It's soooo cute....
Sorry. Reasonable review-brain in gear:
I like the idea, and the characterization of Rmeus is very good, as is the writing overall....
I give up....*crazy brain back in*
...KAWAII!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This series should hopefully show all shades of Remus.
I love the way you write Remus - this is exactly what I can see going through his mind about Sirius, how he still sees him as a friend, even though he wishes he could hate him for being a 'traitor'. Also, the way you end the chapters
‘Angel of Hope!’ whispered a voice in his ear.
Remus smiled.
like that is fabulous. I love it. Again. :D I cannot WAIT for the next chapter!! :D :D
Author's Response: Yes. Seemed a good time for Remus to ponder about Sirius's treachery. The credit for the line 'Remus smiled' goes to good friend Kerichi. She suggested it for chapter 1. I liked it so much that I decided to end all chapters that way. Happy New Year!
Tonks' bubblegum flavoured ice cream is perfect!! Bubblegum is definitely the best flavour for her to be eating ;) She's absolutely fantastic in this chapter, and you portrayed Remus' frustration about not having a job brilliantly. Loved it!! Again!!
Author's Response: I was indeed surprised to see the Bubblegum flavour in a shop, just before I posted that chapter. So, it sort of worked it's way into the story. Oh, the angst of not getting a suitable job! Most of us have gone thru' that phase, I guess. I was once discriminated on the basis that I was 'female'. The interviewer got a earful!
I should have reviewed this ages ago!! Lol, you're getting three reviews out of me now ;)
This is such a sweet story, and I love love LOVE the idea of Remus meeting lil' baby Tonks...Remus is also really realistic in this. I love it!! :D
Author's Response: Three reviews! Wow! Thanks for a lovely new year gift. If you have noticed, I try my best to keep the encounters in places where they are most likely to come across one another.
that is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too cute and sweet!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! A Happy New Year to you!
The spirit of Christmas still lingers....a few people down my street still have lights up! :D
Nice chap, but it's splinched into one paragraph again.
Author's Response: Oops! New Year Resolution: Figure out the Technical thingy!
Why am I this bad to wait?
*crying* all the holydays without another sweet chappie!!
Author's Response: Sorry to have kept you waiting. I have a Pokemon at home who keeps me busy. Should hopefully have the next one up in ten days.
ys, i'm happy about that you've posted the third chapter. this is a really good story. when i read it, it looks so real. its so beautiful! *sniff*
okay, im overreacting a tad to much, but who cares? it's christmas! :D
Author's Response: That's the spirit! A very Harry Christmas to you!
gah, can't they hurry up to validate the thirs chappie? i really love this story, its so sweet and really good written. i especially liked the first chapter. in my opinion, a teen-remus being knocked of a stool by a todler-nymphadore is just hilarious! :D :D :D
Author's Response: The third chapter - Angel of Hope is up for validation. It's a Christmas-sy story. Let me take this opportunity to wish you and all the other reviewers a very Harry Christmas!
That was SO sweet!!
Hey! Did i tell u that u got a very original beginnig? I really liked it!!!
"Fancy metting Tonks" ...I mean, they met by accident (and she was a brat!)...they really mean to be together...
Ohhh i cannot wait!
Author's Response: Thanks! seems like the original star-crossed lovers, eh?
aww, Tonks is way too cute!
Author's Response: Thought of Tonks as a bundle of mischief as a baby.
Being a huge fan of the Tonks-Remus ship, I was dissatisfied with the number of stories about their first meeting.
YES!!!! THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!! YOU ARE A ROCK STAR TO ME!!
Author's Response: Wow! That's awesome praise!
Broody!Remus isn't my fave, blasting bushes like Snape, lol, but I loved this line, ‘My favourite flavour too! Bubblegum!’
There is a splinching problem, your chap looks like one humongous paragraph, that you might like to fix.
Author's Response: OK! Will try to fix it. Thanks!
I read this earlier today, and it really tugged at my heart. Babies always have a way of making people feel better, don't they? Great start :)
Author's Response: Yes, they do! Thanks!
Heeyyy!
I have forgotten the difference between Tonks and Remus!!! (talking about ages, 'course), so this chapter "take me to earth" again. It was really really awesome!!!
I cannot wait for more!
Nice job by the way!
Author's Response: Thanks! Will post Ch.2 soon.
"Remus smiled."
I smiled too! ^_^
Author's Response: I think that was one of the nicest reviews till date!
