Reviews For Step By Step
Reviewer: Lady of the Lake
Date: 04/06/07 12:05
Chapter: Step By Step

Do you really think he'll die...*sob*

Author's Response: No, I don't...he better not!!! :(

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 01/04/07 6:58
Chapter: Step By Step

i didn't ask how old you were...i asked HOW u were DOING *laughs*...i know about the internet safety thing but whos gonna come to me in lebanon? FUnny, really, theres like no law here..if this was new york, i wouldnt be able to put my age, my mom would kill ur new year was good:-)

Author's Response: Oh...that was dumb of me. 0_o I think it was because of the fact that I was in school and had to hurry up and read/respond or the teacher would see where I was...anyway, great to hear from you again, buddy!!! I'm going to review you next...after I finish watching this next Naruto episode...Yes, I am obsessed...TTYL, D.W.

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 01/03/07 15:36
Chapter: Step By Step

hiii again! i just saw ur summary! looks pretty good *nods approvingly*...can't wait for it to come out!

Thanks for mentioning me in ur bio, JJ!

How are you? And how was you new year?

Gotta go to bed now! (it's 11:36 here!)


Author's Response: Hey!! Nice to hear from you again!!! I'm great, and my new year was lots of fun. I ate 3 pieces of pizza and almost barfed. About my age. I really don't like to give it out, but I'm older than you. Sorry, just internet safety reasons. TTYL!! --Dragon_Warrior

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 12/29/06 14:29
Chapter: Step By Step

oh its so cool ur one of those people who are right there between two horoscopes...coool :-0.....
Mosaic as in glass mosaic lol.
uh,..;lol depending on what frield were playin in phys ed, we run from 3-5 laps every class as a wam-up...only then did i realize haw out of shape i am...*sigh*....

Hmm....Ok, i have nothing to say. Oh, eid is tomorrow, yay! thinking about what i want as a present. I hope u had/having a good hanukkah and i hope ur doing good with ur shopping!

....*cough*...maybe ill find sumthing to say on new years eve.

Yay im a mouseling! :-P

Author's Response: Hee hee...mousey. Mosaic making sounds really cool...It'd be so awesome to try run laps too? I'm not that in shape, but I can handle it...mostly...ok, I have problems, but so what? ;-) I'll review you after new years and help you converse. Now, the Master must meditate. Begone! *assumes lotus position and hums* --J.K.

Author's Response: Oh yeah, Happy Eid!!!

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 12/29/06 3:36
Chapter: Step By Step

*envy envy*...yeeeees massstterrr :-) u but gifts for new year? i just like to throw parties and drink apple cider and watch the ball drop in times square (on tv :-D)..

My favorite food is this dish from my mom's side of the family, called macaroni pie. Ironically, it's not a pie. Its like macaroni and cheese put in the over so that the top can get crispy. But its goooood...i hardly get to eat it.

My last math class: boring as usual. Didn't learn much because it was on the day before vacation started.

Lamp Shades: sorry, they ain't all they're cracked up to be. I mean the shape...its just so mocking. *shakes head*

Now: What do u think of phys. ed.? (im okay at it, im goooooood at playing goalie in soccer)
Have you ever tried mosaic?
(yup, took a class in it. Loved it)
When's your birthday?
(February 3rd, 1994)

Jeesh. I hope this isn't spamming.
Oh yea, i didn't read ur chapter fic. I dunno, there's vey few that i do. Maybe i'll start eading it. And ill makde sure to read ur next one.


Author's Response: Good work, grasshopper. I promote you to mouseling. ;-) Yeah, those lampshades...rascally devils, they are... Phy Ed, you ask? Well, every day we have to run laps around the gym for a looooong time...and if you don't run you get in trouble...those whips really sting...jk. I like swimming and tennis, soccer's ok. Horseback riding rocks, but we don't do it in school. Phooey. Mosaic I have never tried, unless you're talking about paper. It sounds like fun, though. Interesting class. My bday is Nov 22, I'm either a Scorpio or a Sagittarius depending on who you ask. I call myself a Sagittarius, though. ...I hope we're not spamming either...My chapter fic is Lily/James, I dunno if you like that sort of new fic is next gen, check my bio for the summary. Till next time, J.K.

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 12/28/06 12:16
Chapter: Step By Step i know how hard it is for you to review me.

How are you? Have you gotten all you wanted for hanukkah? hope ya did. Eid is on the 30th, i think, and im still thinking about what i want :-).....

So...erm.....are u gonna submit anything else when the que re-opens?

Sorry, thats the best i can do. You must teach me how u find things to say. *takes out notepad*

S.K. ;-)

Author's Response: Now, young grasshopper, listen to the master teach you the ways of conversation. *pauses so that you can ooh and ahh* Now, you might like to start by answering questions asked before, and then ask your own. You might ask about the other person's favorite food, or how their math class went, or debate about how good a lampshade really is. Now then. Well, for Hanukkah I got lotsa little stuff, and in our house, we celebrate New Year's kind of like Christmas (don't ask). I'm going bonkers getting everyone gifts. When the queue re-opens, I'm submitting "The Declaration of Independence." If you're interested, I'll post the summary on my bio or something. It's a chapter story, but I don't think you've read my other one, have you? So, grasshopper, observe the question asking stage: So, what's your favorite food? Mine's ramen noodles. Yum! How did your last math class go? Mine was boring. The one before it was ok, though, because I was put in a group with a couple of funny guys. What is your opinion of lampshades? I mean, are they really all that they're cracked up to be? TTYL! --JJ, conversation Master.

Author's Response: Hah! Are you insanely jealous of my amazing conversation skills?

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 12/25/06 2:32
Chapter: Step By Step

*tsk tsk*...J.K!! i put up a new poem and i was so much anticipating ur review! Just inviting u to read it now! called 'The Sky Lament'...So..u dont celebrate christmas either? :-)'s eid for me in a few days...

Happy Holidays,

Author's Response: Yay! I was waiting to hear from you...yeah, I don't celebrate Christmas. It's Hannukah and then we celebrate New Year's like Christmas...pretty cool...anyway, can't wait to see your poem! I should be checking...naughty me!! Review....incoming!

Reviewer: annonCD
Date: 12/06/06 5:18
Chapter: Step By Step

wow...that's awsome.............. I think that the last line though,should be
Step by step by step...........instead of Step by step,
I can see
Hes not really gone.

Author's Response: I'll think about it. Interesting idea...Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 12/05/06 22:17
Chapter: Step By Step

Very good. It had avery nice flow. I just realized that there isn't many people who review poems. Oh well. This is really good. It shows the emotions very well.

Author's Response: Yeah, poems don't get so many reviews. That is why each one counts double! Thank you! :-)

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 12/03/06 1:21
Chapter: Step By Step

awwwwwww. It's so sad!!! Really good, though!

Author's Response: Thanks, I did warn you! :-)

Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 12/02/06 7:27
Chapter: Step By Step

oh dear one of my favorite poets..THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!! .. beautiful and sad! still waiting for my writers block to go away before i have a go at a new poem! u think tylenol could fix it ;-)?..anyway that was really great! i do hope u continue the good work! uve been an auhor for about 2 months and uve made more works on this site than i have! BRAVO!!....anyways it was fantastical as usual, 10/10....


Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!!!! I am sooo happy you reviewed this one!! Hm...about the tylenol...personally, I think smearing vapor rub on your headd might work...clear out those cobwebs...JK of course. Anyway, thanks for the review! You're one of my fave poets too!! J.K.

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 12/02/06 3:06
Chapter: Step By Step

I know what you mean by "it's not the greatest"; the line structure is kind of annoying. However, I liked it anyway.

Author's Response: what do you mean? I'll change it if I can, but I have no clue what you're talking about. Glad you liked it, though!

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