake? Good thing he loved her back!
Loved it! I never thought of it from this angle before but you and your sister are more than correct I would guess in thinking that Lily might have thought James a werewolf. Hope to read more of your stories!
Author's Response: You'll read more? Then I'll write more! They kind of just rejected one, but I'll get it up as soon as it's reformed. I hope you'll read it!
Nice job! This was a very original and interesting way for James and Lily to have their first kiss. I never thought about how Lily found about Remus, or about James being an Animagi. I really liked the part where he showed her his Animagus form. Good luck with your future writing! ~Gina :)
Author's Response: See? My sister's brilliant, because no one ever thinks about it... but they should, shouldn't they? I keep hugging her when I think about it. =D
Very Cute, I love their quips, they seem to be so totally in their character.
Author's Response: Shucks! Thanks. I'm alway worried that I'll rub off on them, and they'll just end up sappy. I'm so glad that you thought they were in character.
