Reviewer: Goodbye_Earl
Date: 10/05/08 17:45
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

I hope your sister's alright! Your authors note was really sad. I still loved this chapter, though =]

Reviewer: Goodbye_Earl
Date: 10/05/08 17:29
Chapter: Seventeenth detention...Potter is the bane of my existence

I'm blabbering away... much like Lily. I liked their fight, it sounds kind of like the ones I have with my sisters.

Reviewer: Goodbye_Earl
Date: 09/27/08 17:32
Chapter: fourth detention...and Pettigrew, the amazing intelect

This story is sooo good. I love Lily in it, she's really... are there words to describe her? Anyway, I think it's great!

Reviewer: moonstonesilver
Date: 09/03/08 17:49
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

ZOMGGGG!!!! Yes, I know. GRAPES. AND BROOM CLOSETS! AND jealous of TAMARA?! Whoopsies, that's a bit of an overreactive chapter! HAHAHA, don't mind me, I'll just lie here and go insane with laughter :P HAHAHHAHA, seriously, next update, pretty please? :D :D And the last chapter - I mean, with grass in James' mouth, and stuffing textbooks down Peter's mouth?! I know she really didn't stuff it, but it's fun to muse about what could have happened if she did... ;D

Reviewer: moonstonesilver
Date: 09/03/08 17:22
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

I hate Terry indeed :P I as usual wish James Potter was real so that I could somehow make him my big brother :)))) I've never had a big brother and I've always wanted one, and Jamsie-poo fits all my big brother dreams =DDDD Anyhoo, story is GREAT until now, and I am on to read the next chapter!!! Hope your lovely little sister is okay now!!! Please give her a kiss :P Seriously, though, I feel like hugging some little girly and giving her a kiss... herumph, stop laughing :P :D

Reviewer: PeaceLovePotter
Date: 08/31/08 12:17
Chapter: fourth detention...and Pettigrew, the amazing intelect

Wow! This is story is REALLY good!

Reviewer: lilyevans91
Date: 08/23/08 20:18
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

hehe, i love lily's distinctive voice--it's very funny and very lily-ish, and the plot line seems to be going quite well. all we need to make this story perfect is an update...*hinthint*...and no, subtlety is not something i excel at.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 08/19/08 14:06
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

that thing with aunt polly and the grapes are so funny!!! lol!!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 08/19/08 13:57
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

i really like how lily and the mauraders are friends! and McGonagall was so funny!!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 08/19/08 13:44
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

lol McGonagall... but that was another fantastic chapter! they're getting better and better!!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 08/19/08 0:54
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

at least terry wasnt flat-out snogging her. but what he did was still bad. poor lily :(

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 08/19/08 0:46
Chapter: Seventeenth detention...Potter is the bane of my existence

i think terry is cheating on lily, the stupid idiot. (terry, not lily) i hope she breaks up with him soon!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 08/19/08 0:35
Chapter: Sixteenth detention...and the day I was hospitalized in hell

i loved that conversation lily and james had! it was entertaining.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 08/19/08 0:20
Chapter: Fifteenth Detention...and my first failed attempt at revenge

lol!!! ok, that was the funniest chapter yet!! i loved it!!!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 08/19/08 0:10
Chapter: Tenth detention...and the evil genius blossoming whithin

oh, dear... i dont want to know what lily is going to do to james. ok, so maybe i do. haha

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 08/19/08 0:03
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

that was wonderful food fight!! way better than i could have written or thought of!! i loved it!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 08/18/08 23:52
Chapter: fourth detention...and Pettigrew, the amazing intelect

lol!! that was the funniest chapter yet!!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 08/18/08 23:46
Chapter: Third detention...and my growing list of deranged people

i loved sirius in this!! i hope we get to see more of him!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 08/18/08 23:40
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

lol!! that is too funny! i loved this first chapter! i have a question: does McGonagall actually read what Lily wrote?

Reviewer: Flying_Fawkes
Date: 07/30/08 7:11
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

i loved it! it was so funny! this is one of the first Lily/james FF's i've been able to read wothout getting bored - it's just too funny.

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