Reviewer: HappilyBlue
Date: 06/27/11 6:21
Chapter: Worlds Forever Divided

Oh please update this! I really would like to read more :)

Reviewer: ginnylunahermy
Date: 07/14/10 9:47
Chapter: Worlds Forever Divided

this is really good! its funny, but sweet at the same time.

Reviewer: purple_pen
Date: 12/19/09 15:44
Chapter: Worlds Forever Divided

This story is AWSOME!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: Goodbye_Earl
Date: 12/06/09 11:19
Chapter: Threatening the Whale

'Hard core not takers'. I absolutely love it! This story is really funny and I love seeing Lily not being 100% nice the whole time. It makes a change!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you've enjoyed it! And yes, I decided Lily had to be like any other human being and we all have our times of meanness haha Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: Dobbys_Wife
Date: 01/26/09 13:39
Chapter: Worlds Forever Divided

Ive really enjoyed this fic so far! Ive written a load of fics and never had the courage to post them, fics like this really make me want to post mine!
Thankyou for making a dull evening interesting!
Plz Plz Plz bring on chapter eight quick!!!

Author's Response: You should really really consider posting them. I've learned so much from these reviews, and my writing always improves dramatically because of them. So thank you very much for reviewing, and I will try to have the next chapter done as soon as I can!

Reviewer: Dobbys_Wife
Date: 12/20/08 11:21
Chapter: Worlds Forever Divided

Really enjoying so far! has had me in fits of giggles (can you make sirius drunk permanently plz lol) Plz Plz Plz write the next chapter quickly!
P.S Dont be to mean to Pertunia or I'll cry!

Author's Response: haha Sirius as a permanent drunk ....that would be interesting! I'll get on the new chapter as soon as I can and don't cry!

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 11/28/08 12:15
Chapter: Worlds Forever Divided

wow that was so beautiful. brilliant chapter. when james was giving her the ring and promised to always be tehre i was seriously gonna start crying it was so sweet. and i like dhte bit of darkness you added in there. and the himour with Sirius. and loved the lasts few sentences with Petunia.

Author's Response: The ring scene was my favorite to write, so I'm glad it impacted you in the way it did--it was what I was going for :) I was wondering how the darkness of the chapter would go over, but I'm glad it worked for you! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: inspireme101
Date: 11/27/08 11:21
Chapter: Worlds Forever Divided

Wow, I really love this story! With your clever quips and witticisms thrown in here and there it just really makes laugh hysterically every time I read it! I adore the magical humor you use and how you are so flawless with your characteriztion! I have always adored Sirius but now I love him even more! Thanks for a fantastic story and I can't wait for you to finish it! Much Peace-isnpireme101 :3)

Author's Response: I think this may be the best review I've ever gotten! Thanks you so much!!! Hopefully, I'll be able to get the next chapter out soon enough!

Reviewer: huggybear13
Date: 11/26/08 18:47
Chapter: Worlds Forever Divided

i liked this chapter!!! it was cute in a way

Author's Response: YAY! I was wondering how this chapter would go over because it is kinda different than my other ones, but I'm glad you liked it :) thanks for the review!

Reviewer: marissav119
Date: 08/29/08 7:41
Chapter: That Whole Stomping Foot Thing

this is really funny

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you think so!

Reviewer: inspireme101
Date: 07/12/08 22:47
Chapter: An Angry Exchange and Nervous Pacing

OMG, you are such a wonderful writer and you obviously have a great sense of humor, please finish the story!!! It is sooooo good!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I will definitely finish this story and the next chapter should be finished soon :)

Reviewer: fullvioletmoon
Date: 07/11/08 17:22
Chapter: That Whole Stomping Foot Thing

I absolutely love this story! I think it's my favourite one so far, definatly my favourite Lily/James fic. Please, please tell me, when will the nest chapter be up???????

Author's Response: I am so glad you like it so much!!! Reviews like this always brighten my day! The next chapter is almost done and should be into my BETA soon and therefore in the queue soon!! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: lilyrox
Date: 06/23/08 10:50
Chapter: That Whole Stomping Foot Thing

Wowzah! I have never laughed harder in my life! Hahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok, got it all out my system. I luv how you've portrayed Sirius. He is just so cute. Like kindergartner cute. I would go out with him for real. So, once again hilarious! Loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks!! Sirius is soooooo much fun and you're right, he is like a kindergartner!!! Haha I think anyone would date him :) I started chapter seven so it should be here soon, hopefully! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: riddiculusvampire
Date: 04/12/08 10:05
Chapter: That Whole Stomping Foot Thing

aww what a cute story! i really love how you put in all of the flashbacks

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The flashbacks are the best part to write :)

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 04/04/08 15:19
Chapter: That Whole Stomping Foot Thing

hi are you gonna update soooooon pppplllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeee


Author's Response: I'll try, but the next chapter is kinda going a little slow SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'll get a move on, promise :) Thanks for all your reviews!!!!!! <3

Reviewer: phoenixrebirth
Date: 03/05/08 19:20
Chapter: That Whole Stomping Foot Thing

So how about chapter seven ;) and by the way i completely agree with lola_lovegood about stupid-stupidness.I really wish they would fix the site already (exasperated sigh) anyway have a nice day and please, please, pretty please with a cherry on top write chapter seven!

Author's Response: Chapter seven is...uh...getting there haha! But I'm trying really really hard to get it finished. But I won't even be able to post it until the site is done...But I will be sure to get a move on so I can post it as soon as possible! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 03/02/08 17:51
Chapter: That Whole Stomping Foot Thing

im begining to get angry at the stupid site with the stupid problems and the stupid-stupidness *crosses fingers that they will fix it soooooooon so u can UPDATE*

p.s. sry 4 the outburst i get emotional about me fave stories sometimes

Author's Response: haha that's totally understandable!!!! I want some of my favorite stories to update too!!!! But hopefully this will all be over soon and the site will be better than ever :)

Reviewer: Prongs
Date: 02/14/08 18:29
Chapter: That Whole Stomping Foot Thing

This chapter was just too cute. I loved the little flashback to the cooridor and the random dancing to Elvis - everyone loves random dancing in hallways!!! Can't wait for what's next...!!!

Author's Response: Everyone does love that haha!!! I'm happy that you enjoyed all of the cuteness in it :) Hopefully,I'll be able to get a move on with chapter seven soon! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 02/12/08 22:35
Chapter: That Whole Stomping Foot Thing

LOL!!! Liked it! Very funny and entertaining. I especially enjoyed the little jabs at Sirius' future-- "I'm going to be a murderer when I grow up!" and all the dog puns -- "puppy-dog eyes". :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! I just couldn't resist the puns! haha

Reviewer: AccioMagic
Date: 02/12/08 18:39
Chapter: That Whole Stomping Foot Thing

THIS IS REALLY GREAT!!!!!!! :) Laugh out lound funny. Please continue.....

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

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