Reviews For The Curtain Call
Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 07/24/07 3:44
Chapter: An Overactive Imagination

'I think it’s more likely that he would have brought you all this way to kill you rather than to say he loved you.'

extraordinarily funny!

'James, on the other hand, looked as if he was about to be sick. God — I knew that this would be a bad idea! I thought she would like it, but she hates it, I knew she would! James tried hard not to hit himself while Lily was still watching.'

my favorite part in the entire story (up until this point anyway)!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked that part! :D I really enjoyed writing it... Especially since Lily's overactive imagination is, basically, my mind... because I tend to exaggerate everything! :D Thanks for reviewing! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 07/24/07 3:07
Chapter: Somewhere

beatiful =]
and the museum is such a creative idea to put into a Wizarding story!
i also love you bringing Sirius into the story, he's one of my favorite characters!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the museum and Sirius! The museum was the part where I was worried the readers might not enjoy it... But I knew they'd probably enjoy Sirius! ;) And expect to see a little bit more of him later! Thanks for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 07/24/07 2:37
Chapter: James' Accident

Lily gets so confused sometimes, what with her attempt at friendliness with James and her unsure-ness (for lack of a better word lol) about letting her friends know! But, I thought the whole Lily healing James bit was very well written, and I also like how in this story James isn't head over heels in love with Lily.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the healing part! :D That bit took me awhile to write because in the first draft it was hard to understand what exactly happened... Haha! Thanks for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 07/24/07 2:06
Chapter: Claustrophobia

whoot!
this one is so sweet and cute and sappy while also being so harsh and whatnot.
good writing =]

Author's Response: Thank you! Cute... yet harsh! I never thought I could pull that off! Haha! :D Thank you so much for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: kittykat
Date: 07/24/07 1:40
Chapter: The Belmanns

i think i have set the world record of sighing the most i the last 2 minutes or so.....that was just absolutely wonderful..i would laugh out loud if rebecca and cindy found them in the morning like like..you better update quick because to me that wase a cliff hanger..*sigh*

Author's Response: Haha - world record for sighing the most! I don't know, I guess you could be a contender! :D And good guess - you'll have to wait and see! :) Thanks for reviewing! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 07/24/07 1:28
Chapter: Good Luck

i have always loved your long chapters, i think it shows what a devoted author you are! and this one makes me a bit sad, because of the way Lily is being treated by the other people and how she takes it out on poor James, but it's an excellent plot strategy =]

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the long chapters! Because I always think I write too much! You should see some of my one-shot stories that I'm in the process of writing... some of them go up to 30 pages! It's ridiculous! Thanks for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 07/24/07 0:50
Chapter: Bennett Theater

okie. so i have actually been with you and reading this story since it was first posted last year, but i've only just realized i've never left a review!
i feel like a major jerk-in-the-box, to say the least, because this is one of my absolute favorite fan fictions EVER! so i am now making it up to you and re-reading and reviewing all the chapters!
this chapter is so adorable, mainly because of the mischievous portrayel of James =]
i also love the bit at the end with James figuring out Lily will be with him at Hogwarts!

Author's Response: Everyone has their moments, so don't worry about it! I'm just glad that now you got the chance to say that this is one of your favorite stories, cause that makes me really happy! :D Thanks for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: PolkaDotted
Date: 07/23/07 23:29
Chapter: The Belmanns

Cute! One of my favorite chapters, by far.

But then again, I couldn't choose. They're all my favorites. :]

Author's Response: I'm so glad it's your favorite chapter! :D Or one of your favorites... Either way, it makes me happy! :) Thanks for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: PolkaDotted
Date: 07/23/07 23:16
Chapter: The Belmanns

ahhhhhhh! i have to read but i just saw this be approved and i literally screamed for about five minutes :]

Author's Response: Haha - if you were that excited after seeing it being approved, I wish I could have seen you while you were reading the story! :D Thanks for reviewing! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: Marauderella
Date: 07/23/07 21:56
Chapter: The Belmanns

That was so sweet. I really hope Lily was actually awake and she head him. That would be so adorable, unless she got all scared and ruined it.

Author's Response: No, I'm sorry to say... Lily was not awake and she did not hear James. :) Sorry! Thank you for reviewing! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: Lilygirl107
Date: 07/23/07 20:50
Chapter: The Belmanns

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
This is a really happy moment!

Author's Response: Yes, it made me very happy, too! :D I love writing that ending... :) Thanks for reviewing! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: fillibuster_firework
Date: 07/23/07 20:25
Chapter: The Belmanns

awww, the ending was so sweet- i loved it! this is a really good story. it's for sure one of my favorites!

Author's Response: Thank you - I loved the ending too! :D That's one of my favorites in this story, I must admit... So I'm glad it's your favorite, too! Thank you for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: PurrPrinThom
Date: 07/23/07 20:04
Chapter: The Belmanns

I love your story. Lily and James are brilliantly written and very real. As well as making the characters your own, you also have managed to keep them close to the one's Jo created! Well done!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like the characters and how close they are to Rowling's characters! That's such a great compliment! :D Thank you so much for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: snejku
Date: 07/23/07 17:42
Chapter: The Belmanns

Firstly: It would be nice if you respond to any of the reviews.
Secondly: The story is awsome :) I like it very much. keep it comming! And don't bother yourself if the chapters are too short, for me they are ok :)

Author's Response: Um... repeat review? Haha! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: snejku
Date: 07/23/07 17:41
Chapter: The Belmanns

Firstly: It would be nice if you respond to any of the reviews.
Secondly: The story is awsome :) I like it very much. keep it comming! And bother yourself if the chapters are too short, for me they are ok :)

Author's Response: Sorry I didn't reply to the reviews quick enough - but I hope I did this time! ;) And I'm glad you like the story so much! Thanks for reviewing! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 07/23/07 16:47
Chapter: The Belmanns

*sob* Oh cod! Did I mention - I think I did - that I am actually in love with James?

When he was with Cindy, I swear, I could actually SEE him with her by the campside, it brought tears to my eyes! And then again - again, when Lily was upset, and he - he - well, you know what he did, again I nearly cried!

Why? Why on EARTH does the guy have to be so damn fictional, already?

This is going on my favourites, can't WAIT for the update, honestly!

Author's Response: Who ISN'T in love with James??? :D And I am SO excited that you almost cried! I shouldn't be too happy - but I can't help it! :) Thank you so much for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 07/23/07 16:02
Chapter: An Overactive Imagination

Hee hee. I loved Lily thinking he had a gun - the sort of mad, panicky thing I would start to think if I was her...

Oh, before I forget - this is the seventies, remember? In England. The thing about England, is that we don't use cents. If you want to mean "every cent" you would say "every penny" or "every pence" (penny is singular, pence is plural). Also, we call pants trousers, but that's not QUITE as important as currency.

Don't get me wrong, I totally understand, and I really like this story, I just thought I'd point it out.

Anyway, it was really good, they're scene ... I could see it, in my mind's eye, it was wonderfull. Really.

Author's Response: Good point on the cents/pants thing... I never thought of that! I'll try to keep an eye out for that! And I'm really glad you could see it - that's great! Thank you for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 07/23/07 15:26
Chapter: Somewhere

That was an abrupt ending. Was it supposed to finish that quickly? Well, never mind.

My favourite bit was James making out "ran into" a dragon, and Sirius's scepticsm - SUCH a Marauder Moment!

Did I mention that I love Sirius, too? Because I do. He makes me laugh, he's really funny as a teenager, and very cool as an adult (although a little reckless). Anyway, I'm going to find out more, congratulations on a wonderful fic!

Author's Response: Oh, yes, the lovable Marauders! But don't worry, I'll work in a few more Marauder moments before the story finishes! Thanks for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 07/23/07 14:39
Chapter: James' Accident

Oooh, what did she do that for?

Sorry, got to move on now and find out!

Author's Response: Haha - you've got to find out! :D Perfectly ok with me! Thanks for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 07/23/07 13:37
Chapter: Claustrophobia

=D

He comes shining through again, I see.

I love how you describe the electricity, the real tension between them, it's very well done! I'm going to read the next chapter now, though, so toodles, and see you then!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you felt the tension! I was hoping to really describe that well enough for readers to notice... and you did! :D Thanks! And thank you for reviewing! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

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