Reviewer: prongs_babe_317426
Date: 09/08/07 11:43
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

this chapter was good, I hate terry for making Lily go through that, but it has to be done in order for James and Lily to get together I suppose. =D. absolutely love it!

Author's Response: Yeah, it is necessary...sadly. But, anyway, thanks!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 09/08/07 11:31
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

good chapter!! poor lily!!! i hope your sister is better!! please update soon!!

Author's Response: My sister is good. Thanks for the concern. And thanks for the praise

Reviewer: sorial
Date: 09/08/07 9:49
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

this happens to be my favorite chapter.
i've always wanted to be in a food fight
the consept of the story is really original.
i love it !you deserve a cookie for writing it.

Author's Response: Thanks for the cookie. Lol.

Reviewer: JamesNLilyLover
Date: 09/08/07 2:20
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

Wow. I am glad your sister is ok. But now that she is healthy again.....UPDATE QUICKLY! Your readers need to know what happens!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll tell her so. I am going to post another James/Lily story of mine, and then I'll work on the next chapter...

Reviewer: Obsessed_Much
Date: 09/07/07 17:44
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

I've really been looking forward to an update for a very long time and jumped for joy when I saw an e-mail in my inbox saying 'One of your favourites has been updated'!!! I'm quite partial to a bit of detention literature, I am.

And now we know what Terry said to make James hit him; which in turn made Lily cover him pie, which in turn made James pour pumpkin juice down her robes, which in turn made her reach for the platter of mash potato... well you get my drift. Stupid Terry! LILY EVANS IS NOT 'JUST A GIRL'!!! Dam him. What does he know anyway!?

Poor Lily though...

And yay for James! He's not a complete git as I was previously beginning to think! He's just a little clueless as to go about doing things, though he came up good in the end, did he not? I knew he would.

I'm really glad your sister is alright now. I know how difficult it is to deal with something like that. There are absolutely NO apologies needed for the lack of updates silly sausage! It was completely understandable. I really really hope all stays well for you.

And as for the 'relatively frequent' further update comment...YAY! Your Lily is funny and extremely flawed...which I like. Infalible Lily Evans is never a good read.

Can't wait for the next chapter... I hope Terry get's covered in some sort of pastry based dessert for the 'just a girl' comment!! Yeah, would just serve the stupid moron right!

Anyway...thankyou for keeping me well and truely entertained. The nomination for the award is completely justified.

Author's Response: Lol, I know the feeling when you say the 'favoirtes update message' and I'm so glad you feel that way about my story! Yes, Terry really was an idiot about that. I had a bit of difficulty coming up with something truly nasty for him to say. No, James isn't a complete git, he's actually so adroable...in his own arrogant way. 'silly sausage'...lol, do you mind if I use that quote in my story? Yeah, and, not meaning to sound conceited, but I love my Lily. SHe's original and she's got spunk. Thanks for the wonderful review, I really enjoyed it. And thanks for the congratulations on the nomination...though I'm sure I won't win. But the nomination is enough.

Reviewer: xameex167
Date: 09/07/07 15:13
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

awwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so cute! please put another chapter up here soon!

Author's Response: Lol, I'll try. Thanks.

Reviewer: gitgit
Date: 09/07/07 13:48
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

ahhahahaha i love the way you write man thats hilarious ... its a nice way to write the story

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it amuses you. That was one of my intentions...

Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 09/07/07 12:19
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

Aww, so cute. Update!

Author's Response: I shall.

Reviewer: sfc823
Date: 09/07/07 10:02
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

HA! i knew it i knew it i knew it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahaha i so have been thinking since chapter one that terry's "study group" included him liking someone else hahahahaha i was right!!!!! and i mean its sad for lily but terry is a absolute JERKFACE and he just needs to get lost fast and the slytherins with breasts wer HILARIOUS by the way... but seriously... i have never liked terry AT ALL and im so excited that lily FINALY knows what a digusting little zit he is and i have been so anxious to know what he said to james...and basicaly this chapter made me very happy cause i have been waiting for this since i started reading this story.... and i dont want you to think im heartless or anything cause it absofrigginlutely sucks when your boyfreind is a slimey melted gummi worm (really gross and really funny to watch people eat)...congradulatins on the nomination... you DEFINATELY deserve it... this story rocks my socks... i am soooooooo sorry about your sister, i hope she is doing okay... i totaly understand what you mean about hospitals, two of my three younger siblings have major medical issues and have gone through tons of surgeries, my baby sister is not even a year old yet and she has downs syndrome and a messed up esophogus and it pretty much sucks and my little brother has been doing the hospital thing since he was a baby and i was 6... so i definately understad where your coming from and i dont blame you for not updating... family comes first always.... i know this is really long but i have a fever(nothing serious) and am stuck at home and slightly hyper(take that you stupid fever) and borred out of my effing mind so you get to have creepily long reveiws! well im gonna go before my eccedingly long review makes you think i have no life... cause i do... have a life that is... i love your story to death and it is seriously my favorite fic ever and you better keep on writing or i will go insane... more insane...whatever you know what i mean

:~:S F:~:

Author's Response: Lol, I hoped that part wasn't so obvious, but of course some people guessed. Well done! I'd been wishing for this chapter too. And I'll like the next even more! Thanks for understanding. I felt awful not updating. I hope your siblings are okay too. It's so awful. I wish I'd been the one sick and not her. I love that you love this story. And I'll keep looking forward to your reviews. *hugs* Thanks!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 09/07/07 9:17
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

Awwww, James really is a sweetie and I want to huggle them both.

I guess now that the truth is out, the story is nearly done right? Was this like the pnultimate chapter or what?

Hope you update soon and loads of hugs to you and your sister.=Sammy

Author's Response: I know! I want to huggle them too!! Well, now, even though Lily owes James a huge 'I'm sorry'...and really has to recognize that he's a nice guy, they are no where near getting together...hope that's okay, and I haven't disapointed you by informing you that there will be at least another eight chapters....Thanks for the review and the hugs! I'll tell my sister... mia

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 09/07/07 0:20
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

Great chapter, it was really, really good! I KNEW Terry was really an ass! The jerk! Poor James, that HAIRSTYLE... whoo... *shudder* My mum thought it was funny too, though. Which it was. I'm really sorry about your little sister! I really hope she's okay!

Author's Response: Lol, tell your mom I'm glad! Yeah, Terry...not very likeable...but, who knows... My sis is okay, and she says thanks!

Reviewer: lily16
Date: 09/06/07 20:28
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

you're forgiven :)

this chapter wasn't that funny, but lily's upset, so it works. i loved how thier not kissing when lily walks in on them, it's more real the way you wrote it. i don't hate terry- he seemed confused. i hope lily and james could get togeter now!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 09/06/07 20:10
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

Way good! I bet it was James who sent that flower! 10/10

Author's Response: You'll see...soon enough. HOpe to find you all the way at the end of the story...

Reviewer: KitKat517
Date: 09/06/07 20:08
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

Lovely chapter. Poor Lily. And yes, I do hate Terry. I didn't realize how much I missed this story until I opened the email and heard myself squeal "yay". I am quite willing to forgive you for the long wait as I can definitly empathize about the effects of having to spend a lot of time in a hospital and am very busy with school work myself. Can't wait to read what happens next! Tootles!
~Catherine

Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 09/06/07 19:41
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

Nice chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Prongs92
Date: 09/06/07 19:39
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

I hope your sister is ok. I hate Terry! Jerk! Can't wait to see what happens next! Great job!

Author's Response: Oh, she's okay now. Thanks! I suspected that you'd all hate Terry...hope to be udating soon...

Reviewer: Lily Elegance
Date: 09/04/07 15:34
Chapter: Seventeenth detention...Potter is the bane of my existence

Cool fic, I'm really sorry to say this but why hasn't Lily punched James yet! She must have amazing self control. However I don't think much of Terry either why were he and erm...Maura smiling at each other...suspicous?!! Keep writing.


Author's Response: Lol, don't be sorry. If they acted a little bit more upon their impulses, they should both be punching each other. That's what they should do...Maura...Hmmm...interesting...you'll find out soon, I hope.... Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: hayellbayell
Date: 09/03/07 18:20
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

mugglenet is thoroughly pissing me off. can they ever validate a chapter on the first try?!

Author's Response: Don't be annoyed at mugglenet. If it isn't validated on the first try, that means it needs to be looked over. Let's just be patient and see if it gets accepted. The mods at mugglenet do a lovely job! But I'm glad you're anxious to read this.

Reviewer: Lils_Loves_Jamsie24
Date: 09/01/07 13:07
Chapter: Seventeenth detention...Potter is the bane of my existence

i like the format, it makes this one stick out from the other stories

Author's Response: Aw, thanks...I'm glad...

Reviewer: xameex167
Date: 08/20/07 21:15
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

i know i recently reviewed...but this is seriously like my FAVORITE fanfic i've ever read...so u need to put another chapter on please!

Author's Response: I will, I will. I'm glad this is your favorite *birgrin* Mia

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