This is so touching! I love it. A real tearjerker with lots of laughs as well. Brillaint and good job!
the kiss happened too fast,,,, slow down
i don't know what i think of the ending. but its not fluss, which makes me happy because i hate flussy endings. but the story was really good
i know now i love your story, its so good!
thats so sad, i mean hermione is in love with draco malfoy and he loves her too. but they cant be together, any ways yoyr story is really good so far!!
thats so good i really LOVE this story
I HATE UNHAPPY ENDINGS BUT I LOOOOVVVEEEEE UR STORY
omgosh that chapter made me cry *wipe wipe* but i loved it!
i love this story sooooo much!!!!!!!! i couldn't stop reading it, you're such a great writer!!!
this is one of the most beautiful, hearbreaking, yet lovely fic i have read in a long time....
i thought the story was.. well, cute. i despise the word, but it seems the most appropriate. slightly too fluffy, similar to romeo and juliet. i mean draco and hermione didn't really spend much time together before and most likely couldn't develop an intimate friendship just like that. and draco's letter, although beautifully written, it's like he just became madly in love with her because he realized that hermione's beautiful...
on another note, i liked many ideas you put into the story. i adored what draco said about the white rose and i especially liked the epilogue told by harry.
but why was nathan not killed? it's peculiar...was he destined to be the new boy who lived to be raised in the care of the former..
Very Very Very good, it certainly made me cry. You are extremely talented!
Though Im normally a Ginny/harry, Hermione/Ron girl, i htought this story was really gd, and touching!
omg! that actually brought tears to my eyes...that was a great fan fic. and an even better ending
Omg! this chapter was not boring! i thought that the speech they gave at graduation was awesome
oOo i have chills and everything...this story is awesome so far..::claps::
i love it! but i have one question...how did the guy that brought the gift to Draco vanish? he couldn't have apparated...
this fic was so sweet...they loved eachother so much...and they died. *tear tear* i though it was very touching and effective how u had that thing with Harry at the end. it wrapped things up really well but not abruptly. i feel like crying....10/10
deja vu deja vu DEJA VU! omg...the last part si soooooo sad! this was an amazing story, and i'm now going on to read the sweetest sin. :)