Reviewer: AneleY
Date: 10/16/07 11:53
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

I'm so glad so updated! It was nice to read this story again! It was a nice charpter, I'm happy the relationship is finally taking a new direction!
And I like that you didn't make Lily's ex boyfriend to be the most awful person, just someone who changed his mind, it's more realistic, you know?
I'll be waiting to read more! =)

Author's Response: annoys me when people make the ex's evil...they are people who make mistakes,that's all...I'm glad you noticed...

Reviewer: SiriusPotterFan1
Date: 10/15/07 22:38
Chapter: Tenth detention...and the evil genius blossoming whithin

I've been reading aaaand....

I LOVE IT! She's a GREAT character, full of emotion, absolutely fantastic!

You're an awesome writer, keep it up!


Author's Response: Isn't she...! I am..? Lol, thanks...

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 10/15/07 22:08
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

Yay, they're friends! Hooray!!! Great chapter, I absolutely loved it! Can't wait for the next one! McGonagall's reaction is awesome!

Author's Response: I'm glad. I love McGonagall...random, I know.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 10/15/07 19:38
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

*sniff* update soon!!

Author's Response: Why sniff? Are you trying to make me update faster... Lol, okay.

Reviewer: HarperLee
Date: 10/15/07 19:09
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

I've been excitedly awiting this moment! Yay!
Write more, FAST!

Author's Response: I'll try...I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 10/15/07 18:37
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over


AWW! That was sooo good i loved the ending it was just amazing haha i also loved this part:

. Hogwarts hasn’t enjoyed a juicy piece of gossip like this since…Rita Skeeter, who had graduated the previous year, had faked a pregnancy.

Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted to throw in this little random line, just to make more of a connection to JK's world...also 'cause I love to make fun of Rita...

Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 10/15/07 17:40
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

Wow, this definatly doesn't seem as long as you said it was. Its a great story, so that might be part of it. :) Nice chapter, by the way. :D

Author's Response: Aw. Thanks

Reviewer: Prongs92
Date: 10/15/07 17:05
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

Awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Meneither.

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 10/15/07 16:49
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

Awww that's sweet! I loved this chapter!!! I'm glad that they're finally friends :) does this mean that lily and james will get together soon? UPDATE SOON!!!

Author's Response: Well....sort of... i won't give it away...

Reviewer: Wicked_Quill
Date: 10/15/07 16:45
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

I swear McGonagall just wiped a tear from the corner of her eye. I love this line. I was so excited that you'd updated, I love this story it makes me laugh!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it. By they way, that's my favorite line too...

Reviewer: I Am Peeves
Date: 10/15/07 16:31
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

I LOVE this story. Update soon!

Author's Response: That made me really happy.

Reviewer: loveismagicharry
Date: 10/15/07 15:53
Chapter: fourth detention...and Pettigrew, the amazing intelect

I ma one chapter three and it's really good!

Author's Response: I hope you make it to chapter ten...and beyond once they are up...

Reviewer: jojo_dolphin2394
Date: 10/15/07 15:11
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

Awwww! Cute! I like the James/Lily action... finally! *giggles*
P.S: Are you from Brazil? I'm half brazillian.

Author's Response: First, thanks for the review. And yes, I am brazilian. Half anyway. My mom is. My dad's from Massachusets...That'so you live in Brazil...?

Reviewer: Tizzy
Date: 10/15/07 11:34
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over


(that was my intelligent input)

Author's Response: Lol, I liked it.

Reviewer: hp_93
Date: 10/15/07 7:26
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

God I Love this Chapter!!!! i love it when james puts his hand around lly. i have just one complain: the chapter was a little bit short. i wanted to read more!

Author's Response: was short...second shortest so far I think...but, it got covered what I wanted done, and nothing else was really needed. Glad you liked!

Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 10/15/07 6:41
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

I loved how you made McGonagall cry during the detention. I think you handled everyone very nicely. James is such a SWEET guy! Don't we all wish that a guy like him could be in our lives? (gives a wistful sigh)

Author's Response: Lol, yes we do...I'm glad you liked the way it turned out...I was worried that maybe it was a little too fast...I guess not. Thank Goodness.. :-)

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 10/13/07 5:52
Chapter: Fifteenth Detention...and my first failed attempt at revenge

Oh my Godric!

That was hilarious.

Right now I need to go reflect some more on how tying someone’s shoelaces together is an act of pure evil. I should know.

Loved that bit. I've done my fair share of tying shoelaces together, but somehow I've never done that to an insanely cute guy who loves me and then he fell down the stairs on top of me.

Actually, I wouldn't mind that. =)

Loving this story.

Author's Response: Yeah...Lily doesn't realize how lucky she is...*sighs*...Thanks for the review...

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 10/13/07 5:46
Chapter: Tenth detention...and the evil genius blossoming whithin

This chapter was adorable! I only have a few criticisms.
I think that Lily's gullibility (I have no idea how to spell that) in this chapter was a little OOC. Despite her hatred for James, she must know that he isn't really the kind of guy to punch her boyfriend for no reason but having been called a few names.
James really likes Lily, and I somehow don't think he would be that mean to the guy who makes her happy, no matter how much he wants her for himself, unless he had a very good reason, like him treating Lily badly.

Author's Response: Well, I really don't think she knew James was nice at all. It's just the way she hates him...I think we'd all like to believe that she only pretended to hate him, or thought that deep down he was actually truly decent, but in my opinion she didn't. Something happened to make her change. But I comletely understand you disagreeing. We all have our points of view, righ? :-)

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 10/13/07 5:31
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

You did the food-fight perfectly! The closeness between Lily and James was oh-so-romantic!
I do not like Terry. Good on James for punching him.
J'adore James!

Author's Response: Lol, everyone loves James, it seems...

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 10/13/07 5:06
Chapter: fourth detention...and Pettigrew, the amazing intelect

I'm so sorry!

I know I said I was going to finish reading this story ... but I totally forgot! I'll put it in my favourites now and finish reading and reviewing them!

Anyway. Back to the review. This chapter was so cute! you've gotta feel a bit sorry for Lily when she realises the flowers from James, even though she does love him in the end ... *sighs*

My favourite part:

“Iff’ uff’’ ‘Amef oo’ ‘femp iff’ oo’ du.”

Oh, well, how intelligible.

I loved it! So cute. This is great!

Author's Response: Awww...thanks so much for's no obligation, and I thank you very much for taking the, I felt sorry for Lily too.

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