Reviewer: katiebell360
Date: 10/17/07 19:21
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

great job, i really loved this chapter!!!!!!!!! totally awesome! please update soon! very very soon!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I hope to.

Reviewer: lilyevans91
Date: 10/17/07 18:16
Chapter: Seventeenth detention...Potter is the bane of my existence

hey, great chapter! something i really like is how you tell us what's happenning in the present, and then lily doesn't have quite enough time to tell us about it, it's like a little teaser-trailer or something--i can't wait to hear about james' hair cut! i also like how you're subtly inserting some comments into here that hint that lily is starting to like she notices his hair more now, etc. and of course, james is only pretending to not like her anymore...i just know it...good job, once again!

Author's Response: I'm glad you notcie the little subtleties...I just love writing them in...

Reviewer: lilyevans91
Date: 10/17/07 17:37
Chapter: Tenth detention...and the evil genius blossoming whithin

great chapter, very funny! i'm on to the next one...

Author's Response: :-D

Reviewer: lilyevans91
Date: 10/17/07 17:27
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

oh my god, this was hilarious! really, truly, funny, and you mad the food fight sound so fun that i wanted to have one too! wow, that sounds fun! anyway, i also really loved the conversation with james at the end of the food fight, that was so realistic, and i love how lily's too proud to cry in front of him so she throws strawberry ice cream at him and runs away. great chapter, once again!

Author's Response: Thanks...again, lol. It seems you really understand Lily's character...awesome!

Reviewer: lilyevans91
Date: 10/17/07 17:13
Chapter: fourth detention...and Pettigrew, the amazing intelect

hehe, lily is great! she's so perfectly lily-esque! i loved peter, too, that was histerical. the one thing i would suggest workin gon is just little things like typos. for example, at the end you wrote "this detention ha seemed oddly short" rather than has seemed, and i think there were a couple in the beginning of the chapter as well. but my favorite part was when lily said that she had dreamt about her secret admirer, and it hurt to know that it was just james--that really captured her emotion perfectly, its just as i would feel in her situation, so great job with that!

Author's Response: Yeah, I hate the stupid typos...I just can't spot them...but luckily I got betas for that...Thanks for the reviews, they are a lot more thorough than most I receive...not that I don't adore the short ones...

Reviewer: lilyevans91
Date: 10/17/07 17:03
Chapter: Third detention...and my growing list of deranged people

ha! that was a great chapter! i loved her interaction with sirius, i think he likes sophie!...and i love her vanishing of james' paper--great chapter, i'm on to the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks! That is a matter still being debated. By the by, if anyone wants to share their views, feel free.

Reviewer: lilyevans91
Date: 10/17/07 16:57
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

wow, i really like this so far! though the idea of have detention for a whole year is a bit far-fetched, i think it'll make for a good plotline! also, i really liked your characterization of lily; the way she was quite specific in nameing herself, in stating the time, in counting the number of detentions...that all seems very lily-ish. also, her temper and use of sarcasm is something i like very much! i'm on to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yea...I agree...sort of wild...but I just figured, what the heck, it won't be the only crazy story out there...Thanks for the thoughtful review. By the way, I love your story too.

Reviewer: greylady0405
Date: 10/17/07 16:40
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

i had pretty much just been skimming the fanfic but i read the first sentance of this one and i was like "wow" and i just kept reading!!! this is REALLY good!

Author's Response: Yay. A new reader!

Reviewer: Kathyhermy123
Date: 10/17/07 4:51
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

:) Ahh, did I ever love [a fanfic] till now?

Author's Response: Lol, I don't know...I'm honored that your first love is my fanfic...;-P

Reviewer: gp6th
Date: 10/16/07 23:46
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

This chapter was sooo cute! You are an /amazing/ writer... but you HAVE to update soon, or I'll like... die, or summat. xD

Author's Response: You are my 500th reviewer! Yay! *throws confetti* *shouts for joy* *hugs* runs away* And please don't die, you are my 500th reviewer. ;-P

Reviewer: SiriusPotterFan1
Date: 10/16/07 21:56
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

Awwhh. That's really sweet. I love this.

Great job, as usual.

Reviewer: SiriusPotterFan1
Date: 10/16/07 21:23
Chapter: Fifteenth Detention...and my first failed attempt at revenge

You're a wonderful writer, great great great great story.

So well written. Looove it. :)

Author's Response: Lol. THanks for the exagerated praise. Means a lot.

Reviewer: InCompanyofFaeries
Date: 10/16/07 19:32
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

yay! I just started reading your fic about three hours ago. I read the whole thing, stopping only to eat dinner. It's fantastic! I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks. I'm glad you're hooked!

Reviewer: GinnyTonks
Date: 10/16/07 18:42
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

I luv this chapter!! Its so sweet how he wraps his arm around Lily.......

keep up the good work, but next time please make it a bit longer......update asap! I can't wait, lol..........

Author's Response: didn't need to be longer, and longer would've just brought it down...don't worry, the next will be....big sweet filler chapter....Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: GinnyTonks
Date: 10/16/07 18:37
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

thanks for updating....but why so short??
I liked this chapter, btw

Author's Response: Well, I didn't really need to incorporate much else...the next one will be long are warned...

Reviewer: mugglechicka5565
Date: 10/16/07 17:29
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

it needs to continue!


continue it NOW!

Author's Response: Sure. Lol.

Reviewer: Flobberworm93
Date: 10/16/07 15:51
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

That is so adorable!

It really looks like it's finished to me, but the thingymajigger says it's still incomplete. What else do you have planned?

Author's Response: Nope. Not finished...I guess this is just a calmer chapter...thanks for always reviewing!

Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 10/16/07 15:45
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

*Applause* I love this story! Thank you for updating, but do it quicker this time.

Author's Response: *bow*. quick. You betcha'!

Reviewer: hiccupping toaster
Date: 10/16/07 15:21
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

This story is...incredible. I have to admit, I used to be sceptical about fan fiction, but I decided to try it out one day and this title caught my eye. Immediatly I was hooked and I now LOVE fan fiction. I'm even trying writing some myself. THANK YOU!!!!!!

Author's Response: Aw, you're welcome...I'm glad I made you change your mind...

Reviewer: loveme
Date: 10/16/07 14:21
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

More more more! This is a very well structured story. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks.

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