I'm back. So cool. :)

I ♥♥♥♥♥♥ this peom. It's just real clean and simple, the way I think poems should be. Plus, I like the way Narcissa is portrayed. Another side to her.

&& your an awesome writer!
&& I nominated your story for the QSQ! BRAVO!! AND CONGRATS (you know why. 6 more to go!)

~ Leia

Author's Response: Uh...you didn't nominate this one. You did 'Heal Over'. But STOP REVIEWING!!! *giggles*

Wow, this was amazing. I can't get over how great that poem was. I think you did a good job knowing that repeating those lines over and over again would be good for the poem. I still can't get over my shock about the wife being Narcissa. You making the mom say all those things about Lucius was great. You make the reader feel like Narcissa knows her mom isn't telling her she HAS to marry him, but she would be completely and totally upset if she didn't. I am immediately going to read your other works, because I think you are just so good. Keep up the good work on whatever you decide to do next.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you like it. :)