Loved it! Although I didn't understand in the epilogue where James was going through his planned proposal. Like he planned all those outings and then propose, and yet also planned that this wouldn't go through and instead proposing several months prior to all of it?
Also, as a huge James/Lily fan, I was slightly disappointed that they never admitted to saying "I love you" to one another, or at least Lily not saying it.
But besides that, it was nice reading a fanfic that wasn't based around Hogwarts, and the epilogue was brilliant in both time placement and setting :) (though I would've expected them to have gone home for the Christmas holidays)
wonderfully written and you captured my attention so well!
You are a really, really good writer! This is one of my favorite stories!
Oh my gosh, you finally finished it! I've been with you since chapter one -- through all the waiting -- and I can honestly say, it doesn't disappoint. It's in my top 3 favourites to say the least! I like the way you write.
This is beautiful! I love it! I'm so glad the epilogue is finally up! Brilliant job and perfect ending.
Aaaawww!!! This is A-D-O-R-A-B-L-E!!!!
aww sad that it ended but i enjoyed reading it through the months or years should i say. i hope continue to write and i will definitly continuing reading :)
Aw!!! I'm so glad you finished it!
I always knew Jimmy was a wizard! Ya know, in the epilouge I was kinda hoping for something that 'involved' Jess....:) Great story
Ahhhh!!!!!! Update soon! I've read this story like 5 times, it's super good!!! I need a James of my own! He seems so amazing!
i really wish you would finish this story; i really like it....
Author's Response: Sorry... in the process of working on it!
I absolutely adore this story! It's so quirky and original. I'd love to read the epilogue, would you be able to post it soon?
I love your story! It's amazing, has an original plot, and is so intriguing. I've loved reading this and I can't wait for the epilogue. Fantastic Job!
Bravo Bravo. I was so into the hcater. phenomal character devolopment and imagry! cant wait to read ur next fan fic!
OMG! This chappie was great, hon :) I want the epilogue SOON! :D I'm sad to see it end so soon, though :( Ah, well. All's well that ends well! (And you had better make them stick together at the end :P )
You were awesome!!
Waiting for the epilogue!!
YESS!!! FINALLYY!!!! i cant waitt for the epiloguee!!
this chapter was amazingg.. u write so well...i was so touched that i almost cried when Lily did..
hopefully you'll post soon.. cant waitt!
Yay! I imagined many different endings for this. But never like this! Love it!
Thank you for finishing this story so beautifully. It's the best one I've ever read--I've already reread it several times and I know I'll continue to do so. You were absolutely accurate to how I think of the characters and I love the plot. I can't wait for the epilogue!