Reviews For Deserving
Reviewer: ThePhantomoftheopera
Date: 01/28/07 12:58
Chapter: Deserving

haha! love the ending! Good job with the fic!

Author's Response: thanks much! the end is just the beginning, though it's down a bit on my list of fics right now...

Reviewer: felicitas
Date: 01/25/07 8:43
Chapter: Deserving

Almost speechless...haha I really enjoyed Draco´s point of view and "his" description of Harry feeling Ginny... marvelous!!! I just had to read the whole thing again... You have to really step up for the sequel!!!

Author's Response: ah, yes, the sequel. it is coming, slowly but surely. i'm glad you like it so far!

Reviewer: emoprincess26
Date: 01/14/07 23:33
Chapter: Deserving

Oooh what a great story! It kept me riveted to the end. I love how you had Harry walk in at the end, and find them, and you did a really nice job writing Draco. I can totally imagine him being like that. I can't wait for the sequel!! I want to know what happens after the fact...like to Draco and Ginny continue with a relationship, and does anyone find out...? Great job!

~emoprincess26

Author's Response: so glad you enjoyed! as to what happens next, you will just have to be patient! there is much more drama to come...

Reviewer: Eclipse
Date: 01/11/07 21:17
Chapter: Deserving

I loved the story. Draco was very well portrayed. I could imagine him becoming obsessed like that. I also enjoyed your writing style. Oh, and Harry walking in was a classic.

I hope to see the sequel soon.

Author's Response: i'm very glad you enjoyed the story. the sequel is being worked on slowly but surely...thanks for the review!

Reviewer: 90glassslippers
Date: 01/10/07 17:18
Chapter: Deserving

Is this relationship or "love" between ginny And Draco supposed to be healthy? Would Ginny still have feelings for Draco after he vilated her privacy, thoughts, and her body? This is an intresting and inteligent story for anlyzing physcological elements in it, but as for modeling true love? I don't think so.

Author's Response: interesting question. at this stage in the story, we don't see too much love. ginny has a bit of a crush. draco has an unhealthy obsession. smash them together and you get what you get. expect a more complete answer in the next chapter though. by the way, this is a "dubious consent" story not a "non-consentual" story. that's an important point that i don't want to be misconstrued. they both wanted each other, even if it wasn't verbally expressed. thanks for the great review!!

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 01/04/07 16:26
Chapter: Deserving

Oops. I hit submit, but I don't know if I did anything. This was AMAZINGLY written. I love when Harry finds them, and the lyrics for Malfoy is My King made me laugh out loud! No joke! My mom even asked me what was so funny! I loved this, and the ending was so perfect. I love all of your works! Keep up the great work in future stories!

Author's Response: thanks again, dear abby, for your kudos!! the sequel to this is on the way...eventually, i promise! the Malfoy is My King part is one of my favorites too. a much needed light moment. thanks for reviewing, and say hey to your mom ;)

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 12/28/06 20:57
Chapter: Deserving

OMG, sooooooo sexy. hahaha, Harry walked in, I nearly had a hear attack, but I knew he would eventually. So they were doin' it doggy style, huh? w/e, I'm hip to the groove,lol. good job, i would add to favorites, but friends from school would think something was wrong with me. oh, and was it love or lust? I can't figure it out. lust, right?

Author's Response: yes, definitely lust and not so much love. the sequel to this (coming soon) will explore the emotional side of things a bit more. thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 12/28/06 20:57
Chapter: Deserving

OMG, sooooooo sexy. hahaha, Harry walked in, I nearly had a hear attack, but I knew he would eventually. So they were doin' it doggy style, huh? w/e, I'm hip to the groove,lol. good job, i would add to favorites, but friends from school would think something was wrong with me. oh, and was it love or lust? I can't figure it out. lust, right?

Author's Response: this appears to have posted twice, so i will respond on the next one :)

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva
Date: 12/17/06 18:20
Chapter: Deserving

Very interesting. I wish it wasn't a one-shot. I could totally imagine Draco like that, lol.

Author's Response: so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Transcendence
Date: 12/14/06 23:00
Chapter: Deserving

Wow, this was a great Draco/Ginny fic, very well-written :)

Author's Response: thanks so much!! i truly appreciate the review!

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 12/08/06 14:49
Chapter: Deserving

DRACO IS A PERV!!! EWWW!! This is really good but the voyerism part creeped me out. But it is good.

Author's Response: aw come on! no one can be perfect! ^_^ thanks much for the review!

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 12/07/06 19:59
Chapter: Deserving

awwwww, poor draco! So sad! I love draco! ithink i need ot jump into Harry Potter 6, and give him a great big hug!

Author's Response: i love him too, and have offered him just such a hug on many occasions. either he's avoiding me or he's not real big on close personal contact...hmm...thanks for the review ^_^

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