Reviewer: kittykat
Date: 12/13/07 19:22
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

sirius and sophie? LOVERS. omg. i am hoping that lily gets teased because of her dare, i thought she wouldn't have done it! i was smiling by the end of the chapter.

Author's Response: Lol, thanks for the opinion. I'm begginning to think that's what I'll do. Thanks very much for reviewing!

Reviewer: gitgit
Date: 12/13/07 18:42
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

haahhaha that was totally worth the wait . excellent job i must add ... i was laughing all through it

carrrrrrrrrrrrlos hehehe

anyway can;'t wait for the next chapter keep up with the writing :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. Can't wait to post a new chapter.

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 12/13/07 18:33
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

I love this story! The wait is okay. Good stories are always worth it!

I was smiling throughout the entire chapter. Almost every line makes me laugh. You make me see Lily in a whole different light to how I imagined her. Sheís a lot more sarcastic and cynical than I thought Ö but itís good how you didnít stereotype her.

Truth or dare Ö you gotta love that game. I played it with my friends the other day at school, because it was the last day. Thankfully, none of our dares got as bad as skinny-dipping!

This was one of my favourite chapters yet, because Lily and James are finally friends!

Jennifer



Author's Response: Lol, yeah, I love truth or dare. I'm glad you like this different Lily. I just didn't want her to be as close to perfect as can be, like in so many fics I've read. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: snowey
Date: 12/13/07 18:11
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

brillant, its funny and cute. i love how its finally in lilys point of view

Author's Response: Well, as the whole story has been from Lily's point of view, I don't really know what you mean. Thanks for reviewing, I'm really glad you like it.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 12/13/07 16:57
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

good chapter!! update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'll try.

Reviewer: Wicked_Quill
Date: 12/13/07 16:28
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

excellent chapter! I liked the part with the mexican soaps, I don't enjoy them but they are really really funny, especially if you can't speak spanish at all. s and s definatly lovers!


Author's Response: Lol, yup, they are funny. I understand it mostly, but they talk a little too fast...thanks for giving me your opinion!

Reviewer: Flobberworm93
Date: 12/13/07 16:18
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

Yay! I loved it!
If that's all I said would you think I'm a bad reviewer?
I don't care. Yay! I loved it!

Author's Response: Lol, NOT a bad reviewer. You told me what you thought. That's enough. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Passion For Prongs
Date: 12/13/07 14:37
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

Tres amusing! I'm very happy with this chapter, and it was well worth the wait!!!!!

~Passion For Prongs

Author's Response: *big grin* I'm so glad!

Reviewer: Lana Moonland
Date: 12/13/07 14:16
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

oh... I think this is my favorite fan fiction ever. It is original, well-written, funny as hell... You rock!!!

I'm brazilian, and I personally think that Mexican Soap is incredibly funny (mainly because it sucks so hard that you just have to laugh. Not to mention the dubbing...).

I just love McGonagall in this fic.

Author's Response: Oh, cool! You're brazilian too! Yay, another brazilian! Lol, sorry about that. My sister was into mexican soap for a while. She watched Rebelde. Have you heard of it? Yup, the voices taped over are the best. They're so misplaced it's hysterical! Thanks so much for reviewing, and I'm really glad you like it.

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 12/13/07 13:50
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

This was the best written chapter yet. Fantastic job!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. This was the funnest to write, aside from the food-fight.

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 12/13/07 13:44
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

I loved it! Sirius is hiliarious when drunk!

Author's Response: He's based off of one of my classmates, although I can assure you Sirius is probably a lot cuter.

Reviewer: chocaholic9330
Date: 12/13/07 13:20
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

loved it...can't wait for more... =)

Author's Response: *grins* Thanks!

Reviewer: peevesismyhero
Date: 12/10/07 15:54
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

you finally updated!!! yipee!!! loved it!

Author's Response: Yup. Can't wait to hear what you have to say!

Reviewer: katiebell360
Date: 12/07/07 21:00
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

can you please hurry up with this wonderful story? a little hanging is nice, but when you leave us hanging for months it starts to just get annoying. so please,please hurry. this is a fascinating, talented story that someone like jo could write. you really have something going here, so please continue!!!!

Author's Response: Well, the next chapter is in the queue....it was done a long time ago, but then there was a problem with my e-mail, and my beta couldn't send it...*excuses...excuses...* Lol, sorry!

Reviewer: voldy_mort
Date: 12/07/07 17:33
Chapter: fourth detention...and Pettigrew, the amazing intelect

Hee hee I like this story its funny. sorrry ofr that ridiculous review thoguh i still like it

Author's Response: What rediculous review? Thanks! Glad you like it.

Reviewer: voldy_mort
Date: 12/07/07 17:27
Chapter: Third detention...and my growing list of deranged people

This story is REALLY funny!! I absloutely love it. It's like a professional story; its so funny! yeah.


Author's Response: Lol, I'm totally flattered....I'm glad you like it so much that you're crazy enough to think that. :-)

Reviewer: patient wanderer
Date: 12/06/07 13:28
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

YAY!

Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: Weasley24
Date: 12/03/07 11:25
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

Great chapter and story. This fic is really sweet and funny at places. Well Happy First Birthday and update soon!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks!

Reviewer: luinrina
Date: 11/19/07 5:48
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

Wow, really funny and great story. Laughed a lot, especially at the beginning, when Lily was still fuming mad about James. Please continue writing, your style is fantastic. Would be pity if the story ends here.

Author's Response: Lol, yes, she is funnier when she's outraged...I'm glad you like the story. This story won't end here, but it won't be too long either...

Reviewer: pinkandgreenqt
Date: 11/17/07 12:39
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

Awesome. Is there another chapter?

Author's Response: There will be. It's being written. Thanks for reviewing!

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