Reviews For Voldemort Did This
Reviewer: bertiebott12
Date: 05/28/07 12:30
Chapter: Voldemort Did This

I loved it! The words that you used to depict an image really flowed and were beautiful. This is one of the best poems I've read here.

Do you want to

See him dead?

Do you?

Do you?

Then do it

Kill him

Because I can't

I loved that part! Great job!

Author's Response: THNX I dunno the idea just popped into my head one day.

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 12/04/06 16:32
Chapter: Voldemort Did This

Aw...sad, but vengeful. Lol, good job on your first poem. I just posted my first story too. Good luck to us both.

Author's Response: THANK YOU and yes, good luck to us both!

Reviewer: SIRIUS WILL NOT DIE
Date: 12/04/06 4:01
Chapter: Voldemort Did This

Then do it

Kill him

Because I can't

I like that part alot for some reason, no clue why. Maybe it's because it awesome on a stick. Very good poem! Keep it up!

~Emma

Author's Response: Thanks. I dunno, it just came to me. Yay!

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