Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 12/15/07 19:07
Chapter: Tenth detention...and the evil genius blossoming whithin

HA, Lily is hilarious. I loved this chapter but wished it was longer.
i say revenge takes the form of bald-James/Sirius in dressesin Great Hall. But hey, what do I know? (Don't answer that!)

Author's Response: Lol, something to do with hair is on the way. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 12/15/07 18:59
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

It was really good! It was also a little serious (no I don't mean Black) which I wasn't expecting but enjoyed.

Author's Response: Lol, I love that pun. Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 12/15/07 18:24
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

This is a great chapter, I especially liked lily's sense of humor. Are Richard and Sophie Lily's own two friends?

Author's Response: Yep, Rich and Sophie are her friends. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: GinnyTonks
Date: 12/15/07 10:59
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

that was an.....um... interesting chapter. Amusing, though. please update soon!

Author's Response: Um...okay. Didn't really know what you meant by 'interesting', but okay. I'm glad it amused you. :)

Reviewer: GinnyTonks
Date: 12/15/07 10:58
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

thatswas an...um....interesting...chapter. Amusing, though. please update soon!

Reviewer: flyingphoenix
Date: 12/14/07 23:08
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

I'm so glad Lily is happy again...and I love the coughing fits her friends go into when she wants to know what else could possibly happen! Very funny..along with McGonagall's thing for Carlos...

Author's Response: Yah, Lily is funny when she's happy too, I guess. Thanks very much for reviewing!

Reviewer: halfbloodseeker
Date: 12/14/07 21:03
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

I think this was my favorite chapter so far, I love Sirius in this chapter. So, I hope you'll update soon. One question though, how long are u planning to make this fiction?

Author's Response: Well, not so much longer...the end is not far...*tears* It'll be so sad. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: peevesismyhero
Date: 12/14/07 15:55
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

hee hee!!!! i loved it!!! truth or dare is such a great idea! and i'd forgotten how lily always signs her entries.
Lily Evans, Skinny-Dipper Extraordinaire
i love it! so totally worth the wait!

Author's Response: I'm super glad you think so. *grins* Super! Please, ignore me, it's just one of my clueless days...

Reviewer: BRITTD25
Date: 12/14/07 11:46
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

HA! LOVED IT!!! Had me laughing out loud - yet again!!! Can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: So glad you like it!

Reviewer: sorry_22
Date: 12/14/07 10:16
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

UPDATE!!!! ASAP!!!!

Author's Response: Alrighty then...

Reviewer: BRITTD25
Date: 12/14/07 10:05
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

This chapter had me laughing out loud!!! I don't think it was overdone - AT ALL!! Fantastic! Funny!! Yummy!! The only thing I didn't like was how hard-headed Lily is, to the point that you wonder why anyone would like her, but other than that, you did an EXCELLENT job on telling this stoy. Great attention to detail!!!

Author's Response: Yes, Lily IS hard headed. It's one of her faults. Although her blatant disregard to how amusing and clueless she is sort of makes up for it, in my opinion. AH well, she changes. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: the happy camper
Date: 12/14/07 8:43
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

Man, that was awesome! The dares were all great. The characters are their own people, new and different from other stories. You're FANTASTIC! It was a perfect teenage fool around. It made me laugh so much, and constantly. Lily ranting on about how she's got a disease! Priceless.

:)

Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks Ted, you're sweet. Can't wait to hear what you've got to say for all the other chapters...

Reviewer: patient wanderer
Date: 12/14/07 8:40
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

AHHHHH!!!

That was so funny!!

I LOVED drunk Sirius. And Remus, James, Sophie, Rich...Goodness, all of them! THis was such a fun chapter. Man, you've made me curious. What have you done for truth or dare? Skinny dipping! Ha! That was perfect. I love the little signs, that are now becoming BIG signs that Lily is completely smitten. LOVE it!

Don't take long to update.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Ta! You're always very flattering...lol, you love everyone. I won't take long to update this time, promise.

Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 12/14/07 3:55
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

You are maddeningly hilarious. I've been giggling to myself throughout this entire chapter but that skinny-dipping bit.. I swear, I lost it! Great, great job, as always!! I should probably add now that all of your OC's are really amazing. Normal, well-characterized, funny, believable. You are most definitely a talented writer. :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! What a lovely review! I've never thought of myself as funny...and then I wrote this. Hehe. Thanks!

Reviewer: audgepodge111
Date: 12/13/07 20:46
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

I laughed so hard my stomach actually hurt! The food fight scene was really funny! Thanks for making me laugh.

And, by the way, I LOVE James! He's so great, and, though I'm biased, I'm quite ready to bet that Terry said something highly inappropriate to him about Lily...so good for James for hitting him! :)

Author's Response: I love James too. And you'll see....muahaha! *cough* Sorry.

Reviewer: snowey
Date: 12/13/07 20:36
Chapter: Tenth detention...and the evil genius blossoming whithin

this story is... hilarious im adding you to faves

Author's Response: Yay!

Reviewer: riddiculusvampire
Date: 12/13/07 20:36
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

GREAT CHAPTER! i loved it a lot! hehe sirius sure brings life to the party when he's drunk!

by the way..Spanis IS the sexiest language ever! my parents are spanish so yeah. especially those tongue-rolling "rrr's"! HAHAHa update SOON!

Author's Response: No, there isn't anything sexier than spanish. :) I love my drunk Sirius, he was so much fun to write. Thanks!

Reviewer: lilyevans91
Date: 12/13/07 20:06
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

oh, lovely! great chapter, too short though! quick updates are the only cures to my post-breakup-from-the-epic-tale-of-the-hogwarts-food-fight syndrome. hehe, that didn't make much sense, i only mean that i need more1 these are very well written chappies, unlike this review...sry, i'm tired. but i really liked this chapter! keep on writing.

Author's Response: Lol, I liked your review, however badly written. :) I'll update soon, because of your syndrom.

Reviewer: Walna
Date: 12/13/07 20:02
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

It's so good! I loved this chapter. I liked Sirius being all crazy.

Author's Response: Yeah, me too. THanks for the review!

Reviewer: JamesNLilyLover
Date: 12/13/07 19:51
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

please...please...PLEASE update quickly. This story is so funny and amazing!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it. I'll try not to take as long this time.

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