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Reviewer: snitchette
Date: 12/13/06 3:16
Chapter: Chapter 2: A Bitter Woman

a story ends another begins. you know with fair ex you make me like Snape whereas he wasn't one of my favourite character before. but now he is and this beginning is extremely interesting. I'm waiting the next impatiently

Author's Response: Well, this is a slightly darker and spookier Snape...

Reviewer: VQuagmire
Date: 12/11/06 20:18
Chapter: Chapter 2: A Bitter Woman

Excellent chapter!
Pendragon, no doubt taken from the books. I still have yet to read those...

This Madame Pendragon will never be a match to the wondrous Severus Snape, however ;]

Keep up the excellent work!

Author's Response: hmmm...this particular Pendragon is taken from the Arthurian legends--Uther Pendragon was Arthur's father. I always loved the name Uther. It has such a linebackerish quality to it. My hubby wouldn't let me name either of my boys Uther, though, so I only got to do Pendragon on my fanfic. Sigh. Men.

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 12/11/06 16:18
Chapter: Chapter 2: A Bitter Woman

Good job! Madam Pendragon is very intriguing. I still want to know how Harry came to be Head of Slytherin. Since the story seems to be more of Snape's tale, will you be going into that particular tale? If not, I will keep asking until you tell. :-D Looking forward to the next part! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: I hadn't planned on it, but your comment got me thinking, actually. I may get to it later on.

Reviewer: Elaine Lahey
Date: 12/03/06 12:24
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Bitter Man

Excellent, most excellent.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 12/03/06 11:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Bitter Man

Hi there! Very interesting start. You did a great job with Snape's character, and Professor McGonagall as well. You made it believable that she would hire Snape after all that had happened, and fifty years in Azkaban to boot. You also made Snape's reasons for returning very valid. I am intrigued by the other little comments you dropped here and there - so Lupin came back to teach DADA? And Harry is Head of Slytherin? That last is fascinating - will you be exploring it more? I noticed that this is not completed; I am curious how it will turn out for Snape, whether he will be accepted or rejected. You write very well, I am glad I stopped to read this as I scrolled down the recents list - great job and good luck as you continue! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thanks! This is a bit different for me--low on humor, high on angst. but I had an idea to explore and unlike a normal person, I couldn't just write a stinkin' drabble, I had to go and give it a setting...oh well.

Reviewer: VQuagmire
Date: 12/03/06 11:29
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Bitter Man

Brilliant.

Another amazing story by the talented Fawkes.

Keep up the good work :]

Author's Response: *blush* Thanks!

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