Reviewer: GringaHarryPotter
Date: 04/21/11 10:15
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

This was absolutely beautiful. You had me weeping at the first few lines of the letter. Hauntingly sad, and heartbreakingly painful, but in a good way, if that makes any sense. Just beautiful. Thank you for writing this honest and raw piece of work.


Reviewer: GringaHarryPotter
Date: 04/21/11 10:14
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

This was absolutely beautiful. You had me weeping at the first few lines of the letter. Hauntingly sad, and heartbreakingly painful, but in a good way, if that makes any sense. Just beautiful. Thank you for writing this honest and raw piece of work.


Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 09/13/09 12:14
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

aawww :'( im sobbing here. this is so amazing! the letter doesnt sound like something ron would say, but i definately believe that he would write that to her. you did a wonderful job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, I admit, the letter is not as Ron as I would have liked. This was the first fanfic I ever wrote, and hopefully my grasp of the characters has improved. Thanks again for reading!

Reviewer: LoveHarry_93
Date: 02/24/08 2:11
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

I'm a mess of tears! Beautifully written, I'd love to read more R/Hr stories from you! (:

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! I have a few more R/Hr stories up at the moment, if you want to check them out.

Reviewer: whatwehopefor
Date: 02/20/08 14:45
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

i absolutely loved it. you stayed true to ron and hermione's characters (something that not everyone has done...) and brought your own story into it. thanks for a great, heart-warming, beautiful story!

Author's Response: *blushes* Aww shucks...Lol, thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Ardilien
Date: 01/16/08 20:51
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

absolutely amazing. the letter, is very Ron, and very beautiful

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 01/01/08 16:08
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

im reading this for the first time this year, this story is like a magnet to me and even though ive read it loads of times before i seem to cry more and more each time i actually need to change my tshirt and eeew it tastes like salt (note to self: never order tears at a resterant) lovbely beautiful
sorry im at a loss for anything witty to put like the sirius thing ;last time so heres a kinda rubbish one
when life gives you lemons, take the back to the shop and buy a harry potter book instead:)

Author's Response: LOL! Thank you very much, and I'll be sure never to order tears from a restaurant as they donít sound too appetizing. =]

Reviewer: Wolfie Jojo
Date: 11/06/07 12:12
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

*SNIFF* Ah bless! I *SNIFF* can't believe how *SNIFF* sad this is.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks dear! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: mia2223
Date: 11/06/07 2:02
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

the letter is so beautiful!
I have tears in my eyes!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 11/04/07 16:18
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

i have finally stopped crying... seriously i have no idea why??? how did u do that... i have only ever cried in 2 other books love it r/h forever and ever
sirius black sorely underestimated the dangers of curtains.... lol....

Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much! I giggled about what you wrote about Sirius Black. Hehe!

Reviewer: JRTerrier
Date: 10/24/07 23:56
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

Sad. Is this the end?

Author's Response: Yes, sadly it is. I was thinking about doing a second one shot about Harriet's general life or something, but it wouldn't be until summer or during winter break. I just have way too much going on with high school right now, and not near enough time to write.

Reviewer: ron_chaser
Date: 10/23/07 19:09
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

Wow. That was amazing! I read on the forum that you were inspired by Taylor Swift's, Tim McGraw, and so of course being the country fan that I am, I just had to read it. It was not what I expected, but it was even better! You characterized Ron so well through the letter, I don't think I've read better (ooh that rhymed)! Harriet, like someone else mentioned, had a great mix of Ron, Hermione, and individuality! It was truly great, you really have a skill for writing, especially characterization.

Author's Response: Haha! Sorry to get you confused on that bit. I was referring to the title, and how Taylor talked about her hidden letter under the bed. I'm glad you liked it still. Thanks for all the compliments as well. Take care dear.

Reviewer: Ebony14
Date: 08/29/07 7:45
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

beautiful. i can't find words. really. it's so beautiful. i've read the harry potter books and was reduced to a puddle of tears. but among all the fanfictions i've ever read, this is the first one that brought tears to my eyes. i simply loved it. everything about it. i'd write a lot more. i feel like writing a lot more. but if i do, then i'll be writing the same things over and over again. so i think i'll stop here. for one last time...your story is really beautiful. and i love it. :-)

Author's Response: Wow, thanks ever so much! I haven't been on the internet in over five days because of high school, so I felt so happy to find this lovely review waiting for me! =]

Reviewer: Ronsgrl95
Date: 08/23/07 15:05
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

oh my beautiful.

Author's Response: Thanks a billion!

Reviewer: SimplyCharmed
Date: 08/15/07 21:42
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

Beautiful. How did Hermione die? During the war, I suppose?

Author's Response: Thanks. You know, I never really thought about it while writing this story. I guess just by some random Death Eater's curse? =]

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/11/07 17:25
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

WAAAA!!!! Omg im am crying so hard right nw you wouldn't believe.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! =] I'm sorry about the tears. LOL.

Reviewer: Phoebe Gruzelier
Date: 08/11/07 16:02
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

I didn't think anyone could write a better R/Hr after I read Weasles and Otters, but this story certainly proved me wrong!
Harriet-I didn't like her at the beginning, but I soon warmed to her. A lot of stories about people's children have the kids being either a mini-version of one parent or the other. Harriet was a beatiful blend of both parents, with a dash of individuality. And she most certainly was not a Mary-Sue!
Ron's letter-was so him! It was completely awkward and clumsy, without seeming like it was meant to be so. All the little bits of stuff about Harry, and cakes, and books and children was so...perfect. Perfect is the only word to describe it.
I think you might like to know it took me about ten minutes after I'd read it to stop crying.
You are a brilliant author, and if you don't get published one day, it's a crime. And I'm not just saying that. I really, really mean it.
Best wishes xxx

Author's Response: Thank you! This was my very first fic on MNFF, written way before Weasels and Otters. I'm so happy you liked them both! Writing R/Hr is such a pleasure for me, so I'm glad my readers enjoy it too.

Harriet was a hard character for me to write my first time out of the starting gate. Ron and Hermione are almost something of polar opposites, so combining those traits into a believable character was a bit of a challenge. Glad to see she turned out alright.

Ron's letter was kind of easy for me. I admire Ron's character so much, and see a lot of myself in him. The hard part was making his sound Ronnish, but still have that lovey-dovey tinge. I'm pretty happy with the results. =]

Your compliments brought a genuine smile to my face, and I am so happy you liked this humble one-shot. You know, everyone who has read it claims to have cried, yet I never once cried while writing it...Weird huh? I am writing an original fiction, and hope with all my heart to have it published one day. Thanks so much for your support! Happy reading/writing!

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff
Date: 08/07/07 0:45
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

A beautiful piece of writing that made me cry. Keep up the amazing work and thank you for sharing this piece with us.

Author's Response: Pressing submit is the most fun! HAHA!

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff
Date: 08/07/07 0:38
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

A beautiful piece of writing that made me cry. Keep up the amazing work and thank you for sharing this piece with us.

Author's Response: Thanks very very very much! I'm glad you liked it. I love your user name! 'Tis cute cute. =]

Reviewer: ginevrapotter753
Date: 07/31/07 16:54
Chapter: A Letter Never Read

wow. i cried through the whole thing! beautifully written!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Ya'lls reviews just make my day! =]

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