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Name: pinkandgreenqt (Signed) · Date: 11/17/07 11:08 · For: Seventeenth detention...Potter is the bane of my existence
Prayers to your sister. I hope she is healthy.

Author's Response: She is now. Thanks very much!


Name: pinkandgreenqt (Signed) · Date: 11/17/07 7:20 · For: Third detention...and my growing list of deranged people
Awesome. But I must ask. Why'd you skip from detention one to detention three?

Author's Response: Oh, sorry. I guess nobody noticed that at the beginning of this chapter Lily explained that she spent the entire detention calling James names. YOu weren't the first to ask. Thanks for reviewing!


Name: hannah17 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 17:57 · For: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war
omg lol i cant remember if i have reviewd this chapter or not, but just in case I havent I wanted you to know that this was one of the most hilarious stories I have ever read. You did the food fight perfectly! I was laughing so hard the first time I think my mother was worried about me...I normally dont laugh by myself in my room lol but this was just to hilarious!! I love this story and I can't wait for your next update! :)

Author's Response: Lol, apperently I made a lot of family members worry for reader's sanity. Lol, I'm so glad...thanks for reviewing! I aboslutely adore hearing what my readers have to say! Thanks.


Name: Kathyhermy123 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/07 12:56 · For: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over
Aww! I'm loving it! So cute...

Is this the end? *no no no please no no no*

`Kathy

Author's Response: lol, no it's not the end. More will come soon.


Name: peevesismyhero (Signed) · Date: 11/02/07 21:57 · For: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over
THIS IS SO FANTASTIC!!!! so im on my computer in the library and im reading this and i just BURST OUT LAUGHING and the lady behind me just kinda looks at me like im crazy and walks away....:-D anyway! YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!!!!! i'm totally addicted to this story!


Name: peevesismyhero (Signed) · Date: 11/02/07 21:57 · For: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over
THIS IS SO FANTASTIC!!!! so im on my computer in the library and im reading this and i just BURST OUT LAUGHING and the lady behind me just kinda looks at me like im crazy and walks away....:-D anyway! YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!!!!! i'm totally addicted to this story!

Author's Response: Lol, sorry for making people look at you funny. But I'm so glad you like it. Thanks for the review!


Name: BRITTD25 (Signed) · Date: 10/31/07 13:15 · For: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over
ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC!!! Please write more! You have done an excellent job with this story!!!

Author's Response: THANKS!! Lol.


Name: BRITTD25 (Signed) · Date: 10/31/07 10:20 · For: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war
I WAS CRYING FROM LAUGHING SO HARD AT THIS CHAPTER!!!! KEEP IT COMING!!

Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad it made you laugh. That was the intention.


Name: liveonluna (Signed) · Date: 10/27/07 20:39 · For: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over
YAY! Lily doesn't hate James. What an accomplishment. Now, to the real part.. the discovering of love. I also loved the part were it said I swear I saw McGonagal wipe a tear from her eye. LOL. Long way.. but still more to go [YAY].. =D

Author's Response: Yeah, don't you just love that it never seems to end...Some people that this was the ending though. I'm glad it isn't, I've got so many directions I want to go with this. Thanks for the reviews!


Name: thesmart1 (Signed) · Date: 10/27/07 11:20 · For: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over
Greaaaaat job! That last line, the tear-wiping, was soo cute. *crumples* It made me laugh. :) I love this story!! Please update really fast!

Author's Response: Thanks. Lol, I loved that line too.


Name: ginny_weasly123890 (Signed) · Date: 10/26/07 20:54 · For: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over
WRITE MORE!!!!!

Author's Response: Lol, sure.


Name: katiebell360 (Signed) · Date: 10/24/07 19:10 · For: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over
please hurry! i love how you've slowly made things better and better between them. you rock! update soon please!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm pretty bogged down with school now, I actually have about ten tests this week (they really like to see us dead), but I can't wait to write more and to hear what you all have to say.


Name: jenny b (Signed) · Date: 10/22/07 5:03 · For: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over
Well, I decided to be lazy and not review every chapter like I said I would. They're all great, though. :)

I loved this chapter! It was short and pretty calm, but I think you needed a break after everything that's been happening in this fic. I loved the ending.

Good job!

Author's Response: Gee, thanks for all the reviews. Don't be silly, it is no obligation of yours to review my chapters. I'm very glad that you do though, lol. Thanks!


Name: Rwrigley (Signed) · Date: 10/21/07 0:56 · For: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over
wheres the rest


Author's Response: On the way...


Name: Afifa (Signed) · Date: 10/20/07 15:42 · For: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over
awesome work!

Author's Response: C-:


Name: hannahabbot2007 (Signed) · Date: 10/19/07 20:32 · For: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over
Pretty good!
~ Hannah Abbott

Author's Response: thanks.


Name: I_LUV_MOONY (Signed) · Date: 10/18/07 21:57 · For: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over
Yay, romance! This was such a great chapter; I love it to pieces!

Allow me to get the nitpick out of the way, so that I may rant about my favorite parts:

His reasonless, selfless guilt was making me feel, if possible, even worse. “No, James, it’s ,i>my fault and mine alone.

Just a screwed up html tag, nothing major. :)

Hogwarts hasn’t enjoyed a juicy piece of gossip like this since…Rita Skeeter, who had graduated the previous year, had faked a pregnancy.

How did you come up with this? This is honestly so believable I could see J.K. Rowling coming up with something like it. Definitely made me laugh. :D

It was something about his arm around me. It was acting as a guilt repellent. It made me feel a little lighter. And to think, mere weeks ago, I was dragging his bum into a pudding. How strange things were…

“So, did you come up with the poem?” I found myself asking.

I could feel him laughing. “Sadly, yes. It took me three hours.”


Two birds with one stone, my friend. The first part was funny because of the bum joke, and then you made me laugh thinking about James up in his dorm with a messed up look on his face trying to come up with the poem (really makes you think, doesn't it?). Great job. :D

He scrunched his lips to one side, then the other, before saying, “Would it make you happy if I kept it?”

That's just so sweet! Reminds me of my boyfriend...*warm feeling inside* :D

Great way to end the chapter. I can't wait for more. Congratulations on the almost-anniversary. Best wishes! :D


Author's Response: Wow, what a nice review, thanks so much! Thanks for the warning about that typo. I'll fix it right away. Lol, I loved throwing Rita in...She's good for poking fun at...I loved writing the fluff probably as much as you liked reading it. But sadly, I have no boyfriend to be reminded of...all of my past realtionships have been primarily restricted to a physical aspect of things...not the kind of thing that makes you feel like that, warm and fuzzy. Well, what can I do...the past is the past... Thanks for a wonderful review!


Name: Chellaei (Signed) · Date: 10/18/07 19:29 · For: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over
Oh man! I'm in love with this story! Please keep going. It's brilliant!

Author's Response: I'm glad. Thanks.


Name: lilyevans91 (Signed) · Date: 10/17/07 20:38 · For: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over
oh, squee squee squee! i loved this chapter, all the fluff was brilliant! it makes me squirm with pleasure. very well written, i can't wait until you update! i read this entire story in one day (probably more like one hour) and i LOVE it! great job, i'm looking forward to the next installment.

Author's Response: I really, really hope to have more soon. Thanks for reviewing all of those chapters.


Name: James Jameson (Signed) · Date: 10/17/07 20:27 · For: First detention...87 more to go...
good job!

Author's Response: :-)


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