Reviewer: krumseeker15
Date: 12/30/06 23:44
Chapter: _

very cute...but i didnt get the ending!

Author's Response: Hermione gives Ron a hint she wish him kissing her again, hoping that happens in the right moment. Got now? Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: to_the_stage93
Date: 12/16/06 12:49
Chapter: _

I liked your story and I wanted to congradulate you for writing and posting a fic that is in a language other than your native one!! I am taking Italian and we're learning how to write (a little bit) and it is very difficult to write in a second language, so I want to give you kudos for a job well done!!!

Author's Response: You are right about writing in a non native language which you didn't use habitually. It's really hard. I've been studying english for a lot of years, but I managed a rough translation. It was accurately revised by my beta, Paisa. I'm happy you liked my story. Thank for your review and your congratulation and good luck for your italian writing. ;-) Rik

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 12/14/06 18:03
Chapter: _

Beautiful, simply beautiful

Author's Response: Thanks again.

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 12/14/06 18:03
Chapter: _

Beautiful, simply beautiful

Author's Response: Thank you very much

Reviewer: LillysOfTheValley
Date: 12/07/06 16:16
Chapter: _

What a lovely story! Everyone was spot on and the wors were just perfect! Brilliantly done! this is so sweet.

Author's Response: I'm glad to read your compliments. Thank you very much.
Rik

Reviewer: Paisa
Date: 12/07/06 8:26
Chapter: _

I just want to tell you again, that you did an awesome job with the story! The characterisation, the plot, everything! I absolutely loved the this part;

"Ron," she called. Ron turned to her, perplexed. "There is also something else you have to do," she said with a slightly unsure voice, "without expecting help from Felix Felicis again." Ron raised his eyebrows, confused for several seconds, then his face lightened up, his mouth opened. He looked at Hermione, who was already starting to climb the first steps of the stairs.


"Hey! Wait," he called. The girl turned to look at him and dedicated a shy smile and the sweetest glance then disappeared without even letting Ron talk.


Please do believe that even though the language barrier, you are still a wonderful writer!


Author's Response: You are lovely and make me confused. In whole the story, not excepting the part you cited, you caugth the meaning I intended to have. And your beta gave my own words a greater sound. Thanks for your help, Rik

Reviewer: smiley10792
Date: 12/06/06 18:11
Chapter: _

Nice job. The translation was very understandable and the story was very cute!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, Paisa did a great job on my rough translation.

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