Reviewer: bluexroses
Date: 07/07/09 23:24
Chapter: Tenth detention...and the evil genius blossoming whithin

Hello! I've just started reading this fic and so far it's really amazing! I love how you mix silliness with subtle and sarcastic humor. The only thing I'd like to mention is that I doubt Lily would physically be bouncing in her seat. It just seems a bit OOC. Anyway great job, and I'm anxious to see what her plan of revenge will be!

Reviewer: queendiva4evr
Date: 04/15/09 19:52
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

Um, could you PLEASE hurry up with the next chapter?! This story is enormously amusing. But could you possibly integrate more of James' actual affection, because now he just seems kind of amused and patronizing. A dash of insecurity would effectively give us hope that Lily's wrong with her absurd assumption that he loves her no more =)

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 04/01/09 15:36
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

thats a cool foodfight

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 04/01/09 15:15
Chapter: Third detention...and my growing list of deranged people

Brainless Duke of Prats is the best name ever

Reviewer: gryffindor_chica13
Date: 03/15/09 20:33
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

Grapes??? Where did you come up with that one? :) Sirius and Sophie... i like it.

Reviewer: gryffindor_chica13
Date: 03/15/09 18:38
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

I loved the food fight! Very funny. :)

Reviewer: gryffindor_chica13
Date: 03/15/09 17:56
Chapter: fourth detention...and Pettigrew, the amazing intelect

Excellent... I can't wait to see what's making Lily so mad.

Reviewer: gryffindor_chica13
Date: 03/15/09 17:36
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

I love seeing Lily with such a dry sense of humor! Great work.

Reviewer: SnoopyMarauderess
Date: 03/11/09 15:59
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

For your first story, this is really good. It gives me some hope that I can do it as well!

Reviewer: meldina
Date: 02/23/09 19:50
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

OH MY LORD NO OH MY MERLIN POST MORE AND THANKS I WAS EATING GRAPES WHEN YOU STARTED TALKING ABOUT GRAPES LOL
XOXOXOXOX
MELDINA

Reviewer: Elizabeth Darcy
Date: 02/15/09 23:24
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

Hey!!! I just read your whole fic and let me say, I LOVED IT!!!!!!! though I am slightly dissapointed to know you havenīt updated in a looooong while..... are you planning on continuing the story??? I know there are a lot of us that love your fic and are waiting anxiously for the next update, wink wink!!!!

anywayy great story hope to read more soon!

Author's Response: Hey, sorry, this is like reaaally late. But I am going to continue this fic (sorry, yeah, its so late, more than a year)

Reviewer: meldina
Date: 02/10/09 17:05
Chapter: Fifteenth Detention...and my first failed attempt at revenge

aaawwwwweeeeeeeee wonderful XD
MELDINA

Reviewer: meldina
Date: 02/10/09 16:52
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

i loved it james and lily the git and the brain lol

Reviewer: crzyabtpttr
Date: 01/25/09 3:29
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

Hey! i lik ur fan fic. how many chaptrs is it gonna be? updat soon!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sapphireduck
Date: 01/20/09 17:09
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

I really love this story! More, please :D

Reviewer: Sarale
Date: 01/05/09 23:42
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

Hahaha, lovely chapter. I had a feeling Sophie and Sirius would end up together, and I hope you get another chapter out soon so Lily can finally realize what she's been missing. :P I hope that Lily will get her revenge on Terry somehow, maybe by going out with James...? :)

Reviewer: Sarale
Date: 01/05/09 20:01
Chapter: Fifteenth Detention...and my first failed attempt at revenge

I'm just finished chapter 6 and I must say that this story is brilliant and one of my favourite fan fictions. :) You sure know how to make me chuckle...and I'm just drooling for more! I'll give you a better review once I finish all the chapters, but I do hope you finish this story and not let it rot like many other authors do!
:)

Reviewer: Blubber
Date: 11/02/08 17:45
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

lol this is hilarious!!! i loved the grapes part, you do a great humour story. i enjoyed this.

Reviewer: InCompanyofFaeries
Date: 10/17/08 23:19
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

excellent =) pure excellence. I do enjoy reading your stories. They just make me smile. I'm still smiling from that last one. Keep it up =) and update? yes? Soon? That would be lovely

Reviewer: helz_belz
Date: 10/10/08 20:30
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

Haha, what a hilarious chapter. I loooovvveee it. I shall now get back to reading :)

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