Reviewer: Garbage
Date: 07/29/08 4:19
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

Haha! Man, I love this fic. It's refreshing to not have so much drama surround Lily and James' relationship. Hope you post again soon! It's been months!

Reviewer: bkchic00177
Date: 07/23/08 0:22
Chapter: Tenth detention...and the evil genius blossoming whithin

After reading 5 chapters I think that Lily complains about James to much. Like I know she is supposed to hate him and all but I think it is said so much that it takes the room of other things that could be said like about the other characters. Other than that I like and I think it interesting.

Reviewer: padfoot_lives_here
Date: 07/19/08 2:21
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

PLEASE update! I really like te way the story is going- you have an excellent plot! Just update more often!

Reviewer: TuMBLeWeeD
Date: 07/12/08 23:46
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

Teehee. Very well written, two thumbs up.

Reviewer: munlight_12
Date: 07/09/08 10:13
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

I love ur story. It's so creative and fun so far.
Ur writing is very descriptive and interesting.I am loving ur story
Mun

Reviewer: darn_snitch
Date: 07/05/08 14:21
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

gr8 story
next chapter fasst!

Reviewer: True Slytherin
Date: 07/03/08 13:23
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

Oh man. I think that this is a really great fanfic of Lily/James. It shows her hate for him a little strongly, but otherwise it then blossoms into some budding romance. Haha sounded better in my head.. But I was rather sad when you discontinued updating this story on FictionAlley, Astronomy Tower thus forcing me to come to Mugglenet once again. But girls stuffing their bras with grapes??! Most absurd as most would use tissues, or if you want from Paramore's 'Misery Bussiness' MV then some gel pack rubber things haha. Sophie and Sirius was something I could see already happening, and the jealousy forming for Lily of Tamara was only to be expected when Rich asked the question as any girl falling for someone who had been with that person previously gets asked a bit of a guy's question and personal question where the answer is said.

Reviewer: lilyrox
Date: 06/23/08 9:16
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

I've been laughing this whole way through. I mean grapes????? It's the funniest thing I've ever heard! Your fic has made me LOL so much, my mom has been asking me why I've been wheezing so much.

Reviewer: myprinceonafirebolt
Date: 06/08/08 4:14
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

So... it was worth the wait^^

Reviewer: vachu_adi
Date: 06/08/08 0:55
Chapter: First detention...87 more to go...

i can't review each nd every chapter separately........ but i can say this abt all of them..............

there wasnt one i didnt like.......
u rocked thm all..........
keep it up.........
waiting 4 ur next chapter
KEEP ROCKING IT!!!!!!

Reviewer: Nattycutie14
Date: 06/07/08 2:56
Chapter: fourth detention...and Pettigrew, the amazing intelect

Great!

Reviewer: Nattycutie14
Date: 06/07/08 2:51
Chapter: Third detention...and my growing list of deranged people

Cool story!
I loved it!

Reviewer: scruffy100
Date: 06/06/08 4:29
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

Please please pretty please update VERY soon!!!!!!

Reviewer: PolkaDotted
Date: 06/05/08 17:53
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

best chapter yet :)
keep it up.

Reviewer: MandyBlack
Date: 06/05/08 15:51
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

This story is great!! :) when are you going to update?!! I can't wait for next chapter! ha ha the grape-filled bra thing is hilarious!! :D

Reviewer: superpotterfan1314
Date: 05/31/08 9:56
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

GRAPES? what the hey? SIRIUS AND SOPHIE? JEALOUSY? THE HEY? so classical though

Reviewer: butterbeer_HaNgOvEr
Date: 05/30/08 17:30
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

i'm so glad you updated! i know you've had this chapter up for awhile, but i've been busy with school (trying not to fail algebra) today was the last day, so i rewarded myself with reading this! great job! More por favor! and soon too!

Reviewer: jameslily11
Date: 05/04/08 12:10
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

grapes.......jealousy........
HAHAHAHA
just read the whole story through
most hilarious thing EVER
witty AND funny...at the the same time
cant wait to hear more from you

Reviewer: lilyevans91
Date: 04/30/08 16:00
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

great addition to the story! i had to reread the whole thing over again to remember what had happened, but it was worth it. i love how totally clueless lily is--i don't think anyone could be that clueless in real life, but in this story, it works. it's very funny, and i like how all of your characters are different yet defined. good job, update quickly please!

Reviewer: Sainyn Swiftfoot
Date: 04/30/08 6:10
Chapter: Twenty-sixth detention... and I am NOT jealous!

I'm never going to see grapes the same way again...

I couldn't stop giggling through out the entire part about the grapes! Bloody hilarious!

I also really liked Lily not admitting her own feelings- the way she almost let it out that she likes him, but then changed it at the last minute... it was really nice.

I can't believe I came to the last validated chapter... *sob*

When is the next update coming? I can't wait!

~BB

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