Reviews For Peppermint
Reviewer: KteachoneLMN
Date: 12/16/13 0:40
Chapter: Chapter 5

Wow! I did not expect that. Nicely done.

Reviewer: dmh6e
Date: 11/09/08 4:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

This story was awesome! This is why I read fanfic; to remind me that I am not the only person who enjoys stories where everyone dies.
I hope you write more so that I can read them.

Reviewer: akasha2411
Date: 04/14/08 19:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

oops!! someone jumpt in to conclusions he hermiony? ;-)
I liked the story, nice building-up with telling it backwards.
But what happend at the party?
Dit they die or not?!! grr I hate clifhangers

Reviewer: TheDarkestStar
Date: 02/26/08 12:53
Chapter: Chapter 5

Nice twists :-) I liked it quite a lot. Thanks for sharing

Reviewer: as lovers go
Date: 01/20/08 13:24
Chapter: Chapter 5


lol that was a good story but the ending was sad. you are a very good writer.
i liked how you did it backwards, at first i thought it would be weird and not make any sense but it did.

i think you should write another exactly like this, but tweak it so hermione is pissed off about the meetings, but not enough to want to poison him. and shes just making the wine just because? or something. and include an ending where he asks her and it turns out okay. haha.
but dont put that one at the beginning because that would ruin the whole point of starting from the end which is really the beginning. it could be like an extra chapter at the end. which is really the beginning wow thats confusing.

Reviewer: silent_heartbeat
Date: 01/08/08 18:26
Chapter: Chapter 5

I find that the only thing I can say is "Oh my God..." with wide, staring eyes.

Reviewer: torchwoodgirl
Date: 11/06/07 15:30
Chapter: Chapter 5

i didnt really understand it all. i would have preferred a chapter at the end going back to the start(or end?) of the story to explain what happened fully and clearly because otherwise everything is made of assumptions which is kind of inconclusive.

Author's Response: I'm sorry you didn't understand it. I didn't put an explanatory chapter because I didn't want to overdo it

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 10/27/07 4:02
Chapter: Chapter 5

OMG no way! What happens to them after they've ALL drunk the poison wine? And Hermione destroying his potions work... that was heartbreaking. Woah man she must have been mad. And you didn't show Severus proposing... (evil cliffhanger) Are you gonna do a sequel or anything?

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 09/23/07 0:44
Chapter: Chapter 5


I did not see that coming. Does that mean everyone at the party is poisoned? Was it the lethal kind or just the makes you deathly ill for a couple of days kind?

Oh my god, I'm at a loss for words.=Sammy

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 09/23/07 0:23
Chapter: Chapter 4


He is going to propose to Hermione right??????/

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 09/22/07 23:56
Chapter: Chapter 2

Beware, Evil Spoiler Girl

I think I figured out the plot.Is it something like this?

Hermione saw Snape and Ginny around town and thought he was cheating on her and at the night of the party she was finally going to tell him that its over only to find out that it was for her party. Oh and it was she who wrecked the lab.

Well thats my guess and I'm now gonna find out if its true!=Sammy

Reviewer: mrsmalfoy7
Date: 09/21/07 11:22
Chapter: Chapter 5

she did not poison him
i dont want to belive that :(
thats so sad he was gonna propose :'(
but yeah
really sad
and well done!
its a gr8 story
write a prologue pleeeeeeeeease :]

Reviewer: chasing_willow
Date: 09/17/07 16:13
Chapter: Chapter 5

awww.. that's so horrible =((
I didn't think her-my-oh-knee would be capable of something like that, but I guess it's possible.

Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 09/15/07 0:18
Chapter: Chapter 5

Jeepers Creepers! That was scary!

I loved it. Good job choosing the end-to-beggining style. I would almost suggest moving this story to the mystery category. It is not so much a 'romance' as a detective-ish kind of story.

Great work!


Reviewer: Hadhafang
Date: 09/10/07 23:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

i just fell out of my chair

did they all die from the poison? or just "suffer" like she wanted snape to?

Reviewer: LUV2READ
Date: 09/10/07 15:29
Chapter: Chapter 5

i just read the entire story back to front (from ch. 5 to ch. 1) and oh my gosh!!! You need to have a prologue or an after story or something!! What was in the wine??!!

Great job - I very much enjoyed, in both directions!

Reviewer: LUV2READ
Date: 09/10/07 15:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

i just read the entire story back to front (from ch. 5 to ch. 1) and oh my gosh!!! You need to have a prologue or an after story or something!! What was in the wine??!!

Great job - I very much enjoyed, in both directions!

Reviewer: Sariana
Date: 09/09/07 0:01
Chapter: Chapter 5

Ahh, Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned--and said woman now has no friends or family! Poor Hermione.

One thing I didn't quite understand, though. What exactly did Severus feel for Ginny? He seemed to be feeling guilty, and not just about lying to Hermione.

Author's Response: I just threw in the Severus/Ginny to make the reader, like Hermione, wonder if there's something going on between them. But no, there isn't anything - he was only feeling guilty about lying to Hermione.

Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 09/08/07 21:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wait. . . does that meant they all just drank poison!? I want to know what happens after the first chapter, now! Darn cliff-hangers.

Well, that one wasn't a cliff-hanger. It was the end, wait, no, the beginning of the story. Well, it was the end, sort of, but it was AT the beginning. Wait, no. I'm so confused!

But I still liked it a whole lot. It was very creative! I liked how Hermione had NO IDEA what the heck was going on, although the fact that she was depressed and angry enough to make a poison is kinda. . . interesting, but it was still a well-brought together story.
Thank you for a nice addition to literature. Or, rather, fanfiction.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: septentrion
Date: 09/05/07 11:13
Chapter: Chapter 4

I've read and reread this fic several times on different sites, and I that I need to know if Hermione unwittingly poisoned all her family and friends? She seemed decided to brew something deadly, after all.

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