THIS IS COMPLETELY INGENIOUS. I APSOLUTLY LOVE IT. great work. :)
That idea was genius! Great characterisation too :)
i love it!! i never thought that anyone would mistake james as a werewolf but it DOES make sense. great idea!!!
This was a really good idea, congrats to your sister!
The beginning of the story was specially well-written; in my opinion, the way an author starts a story is very important, and you initiated yours incredibly well. Keep it up!
This was very entertaining and quite well written. congrats to your sister for coming up with such a great idea and to you for putting it into action.
Aww! This is so good! I really want you to write more for some of your other stories, I think I've read all of them, now, so yay! Great job on this one!
That was really good. Your sister's idea was great, but you need to give yourself some credit, too. Not all people can write this well. I loved the story line. Give both yourself and your sister a pat on the back for me! I liked the ending by the way.
Ha... interesting. Yers, your sister is a genius. Props to you both
Your story's great! Great idea, great style... I loved to see Lily's reactions, both to James being a werewolf.. and to James not being a werewolf : ) And the introduction was great too... and the end... I'll stop there, I'd quote the whole story
really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood!!!! i lilke it A LOT!!!
i liked it but i think that they should have gone to breakfast together other then that though it was amazing
Author's Response: I don't think so. James just had an uber rough night. I don't think he'd be up to breakfast.
It is great. No doubt!!!!
Author's Response: No doubt? Fine. I have no qualms. Thanks for reviewing!
This was really good. I'm surprised no one else thought of it first, too, but I'm sure many will follow your example.lol Good job, and keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your encouragement. I don't really care if people use my idea or not.