Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 09/23/07 3:25
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

My heart goes out to porr Lily Evans, who has just found out that her boyfriend has been cheating on her. And I'd like to give James Potter a BIG hug to thank him for being so sweet and decent to Lily (ie sticking up for her right before the food fight). Update soon, yes?

Author's Response: Hi! I'm so glad you've read my story! I know, I love James, wish I could give him a hug too. Well, Terry wasn't exactly cheating on Lily, but he definitely wasn't good. Thanks for reviewing, and once I find a temporary beta, I am posting right away, because the next chapter is already written. Mia

Reviewer: dancingwithneville
Date: 09/21/07 11:16
Chapter: fourth detention...and Pettigrew, the amazing intelect

I love it !! Wow it's so good!

Author's Response: Thanks. Very much.

Reviewer: bbbubb
Date: 09/20/07 18:24
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

I really love this story!!!!! Thanks for finally reveiwing!!!!!! Keep going with the great work!!! This is one of my favorite James/ Lily Romance Stories ever!!!!!!!

i'm sorry to hear about your sister:-( thank god shes alright!!!!!

Author's Response: Yeah...I know. I'll give thanks every day for as long as I live. Thanks, so much! It always makes me so happy when I get reviews like this. Thanks!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 09/16/07 14:27
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

Wow. That was a very serious chapter. I expected that there was something was up with Terry, but nothing quite like that. I, being the little cliched person I am, expected him to be part of a conspiracy against Dumbledore.

I liked the prank ideas. Green hair and large breasts? Personally, I would have put them both on the same person, but that may just be me...

Keep up the excellent work! :D

Author's Response: Well, yeah, one serious chapter so far...it was sort of weird writing it, as I've become so used to the hyper happy sarcastic Lily. Ah well, I liked how it turned out. Lol, if you mean put them both on James, I thought about it, but I needed a good hex for James to perform on the slytherins, and that was perfect. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: riddiculusvampire
Date: 09/14/07 18:54
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

oh god..poor Lily. I didn't seee this one coming, i always thought that Terry was the "nice" type of guy. please update soon! and i hope your sister is feeling better. :)

Author's Response: Well, I wanted him to seem like that, so I'm glad that's what you thought...My sis is all better...in fact, she's just gone off to watch a concert...typical...Thank God! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Just Listen
Date: 09/13/07 20:40
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

Fantatic chapter. It wasn't as funny, obviously, and I actually liked it. Not that I want Lily to stop being hilarious, of course...anyway, I want more soon. Hope everything permits that....


Author's Response: Thanks. I hope so too, Rory.

Reviewer: lowveldgirl
Date: 09/13/07 6:03
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

Great Chapter!! Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: me neither. Thanks!

Reviewer: katiebell360
Date: 09/11/07 17:03
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

fabulous job! i think you picked just the right time to begin the whole lily -changes -her -mind -about- james process. although this chapter wasn't as funny as the other ones, (which i don't blame you for) it was still very captivating and interesting. the extreemely long wait(which i also do not blame you for) was horrendous, because i just couldn't wait to read more of such a wonderful story. this story is definitly in my top two choices......maybe the first. please update as soon as you can. i think every reader would appreciate it! i hope your sister is better!

katie bell

Author's Response: My sister is great now. Thanks! Lol, I'm sorry for the wait. I still feel really bad. I hate those stories where Lily seems to just *poof* like James, so I made sure mine wasn't like that. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 09/11/07 12:33
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

Wow! That's great that you were nominated! This story is really entertaining and funny. I wasn't really surprised about Terry because I thought these 'study groups' sounded a bit suspicious but trust me, most of the stuff in this story is so unexpected and funny! That part about Lily making it look like James had wet his bed was hilarious!
I hope you update soon, though I really hope your sister gets better. If something comes up again of course we'll understand. I can't even imagine what that's like.

Thanks for the laughs for now!

Author's Response: I'm glad it is mostly surprising, but I was sure that what terry was up to was never going to be abundantly surprising. A lot of you guessed, and that's okay. Thanks for much for the compliments and understanding. Everything is going okay lately.

Reviewer: midnight ink
Date: 09/11/07 12:20
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

I'm not surprised you've been nominated, this is a great story, your pertrayal of both Lily and James, as well as their rollercoaster relationship is fantastic. It's a wonderfull and - mostly - lighthearted read, I am eagerly awaiting the next installment, but ofcourse real life comes first, whenever the next chapters up I'll be here reading and reviewing =) Midnight

Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks. Yeah, it has to have it's not so funny mo's I guess...thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Obsessed_Much
Date: 09/11/07 9:24
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

Hey me again, sure you can use "silly sausage" if you like...though I was going to say you were as 'crazy as a coconut'...
Sausage ... coconut ... is there much of a difference?
Anyhow...hope the update is materializing nicely...

Author's Response: Lol, sausages, coconut, I love food-related humor. The upate is lurking around somewhere...I'll fo find it...

Reviewer: patient wanderer
Date: 09/10/07 19:37
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

Gakkk!

YOU UPDATED!!!
YAYAY!

Okay, I'm a hysterical moron, but so what. I'm okay with that. I love this, she knows, she knows! I hate Terry, I don't care what you do with him next! Hate him!

James, however...I wish I were Lily...anyway, I'm glad Gabi is okay, God knows...and CONGRATULATIONS on the QSQ nominations...I would nominate too, if my account on there worked...anyway, don't take long again...or else...lol, sorry.


Author's Response: don't we all sort of wish we were Lily. Don't let your boyfriend see this...lol, thanks, hon. Your reviews are always so funny.

Reviewer: midnight ink
Date: 09/10/07 16:19
Chapter: Fifteenth Detention...and my first failed attempt at revenge

I don't hate you, I think you're bloody brilliant, I'm loving this story, it's really brightened my day, ou're a comic genius!

Author's Response: *blushes* Why, thank you! I've loved your reviews.

Reviewer: midnight ink
Date: 09/10/07 16:05
Chapter: Tenth detention...and the evil genius blossoming whithin

NOt a dissappointment att all, the last chapter was hilarious but this one was far more intriguing, you do a great job of keeping up the momentum throughout the whole story.

Author's Response: Thanks again. Keeping the readers interested is very important, so I'm glad.

Reviewer: midnight ink
Date: 09/10/07 15:15
Chapter: Third detention...and my growing list of deranged people

This is such an awesome story! *giggles- a lot!- can't say much more have to go read next chapter, NOW!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks.

Reviewer: LavanderLily
Date: 09/09/07 1:43
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

This is a great story so far. It's so original, I love it! Some parts really had me cracking up, and I don't usually laugh out loud. I can't wait until the next chapter!

Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad it makes you laugh. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Lostlovegoods
Date: 09/08/07 13:30
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

I absolutely love this story! It has all the best elements of awkwardness, guilt, and foolish pranks! It sounds alot like my life! Although without the magic....darn...haha I am also super glad that your sister is okay and that you are getting your life back in order! Especially that you're updating now! :) Oh Terry is terrible! He didnt do anything completely awful but it's just enough to make him on a not-so-loved list for me! I just moved from Upstate NY so that little detail you added in your A.N. made me smile :) This story is definately worth the Quicksilver Quill award! Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, I wish there were a little magic in my life too. Terry will have a few other appearances, and maybe he'll change...who knows...I love upstate NY, and am sad for you because you moved. Thanks, very much for everything!

Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, I wish there were a little magic in my life too. Terry will have a few other appearances, and maybe he'll change...who knows...I love upstate NY, and am sad for you because you moved. Thanks, very much for everything!

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 09/08/07 12:49
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

very good
i can't wait for the romance to show though

Author's Response: Yeah, I can't wait to start writing it...

Reviewer: prettynpink21190
Date: 09/08/07 12:44
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war



Hilarious. and you also have a fantastic lexicon. keep it up.

Reviewer: prettynpink21190
Date: 09/08/07 11:50
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war



Hilarious. and you also have a fantastic lexicon. keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks.

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