Reviewer: The REAL Weasley Twins
Date: 12/17/06 22:44
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

Right from where you said that we wouldn't like the ending, I knew that something had to be wrong.... :-P But it was a good fic, thanks for writing. Of course happy endings are generally happier (;-)), I still enjoyed reading this because of the way Sirius was completely on Lily's side the entire time.

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review! Yes, I figured I might want to warn people at first...haha.

Reviewer: gin_an_potter
Date: 12/14/06 21:34
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

I love ur other J/L story but am really mad at u w/ this one!!!!!! How could u do that u don't even explain how hey get together now!!! But alas, lucky for u I love you other one sooo much that I, am willing to forgive you story, and be happy w/ ur other ingenus work! (Not ur H/Hr ships though!!)
Sincerely,
~Ginny~

Reviewer: gin_an_potter
Date: 12/14/06 21:34
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

I love ur other J/L story but am really mad at u w/ this one!!!!!! How could u do that u don't even explain how hey get together now!!! But alas, lucky for u I love you other one sooo much that I, am willing to forgive you story, and be happy w/ ur other ingenus work! (Not ur H/Hr ships though!!)
Sincerely,
~Ginny~

Author's Response: Haha! Glad you like it! But see, that's the idea, you know that they get together in the end, so what's the point of writing yet another story which focuses on how they fall in love, why not write one that focuses on a tragedy that happens to so many people. Well, glad to see you happy!

Reviewer: A House Elf
Date: 12/14/06 14:28
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

A long time from now? Ahhh... that hurts.

Author's Response: I sowwy.

Reviewer: A House Elf
Date: 12/13/06 21:07
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

OH MY GOSH! I thought this was going to have a sappy ending! Write another! PLEASE! I need to read a happy ending!

Author's Response: Haha! Thank you for reviewing. I might write a sequal, might. And if so....it will be a long time from now. Thank you!

Reviewer: wicked26
Date: 12/11/06 9:04
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

greeaaaaaaaaaaat story!!
nice to read a litle diff. j/l fic..... though i don't belive that james wld do any such thing bt anyways......
plz plz plz write a sequel to it.. where may be both sirius and lily can gang up on james....

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Yeah, I never thought James would do such a thing, but hey, it might be a temporary lapse in judgement! Ha! Only If I get REALLY bored will I write a sequal, because I need to focus on my other story.

Reviewer: vivphy05
Date: 12/09/06 23:20
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

I was pretty iffy about this story as I started to read it... it just seemed so immature of Sirius to do that... but by the time I got to the part where Sirius was discussing Dr. Suess books with Lily I was cracking up... soooooo funny! I loved it! And I love the fact that you wrote about a darker aspect of relationships, I mean, we all know they end up together, but we als know that James had faults... so yea... I loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm glad you liked it! I honestly didn't think that Sirius would do something like that, but it stuck. I kind of liked the irony to it. Well, once again, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 12/09/06 9:09
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

Aww...are you going to write a sequel in which James humiliates himself in apology plenty times and Lily finally forgives him? Lol, that'd be nice. Well, great job, and hey! I'd love it if you could read my first fanfic (Lily/James) and tell me whaty you think. It'd mean a lot. Well, great story!

Author's Response: I'm thinking of writing a sequal, but I don't know if I'll be able to, with my school work and what not. Sure! I'll check it out!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 12/08/06 23:58
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

Ah! So good! Update!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 12/08/06 23:58
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

Ah! So good! Update!

Reviewer: tonks_667
Date: 12/08/06 4:23
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

OH that is so sad.....but it made me happy that you used my favourite insult...he he he man-whore...but seriously even if sirius is nice and good now it still doesnt mean he still isnt a man whore....but now James is King of all man whores..

Author's Response: Haha!! I'm glad you liked it!!

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 12/07/06 15:17
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

Damn. James is the biggest PRAT on this here good earth. It was unexpected, but holy shite. What is his PROBLEM?!? Great fic, though.


Author's Response: Thank you!! Yes, and I know, James was a little OOC, I don't think he'd ever do that to Lily, but hey, a twist is a twist.

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 12/07/06 0:15
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

Ohmygod! Nice twist!!!
Great story idea. I'd love to see a longer version, but this is still absolutely brilliant.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I was thinking about doing a longer version, but we all know they end up together! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: CantThinkofaPennName
Date: 12/06/06 22:11
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

ooh! i liked it! it was different (in a good way) than most james/lily fics! i loved the surprise ending... poor lily!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! Yeah, I know, it killed me to do that to her!

Reviewer: jjenkh
Date: 12/06/06 17:21
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

Wow

Author's Response: I hope it's a good wow! hehe!

Reviewer: beauty and brains
Date: 12/06/06 16:45
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

KELSEY MY WONDERFUL FABULOUS FRIEND. I SEE WE ACCOMPLISHED OUR MISSION OF HAVING YOUR WONDERFUL FANTASTIC ONE-SHOT PUT ON HERE. CONGRATS. IF ONLY MUGGLENET WOULD HURRY UP W. MINE...GRR. LOL. WHOOPS THERE GOES AN ELF. ANYWAYZ MNFF BETTA HURRY UP W. MINE TOO OR IMA GET PISSSSSSED. HAHA. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK CHICA. LOVED THIS STORY W. ALL MUH HEART.

Author's Response: YOURS GOT PUT UP!!! WE'RE E-SCREAMING ABOUT IT LEFT NOW!!!!!!! OMG!!!!! AND IT'S ON THE SIDEBAR THING!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! -Kelsey

Author's Response: YOURS GOT PUT UP!!! WE'RE E-SCREAMING ABOUT IT LEFT NOW!!!!!!! OMG!!!!! AND IT'S ON THE SIDEBAR THING!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! -Kelsey

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 12/06/06 15:58
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

Oh, and I'm the first reviewer. Ha!

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 12/06/06 15:57
Chapter: Trouble in Paridise

James. Is. A. Prat. And an idiot, git, and every other insult that exists. He's as stupid as...as... Ron! Write a sequel! Where they get back together! Because they have to, obviously, or Harry wouldn't exist.

Author's Response: LOL!!! I see I found someone who share's my belief that Ron's stupidity is equivalant to that of the Giant Squid. And I'm afraid there won't be a sequal. I left it here because we all know that they DO, in fact, end up together. Glad you enjoyed it!

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