Reviewer: vasta
Date: 10/09/07 20:49
Chapter: Seventeenth detention...Potter is the bane of my existence

this is such a good story! you really have amazing imagination :)

please, update soon, cause I wouldn't mind a bit of a good read ^^

Author's Response: I have already updated. Thanks very much for the compliment of my imagination. Lol, thanks.

Reviewer: Hermione_Ginny_Ron_Harry
Date: 10/05/07 21:35
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

By the way, what is pneumotorox? I've never heard of it before but it sounds scary. Once again amazing storie and i hope you up-date soon :)

Author's Response: Somepeople are born with these 'bubbles' on their lungs. And sometimes, they pop. And the air in your lungs leaks out and it stays there, trapped, between the lung and the rib cage. The doctor said that if the person loses too much, apperently something awful happens. He didn't say what. But that actually sounds a lot worse than it is. Normally, most people get treated, and then it's almost guaranteed they're okay. The worst part is just that this happens to younger people, and my sister had never suffered through almost anything before. So it was a shock. It's touching how much well-wishes she got from my reviewers. I love you guys!

Reviewer: Hermione_Ginny_Ron_Harry
Date: 10/05/07 21:28
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

I am so sorry to hear your sister was sick, but at least she got better... or i think thats what you said. Anyway i really loved this chapter, it makes their characters show through really well, Bravo!plz update soon i can't wait to read more :D

Author's Response: Yeah, my sister is good now. 100% better. Thanks! For the concern and reviewing...

Reviewer: Hermione_Ginny_Ron_Harry
Date: 10/05/07 20:18
Chapter: Fifteenth Detention...and my first failed attempt at revenge

i absolulty loved this chapter it was hilarious!!! i was laughing so hard at some points that my deaf cat even noticed and shifted off the key board. Good job and keep on writing! plz don't be one of those authors who stop writing the story cause they get bored, but then don't bother to tell any of the readers so we keep checking to see if it will get up-dated and it never dose. i hate that :( any way really good job i love this story!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh, I don't plan on being like that. I plan on writing this to the end...thanks for the review, it made my day!

Reviewer: GinnyTonks
Date: 09/30/07 19:25
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

you did not surprise me, I saw that coming a mile away....but it makes a good story line..... please update!!!

Author's Response: Lol, I think I managed to suprised about three people. Ah well, I could tell it was obvious from the very beginning...everyone but Lily could...thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 09/28/07 22:16
Chapter: Third detention...and my growing list of deranged people

Yay! I love Sirius! Poor Sophie ...
I love Lilys criticisms of McGonagall and Dumbledore. I literally started laughing. This is so funny! The best bit: Lily Evans: Queen of Cool. Nice.

Author's Response: Yeah, I love Sirius too...who doesn't? Lol, thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 09/27/07 17:07
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

I hope your sister feels better. It sounds serious. Yes, I understand how hard it is to be waiting in a hospital... but I hope everything is better now!
Poor Lily.. actually it's good! Now she can go to James!! I HOPE! Please, please update soon.. so I don't die! AH. =D

Author's Response: Lol, can't have you dying, now can we. I'll be updating this weekend. Yay! Yeah, my sisters thing was serious, but she is doing fantasticly now! Thanks so much, I appreciate it a lot.

Reviewer: GinnyTonks
Date: 09/27/07 8:47
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

wow, that chapter was really good..........update as soon as possible!
...................I send my regards to you and your family/ sorry to hear she was sick..........keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks. And thanks for the concerns.

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 09/27/07 6:50
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

This is an amazing story so far! I found this in the Hufflepuff library on the forums, and the title caught me. I'm a sucker for Lily/James. *sighs*
I love your characterization of Lily. She seems nice, yet slightly evil. That's the way I've always thought of her.
I don't like Terry, but that's only because I love James and hate all of Lily's boyfriends before him.
Good job! I'll get around to reading the other chapters soon.

Author's Response: Wow, turns out posting in there really did payoff! I'm so glad you're liking this. I never really liked that stereotype image of Lily, so I morphed her into something a little more sinister. Lol, anyway, I'm glad she doesn't scare you.

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/26/07 21:37
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

my wishes are with your little sister let god watch over here.

Author's Response: Thanks. God did his job, she is doing wonderfully now.

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/26/07 21:25
Chapter: Seventeenth detention...Potter is the bane of my existence

Im so sorry that your sister had to experinence time in a hospital bahh i hate them anway im glad she is okay and your story is magnifecint! Dont give up on it! It truly is a peice of work Abby, Claire, Jenny, Lily, Lucas, Nathan and James just loved reading them i appreciate it. Abby would give her review but she is sick right now but i would love to write it for her so here goes.

Abby: Me mes fells conneted tooo urs storyies. gooda jobS

Author's Response: Aw, I hope Abby is better soon! Thanks for everything, and the very nice support. I really really appreciate!

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/26/07 21:10
Chapter: Sixteenth detention...and the day I was hospitalized in hell

you seist to amaze me... just pure pure brillance...


Abby: mores mores now!

Author's Response: *grins maniacally*

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/26/07 20:45
Chapter: Fifteenth Detention...and my first failed attempt at revenge

aww its okay hun, you did fine, even though you couldnt think of anything it turned out brilliantly. I found it so interesting. Your just such a great author and i cant wait to read more. Your doing a spectacular job.


Abby: trippy not good! watch outs okays?! JAMES LILY YEA!

Author's Response: Yes, JAMES LILY! YEAH! Lol, sorry, bit excited there by the many new reviews. Anyway, thanks, I really don't like writing filler chapters, but its good to know that they aren't so dull to read.

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/26/07 20:19
Chapter: Tenth detention...and the evil genius blossoming whithin

hmm what will lily do for revenge i wonder?


Abby: me me like jameees andd lily sshould likei himms 2!

Author's Response: Yes she should, Abby you are entirely right. Lol, I wonder...

Reviewer: Wicked_Quill
Date: 09/26/07 19:50
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

'twas wonderful!! I just stumbled onto this this story so I can't hate you! I have read your other J/L fic mentioned above and a reason for beauty I love them both! Sucks about your sister, I can hardly imagine what you must have felt like. I had a much less intense experiance with my grandpa. Seeing anyone you love in the hospital is awful especially right before surgery, So I'm really glad for your whole family that she's better. Please update soon!!!!! oh I have to gloat that I saw the affair thing coming a mile away!!

Author's Response: Hey. Thanks, lol, for reading all of those stories of mine. I know, watching your loved ones suffer is the hardest thing in the world. But seeing them well again is the best. So all here is good. Thanks very much. I hope you're Grandpa is good too. Lol, there were a few others who have the rite to gloat as well. I didn't manage to make that such a secret, I guess. Ah well. Thanks!

Reviewer: Wicked_Quill
Date: 09/26/07 17:26
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

I loved it! I now have a desperate urge to lob food at someone. It seemed just like a food fight at Hogwarts would be. And on another note Terry is a player! study group=affair, am I right?

Author's Response: I have a desperate urge to let someone lob food at me. Hehe, maybe that would work out.'ll find out about Terry in chapter...9. Read on! Mia

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/26/07 16:45
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

Sirius had taken an empty bowl and placed it over his head like a helmet, as means to protect his oh-so-perfect hair and was chucking anything at anyone so long as he was sure his hair was safe.

hahaha thats my favorite sentence right there. You did really good. I especially liked the talk between sophie/lily and james/lily. You did awesome dont doubt me! It was just so unexplainable.... i think i might read it again...


ya know the deal

Abby: youu think sophie wills start a foodgifht with mes? i gonna go gets a bowly!! SIRI!

Author's Response: That happens to be one of my favorite parts too. I'm glad you liked the talk with Sophie, I don't think many other reviewers mentioned they liked that. Lol, tell Abby she'll have to clean up after the food-fight, and that won't be as much fun...

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/26/07 16:28
Chapter: fourth detention...and Pettigrew, the amazing intelect

ohh cliff hanger naughty naughty girl!! but bloody brilliant girl! Cant wait for more thanks!


you know the deal

Abby: me me wants to knows what she she see!!! maybe mayybe james?

Author's Response: Lol, naughty and brilliant, that's me.

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/26/07 16:21
Chapter: Third detention...and my growing list of deranged people

wow wow, this is such an entertaining story, wow, just keep going hun give it all you got


you know the deal

Abby: more pleease?

Author's Response: Lol, thanks. Yes, Abby there is more.

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/25/07 21:01
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

Good, Good, your just brilliant! hahaha, i really mean it hun, keep going, reach for the stars.


ehh, here comes the cutie.

Abby: i hopps shee see james the way i doo.. he a good boy i knows he is i just know it!

Author's Response: Aw, I'm loving receiving these double reviews. Thanks very much! I will, reach for the stars I mean. ;-)

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