that is the best story in fan fiction. PLEASE PLEASE put the other chapters on. The story made me cry it was amazing!!!!!!!!!
okay i hate cliffhangers plz update soon
Wow! Wow! Wowww! Okay, so I, like have been reading this story since forever (and dreaming about it - siriusly!), and now that Chapter 12 was up I was like WHOOOOOOOOO!!!!! I... I... I am speechless :D This has been a really great chapter, and I CANNOT WAIT!!! :D
Oh my, that's not good. I feel so bad for James, I was so worried he'd find out Lily never said anything to her friends about him.......and now he did, and I wouldn't blame him for hating her guts forever. But then we'd never have a Harry so I guess he'll forgive her :D
i LOVED it!!!!!!!!
pleaseee update soon!!!
omg.. the fight was soo sad.. i was hoping she would tell him that she loved him.. o well.. at least her friends know now.. DONT KEEP HIM MAD AT HER 4 2 LONG!!!
aw! great chapter! i loved it! although, james had a right to be angry! at least her friends were understanding.
they finally kissed! but lily ran away!! and now with her friends... argh! hopefully thing will work out!
Author's Response: Of course that's what I'd do! :D They finally get what they want and then it all goes down the drain... hah!
lol! aw! they're so cute together!!
Author's Response: Yeah, this bit reminded me of Cinderella... haha!
cool! a ball!! awesome!
Author's Response: Little cliche... but definitely awesome! I agree!
lol i love jimmy! he's so cute and funny!
Author's Response: I know, he's certainly one of my favorites!
aw! that was so sweet!! that was my favorite chapter so far!
Author's Response: Yeah, this one was fun to write! It felt very sweet and like James and Lily's relationship was finally moving to another step!
camping! such a sweet idea! and i love the fact that james' dad is obsessed with muggles! its kinda funny cuz arthur weasley is obsessed too.
Author's Response: Yeah, James' dad and Ron's dad are kind-of paralleled, aren't they? Didn't think about that before writing this story!
another great ( and long!) chappie! loved it! the museum was way cool!
Author's Response: Aw, great! I'm so glad you like the longer chapters... that's my greatest fault is I don't know when to stop!
this is great, i can't wait for the end! Except i don't want it to end either. It's just a great story!!!!!!! UPDATE
love this story!!
Omigosh, FINALLY!!! Please, please, please, update soon!
I feel so bad for James...
thats really cool that lily wanted to be a healer, i think she would have made a great one! and i thinks its kinda funny that james tripped over a can of paint.
Author's Response: Yeah, I never saw Lily as an auror, but I could never stereotype her into one job position, so healer is just one of the many that I think she could have been!
aw! yay! they're gonna try to be friends! thats gonna be hard though.. lol but they'll manage...hopefuly.
Author's Response: Yeah, certainly not the easiest task after their background! :D
i just love lily and james! you do a great job writing them!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like their dynamic together!