Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 04/26/08 19:08
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

LOL. Mia, that was amazing. The grapes part cracked me up, but I'm not supposed to laugh, everyone's sleeping. Hehe.
And, is some character's name Daphne Cullen by chance or have you named her Cullen on purpose? ;) lol.
Loved the chapter. A lot. =D

Author's Response: Lol, can't believe you were the first to spot that. Nope, 'Cullen' wasn't a coincidence. But it's not exactly important either... ah well. Thanks!

Reviewer: riddiculusvampire
Date: 04/26/08 9:19
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

jeloussss!!! hshs
well Sophie and Sirius..not that much of a surprise
thanks so much for udating!!

Author's Response: You're welcome. Thanks for sticking with this story. :)

Reviewer: Tonks in disguise
Date: 04/25/08 20:58
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

I love the new chapter, I love the entire book. It's awesome. Keep up the good work and keep posting new chapters cuz i like them!

Reviewer: Tonks in disguise
Date: 04/25/08 20:57
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

I love the new chapter, I love the entire book. It's awesome. Keep up the good work and keep posting new chapters cuz i like them!

Author's Response: Alrighto. There will be a few more chapters, hope to see you around for them.,..

Reviewer: Celia_Blanche
Date: 04/25/08 19:37
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

awesome

Author's Response: Danke.

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 04/25/08 19:13
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

.....*strangles author* How dare you make me wait so long! it was pretty well worth it, though. lol.
its kind of sad that james doesn't appear to be moaning after lily anymore. we all know he probably still likes her, right, but its still a bit disappointing. the grapes made me laugh though....haha!

Author's Response: *is strangled* Goodness, can't do that anymore. Sorry. You'll see what happens... *deserves some more strangling*rn

Reviewer: Lucky_13_Girl
Date: 04/25/08 19:08
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

Very Humorus!

Author's Response: :) I am so.

Reviewer: MerrryD
Date: 04/23/08 20:31
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

It’s a relief, actually…

I'm sure it is, Lily, I'm sure it is. :)

It’s drifted somewhere out past Pluto.

haha. I love this line. It made me giggle. :D

This chapter was really good. I love how easy and comfortably the humor flows. It's very natural.

Sophie and Sirius... interesting. Just friends, eh? haha.

Grapes. I'd be more scared that they'd get smushed, than that they'd fall out actually. And not smushed because of that! My school is extremely overcrowed, and the hallways, especially the intersections are hell! Ugg... just picturing smushed grapes everywhere... and grape juice flying with every grape that got smushed. Haha. Actually, it's quite amusing. lol.

I love Lily in your fic. She's relaxed, fun, and hilarious! Not some stiff, tight-ass. I'm glad to see she's warming up to James. She almost admitted to jealous of Tamara. teehee!

Thanks for this, I really needed something light and humorous and this was prefect!

-Mere

Author's Response: Lol, thanks so much Mere! It's got to be natural of course, Lily's a natural clown. ;) Thanks! That's one of the best compliments. I hate it when things sound forced. Well, at my school we actually had tater-tots all over the ground once... it was gross...

Reviewer: acciomagic
Date: 04/23/08 20:17
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

I'm so glad you updated....I've really enjoyed this story! More please.....

Author's Response: Sure. I'll try to keep this quickly updated this time.

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 04/23/08 19:56
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

lol. That was intense. XD You still got it. Hope you continue!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks!

Reviewer: lisha
Date: 04/22/08 20:37
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

oh! i love this so far! grapes, ha priceless! update quick!

Author's Response: I'll try! And thanks very much.,

Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 04/22/08 18:45
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

haha grapes. :) Nice chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 04/22/08 18:00
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

"Queen of Nudity"... LMAO!!!! I'm so gonna do that to one of my friends and start calling her that!

Author's Response: Lol, tell me how it goes. ;)

Reviewer: LunaTheLoony
Date: 04/22/08 16:54
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

Finally! Sophie and Sirius in a broom closet! I love this story, and i really love the part about the grapes.

Author's Response: Yeah, that's exactly where they belong together... thanks!

Reviewer: Phoenix_tears08
Date: 04/22/08 15:12
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

yay yay yay finally another chapter haha!!
soph and sirius- i like it v.funny
jelousy - obviously!
it was well done in fact
grapes - first thought what the hell is this all about but hilarious all the same
this is one of my two fav stories on here i luv it ! gimme more !!!

Author's Response: Glad this is a favorite. And sorry for the wait. ):

Reviewer: Secrets4life
Date: 04/22/08 14:12
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

I am so happy you have updated!

Author's Response: I'm happy that you're happy that I updated. :)

Reviewer: AEM
Date: 04/22/08 12:53
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

this is really good and soo funny! please do loads more. you r a great writer!

Author's Response: Thanks! I hardly think I'm great in this story. But, funny will do for me. :)

Reviewer: gitgit
Date: 04/22/08 8:35
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

ahahahahah her aunt stuffed her bra with grapes ahahahahahha
ive heard of kiwis and oranges before grapes is new to me
and oooo jealous eh lily ahahhaha shes only sliped about it maybe 2 or 3 times thats it only innocently
i realy enjoyed reading the journal
i hope you update again :D

Author's Response: I'm starting chapter 13 now, so hopefully.... and thanks so much for the review. I love to know what people think!

Reviewer: DonR
Date: 04/22/08 3:23
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

Bloody hilarious!

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so.

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff
Date: 04/22/08 0:08
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

oh, I hope you update soon. This was an excellent chapter as usual. I loved the grapes OMG!!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. :)

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