Reviewer: Sainyn Swiftfoot
Date: 04/30/08 6:10
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

I'm never going to see grapes the same way again...

I couldn't stop giggling through out the entire part about the grapes! Bloody hilarious!

I also really liked Lily not admitting her own feelings- the way she almost let it out that she likes him, but then changed it at the last minute... it was really nice.

I can't believe I came to the last validated chapter... *sob*

When is the next update coming? I can't wait!

~BB

Reviewer: Sainyn Swiftfoot
Date: 04/30/08 6:00
Chapter: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

Hil. A. Ri. Ous.

I suppose why everyone's talking so cryptic and what Remus meant by "it will get worse" is that once Lily and James start dating... Or am I completely wrong?

Great chapter (as usual), very funny!

~BB

Reviewer: Sainyn Swiftfoot
Date: 04/30/08 5:38
Chapter: Twentieth detention...and I'm starting over

Yes! Yes! Yes!

Finally some true-for-good Lily/James! I'm still waiting for Lily to take revenge on Terry- but after reading this chapter, I wonder if she would.

I loved that line about how just a few weeks back lily had been trying to pull James' bum into a pudding... funny!

~BB

Reviewer: Sainyn Swiftfoot
Date: 04/30/08 5:33
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

I. Can't. Believe. Terry.

Lily is funny, cute, loyal and brave. WHY DOES HE NEED ANYBODY ELSE? I feel bad for James and Lily...

I want Lily kissing James POINTEDLY in front of Terry in the coming chapters! No, wait, a better idea, make the Marauders and Lily and all her friends play a MASSIVE trick on Terry! That boy deserves it... I was about to use a much stronger word than boy over there.

~BB

Reviewer: Sainyn Swiftfoot
Date: 04/30/08 5:22
Chapter: Seventeenth detention...Potter is the bane of my existence

Look, I know all authors would like a detailed review, with all the likes and dislikes and nitpicks, bu the next chapter is called "the truth id out", adn I read someone's comment on taht chapter by mistake, it said "How could Terry have done uch a thing", or something along that line. I cannot, and simply CANNOT wait to read teh next chapter.

This chapter was wonderful, Lily's feelings while everyone were there was very nicely explained, and... that part about tryign to run a hand through his hair was really funny. Ok, that's all.

*runs off to read next chapter*

~BB

Reviewer: LoveHarry_93
Date: 04/30/08 4:08
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

GREAT!! Update sooooooooon!! I love this story!! By the way, I love A Reason to Hope, A Reason for Beauty and The Horridly Cheerful Valentine's Day. You're a FANTASTIC author! (:

Reviewer: LoveHarry_93
Date: 04/30/08 2:29
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

One word...
FANTASTIC!!

Reviewer: Kcharles
Date: 04/29/08 18:52
Chapter: Nineteenth Detention...and the truth is out

I can't belive Terry did that! Really good chapter, almost as good as the food fight. I'm very sorry about your RL issues, and I'm happy everythings better.

This story has made me want to read all your other stories too, by the way.

~Katherine

Reviewer: Kcharles
Date: 04/29/08 17:06
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

I loved this chapter. I was reading it so fast with my mouth open so wide, and I was trying so hard to stop myself from laughing! Awesome job!

Reviewer: Sainyn Swiftfoot
Date: 04/29/08 3:21
Chapter: Sixteenth detention...and the day I was hospitalized in hell

I LOVED the part about Laureenia and Meredith! I seriously laughed there...

Again, nice chapter, James and Lily- oh so sweet!

~BB

Reviewer: Sainyn Swiftfoot
Date: 04/29/08 2:50
Chapter: Fifteenth Detention...and my first failed attempt at revenge

Hmm... Yeah, I forgot something in my review for the last chapter- I don't think Filch and Pince would have been working at Hogwarts at the Marauder Era- I mean, are Filch and Pince really that old?

About this chapter, I am fairly certain Pomfrey was not working at Hogwarts in the marauder era. Other than that, this chapter was quite good, what with Lily's plans backfiring and all.

~BB

Reviewer: Sainyn Swiftfoot
Date: 04/29/08 2:34
Chapter: Tenth detention...and the evil genius blossoming whithin

I still think Terry is hiding something... Come on, he won't be jumping to different topics just to hide the fact that he said a few bad words!

Another great chapter, I enjoyed it very much.

~BB

Reviewer: Sainyn Swiftfoot
Date: 04/29/08 2:23
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

Nice! I can't help but think that Terry has something sinister going on...

Just a small nitpick:

I never thought I’d see the day they would forsake their Galleons worth of manicures purposelessly flinging stake into the air.

I'm not too sure about this, but do you mean "flinging steak"?

On the whole, another wonderful chapter, I recommended this story on the beta boards!

The plot thickens...

~BB

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 04/28/08 19:47
Chapter: Fifth detention...and the colossal food war

*rolling on the floor laughing* HILARIOUS! LOVE IT! OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!tHIS IS YOUR BEST CHAPTER! I SO WISH I COULD'VE BEEN THERE!

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 04/28/08 19:36
Chapter: fourth detention...and Pettigrew, the amazing intelect

I'll review just for you!
It was wonderul, wonderful! Anticipating next chapter!!!

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 04/28/08 19:30
Chapter: Third detention...and my growing list of deranged people

HA HA!!!!!!!!! Hilarious! I love it!!!!!

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 04/28/08 19:25
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

Luv it! Keep writing!

Reviewer: Sainyn Swiftfoot
Date: 04/28/08 12:03
Chapter: fourth detention...and Pettigrew, the amazing intelect

Oh, how could you leave it at that point? I'm sorry for the short review, I just HAVE to move on to the next chapter and find out what Lily saw!

Good chapter, I like Lily's portrayal!

~BB

Reviewer: Sainyn Swiftfoot
Date: 04/27/08 7:46
Chapter: Third detention...and my growing list of deranged people

Again, wonderful.

I especially liked the scene between Lily and Sirius- I just watched a crime serial and it reminded me how much Lily was like a detective/agent/whatever, and Sirius was the cool murderer.

Anyway, back to the story. I really liked this chapter, I'm just itching to read the next chapter!

~BB

Author's Response: Wow, Lily a detective... funny thought. Thanks again for the review BB!

Reviewer: Sainyn Swiftfoot
Date: 04/27/08 7:39
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

Nice, Mia! I was searching for a humour story to read, and I heard that you got another chapter added to this recently, so I though "Why not check it out?"

So that is why I'm here, reading this thoroughly AWESOME story!

~BB

Author's Response: Yay for the Most Recent feature! :)

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