Reviewer: ginny_potter72
Date: 01/07/07 10:39
Chapter: The Prophecy Fulfilled

yay...i luv the ending of this fic!!!!!! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! Yes, I still get chills when I read the ending too....

Reviewer: sugarquillgirl
Date: 12/20/06 18:26
Chapter: The Prophecy Fulfilled

I enjoyed this story a lot -- I thought it was very well-written and extremely desciptive. I also loved the suspense you included. It's a great start, being your first-ever fanfic! Amazing job.
One thing -- I don't think that 'protego' blocks the killing curse. In fact, I think the killing curse may be unblockable. Maybe this is just all in my mind, but I'm almost sure that 'Avada Kedavra' can't be blocked. Besides for that, it was brilliant! Keep up the great work -- I'm looking foward to reading more of your stories soon.
--Sugarquill Girl

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I laughed at the part about Protego--I was desperate for any spell I could use...but seeing as Harry has used simplistic spells to his favor in the past I thought maybe it could work...ah well, thanks again so much for your review!

Reviewer: melodyhp
Date: 12/18/06 20:30
Chapter: The Prophecy Fulfilled

good story...but harry is not a half breed. he is infact a pure blood

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I know Harry is a pure-blood wizard, but I wanted to emphasize how superior Voldemort makes himself compared to everyone was an deliberate error...but I can see where confusion may come from! Thanks again!

Reviewer: marhest
Date: 12/10/06 7:22
Chapter: The Prophecy Fulfilled

Good job!! I hope you keep writing stories

Author's Response: Thank you! I am in the process of writing some more stories, as soon as the plot bunnies settle down, and my schoolwork isn't so heavy!

Reviewer: DocHollidaywe
Date: 12/07/06 14:28
Chapter: The Prophecy Fulfilled

I enjoyed the story. Nice writing technique. I would have liked a little more epilogue thought ...

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Maybe someday I will add more to this story...

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